I liked the outline of the senses involved at the beginning of the presentation; it made it easier to follow her topics.

Loved the videos documentation

Daniel Mendoza

• Poem was very well written (you ate with that one)

• Very good presentation skills

• Thoughtful story, great ideas in it that you mentioned

• I like how you kept both water propositions and separated your responses so well.

• I like that you went out of your comfort zone to make a painting of the river

From Julia

-Martin Yang

The presentation itself was very eye catching and funny, love the pics and videos!

-Daisy DeRuiter

From Maya Tennant

From Julia

THANK YOU FOR THE DANCE!!! Take took some real bravery!

From Zoe McGrath

Sarah L

Sarah L

-Daisy

-Makayla Stark

From Maya Tennant

Sarah L

From Julia

Zoe McGrath

-Makayla Stark

The way you spoke was very confident and the presentation was very clear and well made

-Daisy

-Emily

Your presentation is so colourful I love it

I like how you talked about revising each creative and what went through your head

Daniel Mendoza

-Makayla Stark

From Maya Tennant

From Julia

It was also nice that you got a sunny day to enjoy different emotions and reactions to the weather. I love the sounds of birds, especially in early spring when it feels like summer is coming!

Zoe McGrath

Sarah L

-Daisy

-Makayla Stark

the video of the ocean made me feel like I was there

other than that I loved it

Daniel

-Emily

Tree metaphors can tell you a lot about time and change. And I could relate to your interpretation of always having something to fall back on.

Very clear and articulate. I love it

Daniel Mendoza

Watching the trees move in the wind is such a great way to enjoy nature, especially when different trees and leaves make different noises or have different colours.

I liked how you associated the salt water smell with your childhood and the nostalgia you felt for your family.

Zoe McGrath

From Julia

Sarah L

-Daisy

The explanations behind your documentations were so intriguing to follow!

-Emily

From Maya Tennant

Loved the ERAs tour photo,

Sarah L

THE POEM WAS SO GOOD, I love it when poems rhyme.

Overall the presentation was very well formatted and all the documentation was well organized.

-Daisy

• Interesting visuals. Serves so much purpose and evidence of your experience!

• Wish you would've read your story! I had a glimpse of it and it looked interesting

Daniel

• Lots of energy! The optimism helps entice the audience.

• Maybe instead of going on one walk, it would've been more interesting to go on multiple? Either way, I am glad you enjoyed your time outside!

• The interpretive dance was a unique way of presenting

Jemma

• Makes me so happy to see your execution on the first prompt :) It's meets all my expectations + more for an activity I assigned

• The way you vocalize is so charming :)

McKenzie

• Wish we could've seen some of the journals and poems you've wrote! Otherwise, it was an awesome presentation!

Erin

• Your reflection for each prompt was so insightful and lovely!

• Your voice is very clear and articulate. Loved it!

Katrina

• I love how aesthetic each slide was! It was visually pleasing despite its simplistic nature :)

• Your story was very touching (The Twin Trees)! There was such a strong underlying message to take away

• Lovely execution on your last prompt! I'm very glad you were able to share a meal with your family.

  
  

by Seyeon Kim

From Julia

I loved how you included such a cute photo of you in the tree house in your childhood home and associated it with what it meant to you.

What a lovely short story about differences and strengths! Your poem was also so nice.

Zoe McGrath

-Makayla Stark

-Emily

• i really enjoyed the visual in presentation and how you showed pictures of what you were doing.

• I also like how you connected your presentation to your inner child and how your were able to engage with your similar environment in a new way

Daniel

• I like how each stanza of the poem connected to the different types of wind and the video documentations

• it was nice to see the connection to Wâhkôhtowin from our seminar presentation

Jemma

• It was really interesting to hear about your culture and how you connected it to your grandma

• I like how you used mind maps as a way to brainstorm what you wanted to do for each proposition

• You are a great at drawing

McKenzie

• I like how much you reflected during your presentation because it allow us to understand more how you felt

• I like how this presentation as more casual as she didn't have note cards and just spoke how she felt

Erin

• The testing water proposition was really interesting because it not also something that you think about

• i really like your short story for preposition four because of how nostalgic it was, it even brought back memories for me

