https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz en-us 2021-01-24 17:56:46 UTC 2021-05-21 16:51:34 UTC hello@padlet.com usictech https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1458330263 2021-04-26 07:50:29 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1458330263 usictech https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1524130176 https://drive.google.com/file/d/1gfharlqNvxuOyMNOw3Hzo_dmow2fZpFI/view?usp=sharing ]]> 2021-05-14 10:34:57 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1524130176 https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547166787 1.The connection between scections should be natural
2.Use citation in presentation
3.Constantly changing speech rate]]> 2021-05-21 09:48:20 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547166787 https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547167130 1. Add more in-depth critique/ evaluation of individual sources
2. add academic benefit
3. add why choices for research everything in methodology section and give a reason]]> 2021-05-21 09:48:38 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547167130 jlin572 https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547168164 1.sound confident and enthusiastic
2. with some key literatures
3. Justify everything in the methodology section with a reason ]]> 2021-05-21 09:49:28 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547168164 https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547168284 1.Objective must be clear
2.Justify enveything in methodology section with an explanation and then reason why suitble for research question
3. Needs in depth critique of 2 or 3 individual sources.]]> 2021-05-21 09:49:31 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547168284 https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547168356 1.  more complex in key L and give a critique 
2.  In the aspect of benefit, the significance of academia and the further development of future research should be expanded
3.  Explain why the methods used to collect and analyze data are useful/appropriate for my research

]]> 2021-05-21 09:49:34 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547168356 https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547168381 1. Research gap need to be always mentioned.
2. The methodology section should be more clear.
3. Value and benefit should be more details.]]> 2021-05-21 09:49:36 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547168381 https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547168700 1.Add more critical details
2. Clear research objectives
3.Add more details about current research and previous research]]> 2021-05-21 09:49:51 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547168700 https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547169503 1. cut down the content  of outline
2. add more details of my methodology and  clarify the research question
3. use coherence sentences to divide my potential benefits of academic significance and non academic significance.]]> 2021-05-21 09:50:30 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547169503 https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547169890 1.  explain and critique in-depth
2.  use linking words
3. make objective clear

]]> 2021-05-21 09:50:48 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547169890 https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547170498 1 confident and enthusiastic
2 explain ethics
3 introduce myself]]> 2021-05-21 09:51:14 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547170498 https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547171685 1、Accurate pronunciation and fluent presentation
2、Make slideshows more concise and clear
3、Clearly articulated and enthusiastic language]]> 2021-05-21 09:52:10 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547171685 https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547171830 1Add content to the background
2more specific on values and benefits
3make objectives more clearly]]> 2021-05-21 09:52:18 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547171830 https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547172547 1. link the objective and aims more close
2. give more detail about the example literature (explain, critique)
3. better reasons for the methdology choice]]> 2021-05-21 09:52:54 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547172547 https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547175198 1. Critique is essential for literature review section
2.In  methodology part, coding will be added.
3. Timing will be noted ]]> 2021-05-21 09:54:57 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547175198 https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547176719 1.  need to critique the sources in literature review
2. add more detail in methodology
3. repeat the research gap]]> 2021-05-21 09:56:01 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/456nxwpomy3eqppz/wish/1547176719