https://padlet.com/nlederer/44wdcehe4rw7 Dear student, please write the name of your partner in the beginning of your feedback. Then proceed to comment on your partner's resume. You should use your notes from How To Write A Resume - Our Top 5 Resume Tips That Will Get You The Interview Video when assessing your partner's work. Good luck with your task! I am sure, you will do amazing! en-us 2018-11-05 01:06:16 UTC 2025-12-23 15:24:00 UTC hello@padlet.com qiyanfan https://padlet.com/nlederer/44wdcehe4rw7/wish/302390770 I think you did really well on your resume and it follows the five tips mentioned in the video. I like the verb you use in your resume, like initiated, differentiated, analyze. However, it is better for you to bold the university name, and add references of your company to make your working experience more credible. 
(From Qiyan)]]> 2018-11-09 01:18:59 UTC https://padlet.com/nlederer/44wdcehe4rw7/wish/302390770 qiyanfan https://padlet.com/nlederer/44wdcehe4rw7/wish/302391793 After viewing your resume, I think you did really well on your resume, which follows the tips in  the video. It is better for you bold the computer, language under the additional skills. Based on the fifth tips, it is necessary for people to consider getting professional help, so it is better to add some related information. For example, add information about your company, your director, etc.

(Qiyan)]]> 2018-11-09 01:23:51 UTC https://padlet.com/nlederer/44wdcehe4rw7/wish/302391793 ziyueh https://padlet.com/nlederer/44wdcehe4rw7/wish/302397032 Your resume follows the instruction and the video guidelines which proves that you  prepare for the class. It would be better if you can talk more about the working experience and on campus experience. (miranda)]]> 2018-11-09 01:45:02 UTC https://padlet.com/nlederer/44wdcehe4rw7/wish/302397032 https://padlet.com/nlederer/44wdcehe4rw7/wish/302398986 Your resume follows the five tips well on the video. I like the verb you used in your resume, such as coordinated, represented, provided. It would be better if you put some credible support for you resume based on the fifth tips in the video.

(Amanda)]]> 2018-11-09 01:49:53 UTC https://padlet.com/nlederer/44wdcehe4rw7/wish/302398986 https://padlet.com/nlederer/44wdcehe4rw7/wish/302399673 Your resume looks pretty well and follows the five tips from the video. However, it is better for you to make you resume more concise, within one page. Per tips from the video, candidates should keep the design as simple as possible.

(Amanda)]]> 2018-11-09 01:51:57 UTC https://padlet.com/nlederer/44wdcehe4rw7/wish/302399673