Katrina

• I enjoyed your short story about the twin trees and the poem you wrote on your walk

• I also like your connection between the eras tour and the twin trees

  
  

by Jordan Nicol

From Maya Tennant

• • It is good as the first one to go

Daniel

• • I like the dance at the end so funny

Jemma

• • I love how she started everything with a mind map

McKenzie

• • I like how she go without the notecard

Erin

• • I love how she connecting everything

Katrina

• • I like how hearing connected to the food

- Gary

From Julia

Good job making 3 prompts about water so different, I got 3 about the forest and I’ve been struggling to make them different so I’ll definitely take your presentation into consideration!

-Daisy

Zoe McGrath

I thought the rain and bus prompt was super relatable, just because, as students, transiting is something everyone does, so there is some deep meaning behind it

Could be louder, and it was hard to hear you at times.

I loved it though

Daniel Mendoza

Sarah L

From Maya Tennant

-Emily

-Makayla Stark

From Maya Tennant

From Julia

Zoe McGrath

Sarah L

I loved the Paths Through Life prompt, the art documentation was so creative.

The variety of photos, made the presentation more engaging

Daniel Mendoza

-Daisy

You spoke very clearly and naturally, and it was so wonderfully presented! Your observations were really interesting and intriguing.

-Emily

maybe articulate your voice more, it was hard to hear you at times.

make your slides more colourful and make the font bigger, it was hard to read at times

Good presentation overall

Daniel Mendoza

Sarah L

From Julia

-Daisy

Zoe McGrath

From Maya Tennant

-Makayla Stark

Sarah L

Zoe McGrath

From Julia

good presentation overall

Daniel Mendoza

-Daisy

From Maya Tennant

make the font bigger, but slides look nice so, made me feel I was there for myself

Daniel Mendoza

From Maya Tennant

-Daisy

Zoe McGrath

-Emily

-Makayla Stark

From Maya Tennant

-Daisy

I relate to your point about being grateful for your parent; I am the same, our parents sacrificed a lot for us to come here. I think a lot of people can relate to that point.

I like how you didn't give up on finding a bunny.

Daniel Mendoza

From Julia

Zoe McGrath

-Makayla Stark

Sarah L

From Maya Tennant

-Daisy

Zoe McGrath

• Very tonality in your voice

• All the pictures add well to the presentation

• Good job grabbing everyone's attention

• Fantastic presentation!

  Daniel Mendoza

• Very good energy

• I make the same mistake, but be careful with the use of "umm"

• Amazing confidence especially around the dance

• Very good composure

• Awesome job!

Jemma Sangha

• Very good confidence

• It is difficult under the time constraints but slow it down a little bit

• Amazing presentation

Mckenzie Shera

• Very good loud voice

• The presentation is scary, but slow down a little bit

• Very well done!

Erin Van Hoeke

• Amazing confident voice

• Very good at keeping eye contact with the rest of the room

• Very good job including the short story

Katrina Herrera

• Very good connections to your personal life

• Projected your voice more. It was hard to hear you at some points

• Nice job!

Meghan Pooley

• Very good tonality and volume in your voice

• I liked that you highlighted the important parts of your short story

• Good humour

• Good job rolling with the punches when the audio did not work

• Great presentation!

Maeghan Sheridan

• Amazing confidence and tonality in your voice

• I like how the pictures come together

• Very well done!

Jadyn M-Y

• Very good job projecting your voice

• When a mistake happens, slow down. Everyone does not notice

• Good job explaining your documentation

• Next presentation, have some notes with you to keep you on track. I liked everything that was mentioned, but there were some pauses

• Awesome job Jadyn!

Gary Tse

• Very good confidence in your voice

• Good job using your hands and other gestures to bring attention to yourself

• Good eye contact with everyone

• I like your connections between the propositions and your experience

• Awesome work!

