https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas 1. Choose a line(s) from either page 6, 35, or 49 that contains a poetic device (imagery, metaphor, simile, personification, hyperbole, alliteration, onomatopoeia) that stands out to you for any reason. Record /type the line(s) in AWE. 2. Then, underneath the line(s) in AWE, evaluate the line(s) you have chosen. What does this line(s) add to the poem/scene AND to the story overall? en-us 2018-04-19 00:12:20 UTC 2025-11-04 19:14:50 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259926381 !) "It was in the low forties today. Brrr. I like it hot. Sweat dripping down. My right arm as loose as an old sock" (Fehler 6).

2) This is a good simile. This line from page 6 doesn't really add much to the story overall because it really just doesn't apply to anything besides this scene particularly. The way that the  simile adds to the scene is showing that the pitcher likes it when his arm is able to be loose so he can pitch better, but it is colder outside so he can't get as loose as he wants to.]]> 2018-05-11 13:04:34 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259926381 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259926384 1"you can't go undefeated unless you you win first." (Fehler 6)
2 this is a good ]]> 2018-05-11 13:04:34 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259926384 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259926740 1 "' An excuse is like trying to patch an amputated arm with a Band-Aid'"(Fehler 6)
2 This is a good simile. This line adds to the story by telling us how the Oak Gove Coach feels about his players making excuses to make up for their playing.  He wants his players to take responsibility for how they play.]]> 2018-05-11 13:05:37 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259926740 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259947494 1) Until then, most of us hadn't thought much about casualties. it was as if they were just numbers in a history book. not real people. we were all going to live forever. Right? (Fehler 49)

2) This is a good example of personification. People like Andy says that people have forgotten them so much that they are just like numbers in a history book. People don't understand that when someone like luke gets hurt, you should try to see him and not just forget him like we all forget the people in history books.]]> 2018-05-11 13:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259947494 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259947536 1" An excuse is a crutch for losers" and " An excuse is like trying to patch an amputated arm with a Band-Aid."
2. this is a simile because it shows that excuses is somethings that losers use, and when they use them the coaches get mad because they hate excuses. ]]> 2018-05-11 13:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259947536 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259947658 1.."you can't go undefeated unless you win the first one"(Fehler 6).

2.. this adds to the story by telling us that you have to you have to start something to be able to finish it . ]]> 2018-05-11 13:56:13 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259947658 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259947676 1 "I'm in center field, a sea of green all around me" (fehler 5)

2 This is a good metaphor because it is comparing the grass to the sea. ALso it is showing his perspective and what he thinks when he is out in the field with grass all around him]]> 2018-05-11 13:56:14 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259947676 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259989215 1."It was in the low forties today. Brrr. I like it hot. sweat dripping down. my right arm as loose as an old sock" ( Fehler 6).

2.this simile adds a lot to the poem because it shows that Luke is a good pitcher and that he can pitch for a long time. this simile adds to the whole story because it makes the story seem weird that he refers to his as loose as an old sock it is just weird.]]> 2018-05-11 15:40:45 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259989215 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259989234 1.  "I didn't try to explain the baseball's a game, not life or death. At least it shouldn't be"(Fehler 50).

2. This adds to the scene because he just gave up his whole career being a baseball pitcher because of the guilt he feels. It might add to the story overall because he was their best pitcher and it might change the way Compton's team plays. ]]> 2018-05-11 15:40:47 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259989234 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259989264 1."coach has a saying"you cant go undefeated unless you win the first one"


2. you have to start off winning to go all the way.]]> 2018-05-11 15:40:50 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259989264 schwcay68 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259989399 1.) "Until then, most of us hadn't thought much about casualties"(Fehler 49).

2.)This shows an example of personification. People say that other people have forgotten them so much that they're just like numbers in a history book.]]> 2018-05-11 15:41:10 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/259989399 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/260022724 1. "When the doctor comes into the waiting room,
his face has the look of death.
There isn't even a hint of a smile" (Fehler 35).

2. This is a example of a metaphor. These lines mean that Luke's eye was really beaten up that the doctor was shocked and concern. This adds a lot to the story because Luke's eye might never be alright agian and he wouldn't be able to play baseball because he can't see, so it would affect the rest of the book.]]> 2018-05-11 17:07:18 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/260022724 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/43y70ciaxbas/wish/260025024 1."I'll take credit for luke's nickname: The Wizard oh, yeah.
I started calling him that 'cause he's a wizard with the mitt i've known him since fifth grade and the times i've seen him drop, even in practice, (Fehler 7)


2.this shows an example of personification because he luke catches the ball so much and he rarely ever drops it and they call him a wizard because it like magic 



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