https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2 Please write two different notes about what parts of your speech with which you need the most help en-us 2017-01-29 17:37:50 UTC 2017-02-01 16:19:22 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150409429 needs to flow..have character....have a light mood...]]> 2017-01-30 22:55:12 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150409429 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150409508 include more facts... ESPECIALLY IN THE PHYSICAL portion...]]> 2017-01-30 22:55:59 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150409508 hkim8270 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150429417 I need more help with staying on one point during my writing without going off track and also on having a clear point. I also over explain things in confusing ways.]]> 2017-01-31 03:30:59 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150429417 dwel1700 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150618839 I need help extending my speech and making it longer.]]> 2017-01-31 17:43:24 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150618839 dwel1700 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150619267 I need help appealing the readers/listeners in my introduction.]]> 2017-01-31 17:44:31 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150619267 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150706933 I need help getting the reader's attention in my introduction.]]> 2017-01-31 22:28:46 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150706933 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150707118 I need help adding more opinions in my conclusions.]]> 2017-01-31 22:30:05 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150707118 emce3600 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150709637 I need help on elaborating on the topics in each of my paragraphs.]]> 2017-01-31 22:49:42 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150709637 emce3600 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150709755 I need help on only putting facts or opinions in my speech that support my thesis.]]> 2017-01-31 22:50:53 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150709755 mghe2260 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150710486 I need help on extending the key points in my speech.]]> 2017-01-31 22:58:01 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150710486 mghe2260 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150710567 I need help adding more opinions within my speech.]]> 2017-01-31 22:58:45 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150710567 jera1260 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150711972 I need help adding more pathos in my closing paragraph.

]]> 2017-01-31 23:11:29 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150711972 jera1260 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150712024 I need help with a better title.]]> 2017-01-31 23:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150712024 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150712951 2017-01-31 23:21:34 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150712951 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150712954 I need help with making a better title.]]> 2017-01-31 23:21:36 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150712954 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150713039 I need help making my conclusion more appealing to listeners.]]> 2017-01-31 23:22:41 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150713039 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150713766 I need help focusing on one, main topic and making it flow]]> 2017-01-31 23:31:08 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150713766 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150714391 I need help using more pathos. ]]> 2017-01-31 23:38:21 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150714391 dsoo6610 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150716690 I need more help in using transitions for paragraghs, making seem more like a persuasive piece rather than a biography, and making my piece it longer, and for the most part trying to find a better thesis statement. ]]> 2017-02-01 00:04:28 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150716690 aleb8600 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150717248 I need a better title]]> 2017-02-01 00:12:51 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150717248 aleb8600 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150717295 I need to make it a page because it is too long even though I've already cut a lot :(

]]> 2017-02-01 00:13:42 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150717295 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150717921 In need help using pathos throughout my speech]]> 2017-02-01 00:23:25 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150717921 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150718011 I need help with a better ending ]]> 2017-02-01 00:24:44 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150718011 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150718031 I need help hooking the readers in the first paragraph.]]> 2017-02-01 00:25:04 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150718031 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150718147 I need help making the information part more interesting.]]> 2017-02-01 00:26:39 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150718147 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150718556 Need help on making intro interesting and better hook.]]> 2017-02-01 00:31:57 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150718556 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150718671 Need help on persuading and providing a reason for people to care and take action.]]> 2017-02-01 00:33:05 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150718671 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150730107 I need help with making a better, more interesting, satisfying conclusion.]]> 2017-02-01 02:34:45 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150730107 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150730217 I need help with a better title.]]> 2017-02-01 02:36:13 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150730217 kshi7370 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150730275 I need help with making the conclusion have a lasting ending on the reader

]]> 2017-02-01 02:37:04 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150730275 kshi7370 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150730541 I need help with making a good title]]> 2017-02-01 02:40:37 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150730541 kshi7370 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150730667 I need help on adding extra sentences that flow in my paragraphs that aren't facts.]]> 2017-02-01 02:42:19 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150730667 hkim8270 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150731127 I need help on making the sentences connect and flow together. Also on shortening paragraphs.]]> 2017-02-01 02:48:45 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150731127 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150731657 I need help on adding more sentences and lengthening some paragraphs.]]> 2017-02-01 02:57:43 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150731657 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150731835 I need help making my speech flow better.]]> 2017-02-01 03:00:31 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150731835 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150732915 I need help with a more interesting introduction and also on making all my sentences connect to eachother.]]> 2017-02-01 03:15:24 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150732915 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150737728 Help with conclusion, and summarizing my speech in last paragraph]]> 2017-02-01 04:13:27 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150737728 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150737789 I need some help with staying on the main topic, and not getting off track in my speech.]]> 2017-02-01 04:14:17 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150737789 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150739263 I need help w/ staying on topic]]> 2017-02-01 04:37:09 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150739263 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150739314 Necesito ayuda with reinforcing my topic and not making it dry and boring]]> 2017-02-01 04:37:49 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150739314 stho9060 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150810888 I need help hooking the reader in the first paragraph ]]> 2017-02-01 13:10:56 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150810888 stho9060 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150811413 I also need help on making someparts  in my story interesting that makes the reader want to read more]]> 2017-02-01 13:13:04 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150811413 hjae4240 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150813147 I need help on adding more emotion/ pathos to my speech and maybe adding a little bit of ethos.
I also need to really edit my "be" verbs and find better replacements for them.]]> 2017-02-01 13:19:35 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150813147 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150849996 need to finish normal editing, cause I was sick
need my speech to be more relatable.
use more data in my second to last paragraph]]> 2017-02-01 14:57:35 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150849996 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150885199 I need help elaborating on the topics in my paragraphs.

]]> 2017-02-01 16:17:39 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150885199 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150885623 I need help only putting facts or opinions in my speech that support my thesis.]]> 2017-02-01 16:18:41 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/41ez0amk0jy2/wish/150885623