Sarah Webster

• Awesome projection in your voice

• I like that you brought your art piece in person

• I make the same mistake, but be careful with how much you use "ummm" and "ughhh". It is hard not to do it

• Very good job bringing attention to yourself with your movement

  Martin Yang

• Very good confidence in your voice

• Do your best to not read off of something

• The design of the presentation is really good. it catches my attention

• The pictures add a lot to your presentation

• Good humour

• Very good dedication

Seyeon Kim

• Awesome Humour

• Good job projecting your voice

• Very clear

• Good confidence

• Very well done, but do your best not to read off the paper

• Very good design for your presentation. It grabs my attention more

• Very good connections in your presentation

• Very nice artwork

• Overall, fantastic presentation!

Matthew Steiner

-Makayla Stark

From Julia

Sarah L

you can look at the stuff you own and see how you have changed as a person.

Daniel Mendoza

From: Maya Tennant

• connected well to the self well (inner child, personal experiences)

• connected well to emotion (differences between feelings when doing first water proposition to second water proposition)

• great presentation skills!

For Daniel Mendoza

• creative poem cool touch by putting each stanza as a type of wind

• engaging presentation with lots of videos

• thoughtful artwork

• connected well to class work and material!

For Jemma Sangha

• connected very well to community and self when making roti (ancestral connection)

• beautiful artwork!

• very thoughtful exploration for each proposition i can tell a lot of effort was put in

  
  

For Mckenzie Shera

• good connection to emotions and connection to people around

• nice photos that supported poem and journal

• i enjoyed hearing ur positive outlook on the weather!

For Erin Van Hoeke

• very well organized presentation

• thoughtful reflection for each proposition

• connection to the self and past memories within the proposition

For Katrina Herrera

• connected experience well to an unlocked memory from her childhood (treehouse story)

• i loved hearing her connections to family and community

• thoughtful interaction with propositions

For Meghan Pooley

• it was very interesting to hear about her connection to place (grew up in Alberta but was interacting with the land in BC

• thoughtful short story!

• great photo collage it shows how u took the time to really engage with your environment

  
  

For Maeghan Sheridan

• very well spoken and engaging speaker!

• great connection to the self and past through writing

• it was cool to hear that the smaller body of water made the loudest sound

• beautiful emotional connection to her dog

  
  

For Jadyn M-Y

• great poems!

• interacted with propositions very thoughtfully

• i enjoyed seeing your artwork and hearing your explanation around it

For Gary Tse

• i like how you reflected saying how simple natural things can bring peace

• i liked seeing your connections between each proposition and how ur explorations were similar

• i enjoyed seeing how your drawings connected to your experiences

  
  

For Sarah Webster

• Sarah did my proposition so seeing how she executed it was very interesting, she did a great job bringing my idea to life!

• i liked the artwork i can tell lots of effort and thought was put into it

• engaging and organized presentation

For Martin Yang

• i liked hearing his personal connection (parents story coming from Taiwan, story about the park near his house)

• thoughtful poem and connected well to proposition

• i enjoyed hearing his story about finding the bunny and how he connected it back to his family and his emotions

For Seyeon Kim

• very interactive and engaging speaker

• i liked her connection to her cat it added a personal aspect

• i enjoyed seeing her connection to her love for artwork and how that artwork was a part of her proposition

  
  

For Matthew Steiner

• very engaging speaker and kept the audience engaged

• i like the personal artistic style of drawing that he used for his proposition

• nicely organized and clear presentation

-Makayla Stark

From Julia

I LOVED your tree man drawings. I like that you had lots of different styles of responses and it seems like you were very open minded about engaging with the propositions.

Zoe McGrath

I loved how deep your reflection was preceding your propositions. And I like that you included two similar propositions, but looked at them from different perspectives. LOVE your poem for proposition #2.

Daniel:

I like that you completed all your propositions in one walk. It really shows how much there is to appreciate about nature at once. Very good poem I liked how each stanza describes a different type of wind you heard. Very interpretive dance.

Jemma:

Your drawing was so amazing! I love how you considered your own culture in a new way. I like how deeply you thought of each proposition. the mind maps were very nice.

Mckenzie:

I really liked your photography and your reflection on the rain and the light. Your haiku is really good and I like how you emphasized meditation and breathing as a way to calm our bodies.

Erin:

I like how well you related natural processes in our environment to our everyday life. Your mind map was very organized and informative. Your enthusiasm was great!! The excerpt from your short story was very well written as well.

