https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv Leave a detailed note for Noor after her presentation! en-us 2017-04-04 18:14:34 UTC 2025-10-08 12:53:31 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164701810 This was very well written and despite it being very sad, it was very inspiring. I love that instead of making her feel guilty and lose herself, you made her stronger for what she wanted.]]> 2017-04-04 18:15:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164701810 https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164706448 The story was written with great word choice and the in depth details made it easy to imagine what went on with the speaker's life. Object was made and distressed with fire and dirt which the dirt referred to a part in the story. ]]> 2017-04-04 18:28:40 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164706448 https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164706952 It was a well written essay and it is an issue that probable to occur in our modern world.
I like the meaning behind the why she chose this peice.
I also like the sonogram that was created and was seen really .]]> 2017-04-04 18:30:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164706952 https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164710201 The story is realistic but also creative. The story was intense and dramatic. The picture was well created and thought out.]]> 2017-04-04 18:40:32 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164710201 https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164711747 This story was so detailed, it was so intense. I think you did a really good job with it. ]]> 2017-04-04 18:46:12 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164711747 wattsjas000 https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164712428 Oooo, you said "sex". Wait can you not tell the military that your pregnant so you can't be drafted? Your story was extreamly creative and sad, I was not prepared for that. I loved how you used women's body rights as such a blunt topic in your story. The sonagram is also very sad and beautiful, which reflects the story. ]]> 2017-04-04 18:48:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164712428 figuejas000 https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164712501 This story deals with dark and heavy themes, which add to the realism. This story shows the personal sacrifices that people have to make in order to follow her dreams. ]]> 2017-04-04 18:48:59 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164712501 https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164715115 The piece that was presented is the most interesting by far. I liked how the narrator got pregnant and then got an abortion before she went to war and keeps the sonogram as a safe blanket.]]> 2017-04-04 18:57:41 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164715115 https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164717229 This story is formatted well. It is in an order that just flows very nicely. This is a very creative idea, and it is very thought provoking. We don't always think of how much a soldier gives up in the process of going to war. ]]> 2017-04-04 19:05:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164717229 https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164720543 I love this story! Not only is it well written, but you were so creative in it. You provided such a unique point of view of soldiers by that of a woman who prioritized herself above the men in her life. Since abortion was what she wanted, I'm glad she had the strength to do it and to not regret her decision because of her boyfriend. ]]> 2017-04-04 19:17:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164720543 https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164720874 This project is overall one of the most creative I believe. The decision to do a sonogram is possibly the most unique that could have been done. The story is done exceptionally well, and I am impressed.]]> 2017-04-04 19:18:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/43oc88p8fncv/wish/164720874