Katrina:

Your short story was really good. I like the lesson that was taken from it. I also really like how well you relate your personal experiences to nature, and how you connect it to nostalgic moments in your childhood. Your poem had a nice flow and was very creative.

Meghan P:

I really liked your short story, and how you related the experience of nature and walking to experiences in relationships and friendships, and how they’re always evolving. I like your series of photos and how they capture the movement of water and its evolution and the impact that water makes on the beach.

Maeghan S:

I like how your art piece brings together many elements of nature and represents a whole ecosystem within a page. I like the way you described your experience in the rain.

Jadyn:

I like your poem describing the journey of water from the tap to the drain. I like your drawings, illustrating your experience putting your hand in the cold water. It captures your feelings

big very well.

Gary:

I like your drawing showing different perspectives you can have in the rain, based on your environment. Your collage was really nice and the photography was well done.

Sarah W:

Your art piece is really good. I like your interpretation of light vs shadow and how you portrayed that in you art. very creative. Your second art piece really captures the essence of the wind. I like the shapes and colors you chose.

Martin:

I really loved your personal story about what brought you to this moment, your appreciation for your parents, and clean drinking water. I like your reflection on childhood and nostalgia in your poem about the smell of the park.

Seyeon:

I liked your reflection on the rain and how even if your travel to other places, you can still be reminded of canada. I also like the way you relate the flow of water to the flow of life.

Matthew:

I liked your art piece and the way you used color to illustrate the intensity of the sounds you encountered, as well as your personnification of the elements of nature. I also liked your collage and your interpretation of the visual characteristics of the flower.

-Daisy

The font size is inconsistent, I made the same mistake. some slides are hard to read.

love the photos and talking about which prompts took the longest

Daniel Mendoza

• I liked your photo collage for the second proposition and how you connected to the people around it

• Your poem was great, liked that it was about a bug and rain on the window and not about the bus

Maeghan S

• I like how you wrote reflective journals for each proposition

• I enjoyed how personal this presentation was

• love the turtles

Jadyn

• I enjoyed seeing the reflection on different cultures

• I would suggest to add a bit more colour to the presentation to make it more engaging

Gary

• I liked the first proposition and how you related making honey green tea to bees you saw during your nature walk

• I like how picture from his past were added

Sara

• I enjoyed the art pieces that were shown and how they were the physical copy rather than a digital copy

• It was nice to see how you reflected on being more engaged with nature then usual

Martin

• I liked the design of his presentation it made it more engaging

• I liked how he connected the first proposition to his family

Seyeon

• I liked the theme you used for your presentation and your cat is really cute

• I enjoyed your drawings from the second propositions because it shows the different hobbies you have

Matthew

• I enjoyed the presentation design and your sound map for proportions one, i like how you used different colours for the different volumes of sound you heard

• I also liked the connection to family and your younger self in the last proposition

by Jordan Nicol

I like how detailed your pictures and overall presentation was. It showed how much effort you put into doing this project.

Daniel Mendoza:

I enjoyed how you added videos and an interactive dance to your presentation, it made the overall product more engaging and full of interesting content.

Jemma Sangha:

I like how confident you were in your presentation. You also added many creative forms of what you experienced the project which was nice to see.

McKenzie Shera:

I like how descriptive you were with what you did during your work on your project. It gave lots of insight into your experience which was enjoyable to watch.

Erin Van Hoeke:

I really enjoyed your overall presentation and how you showcased what you did during your project. I found it all very creative and engaging.

Meghan Pooley:

I really liked the short story you wrote, it created a nice visual into what inspired you. I also liked all the images you included, it was nice to see in detail what you were talking about.

Maeghan Sheridan:

The images included and the little anecdotes throughout your presentation were nice, it made things more personal.

Jadyn M-Y:

I really liked your poem and drawing you included. It was all very creative.

Gary Tse:

I liked the images you included for your propositions, it gave a clear visual to what you were describing and made the overall project very engaging.

Sarah Webster:

I really enjoyed your shadow art piece, your painting and your wind art piece, they were all very creative and well done. Including them in your project made things very fun and engaging.

Martin Yang:

I liked the video you included of your friends enjoying the sun. It made the presentation more personal and interesting to see. The bunny was so cute.

Seyeon Kim:

I really enjoyed your confidence when presenting, paying attention to the audience and cracking jokes made the presentation very engaging. I also really liked your drawings, they were very well done.

Matthew Steiner:

I really liked your drawings, it's clear lots of effort was made. I also really enjoyed how you explained your experience and all the details you included were a nice touch.

• I thought Zoe had a really good opening. I enjoyed getting to hear a reflection of the process overall before they began. I think it made me feel more connected to her process.

• I liked how she really embraced doing her steps even the ones that felt a little silly or meant walking off the path.

Daniel

• I liked how Daniel showed us some videos. It kind of made it easier to see what and why he was reflecting on.

• he did a good job connecting to some course topics (Wahkohtowin)

• very nice dance

Jemma

• I really liked how the reflections were not only connected to the experience but also its history in her life.

• it was cool to see the mind maps throughout I liked getting to see some the thought process during the reflections

• the drawings were really pretty!

McKenzie

• I think McKenzie did a really good job presenting. She was really confident and engaging for her presentation

• I liked the reflection of her past connecting to the moment

Erin

• I really enjoyed the reflection about the mountains "just because we can't see them doesn't mean they aren't there" I felt like this is an important thing to remember in many aspects of life

• The piece from her short story was really beautiful :)

Katrina

• Katrina had one of my propositions and I really enjoyed getting to she how she interpreted that.

• she did a really great job reflecting on different aspects of the moment, memories, five senses, emotions etc

Maeghan

• She had some thoughtful observations like the different volumes of different bodies of water

• I could tell her written reflections meant something to her and I enjoyed being able to connect in that way

Jadyn

• I liked the poems jadyn wrote I thought they were really well thought out

Gary

• I liked your reflection on the green tea, "simple natural things can bring peace" I think this is a really good reflection for all aspects of life

• the reflections connecting to the photo collage were really good I enjoyed that

• he said something I liked about how he doesn't really think about the soil as its something he sees everyday but we was able to take time to think and it brought a lot more meaning and significance to the soil

Sarah

• I really liked the picture the idea of it being mirrored was really interesting. The wind picture was also really interesting and really pretty

• as an albertan I loved the comparison to life here vs in the prairies :p

• I enjoyed her reflection about making time for the things you usually see in passing

Martin

• I liked his ability to adapt, like when he was saying the weather kept him away from the beach

• he had a really good reflection about clean safe water being a privilege which I thought was a really good, powerful reflection

Seyeon

• I was a big fan of all the cat pictures

• I liked hearing her reflection of the similarities and differences of water in her hands to life. I felt I could connect to this and I really enjoyed it

Matt

• I liked how matt could take the time to really take in the sounds and life around him.

• matt is really good at getting in front of the class and sharing thoughts and reflections that I think are personal but everyone can connect to so I enjoyed listening to his project

• I thought the art was very good :)

Sorry if it sounds like I'm saying the same thing for everyone.

For Zoe McGrath

Amazing. It is easy to see how much effort was put into each proposition. The many connections shows the depth of your reflection.

For Daniel Mendoza

The video clips were very nice. Being able to see what you saw made it easier to understand how you interpreted the propositions.

For Jemma Sangha

The pictures were great for seeing how you went about the propositions. The mind maps showed how much thought you put into each one.

For McKenzie Shera

The explanations of what you heard or felt for each proposition and the connections you made with them and nature were great.

For Erin Van Hoeke

Solid reflections for each proposition, with a lot of thought into each one.

For Katrina Herrera

Voice was a little low, however it was effective for forcing people to focus on what you were saying. I liked how you connected your experiences with each proposition.

For Meghan Pooley

There seems to be a strong theme of accepting nature as what it is for each of the propositions. Each reflection had some part that considers nature and its impact.

For Maeghan Sheridan

The documentation for each proposition was great. The reflections were better, especially the ones that involved your past memories.

For Gary

I liked the focus on the more ordinary parts of life, it isn't about some abstract understanding or rocket science. Just about simple things that are often overlooked.

For Sarah Webster

The art pieces were really cool. Especially the second piece with the pop up spirals for wind. I also like that how you compared what you saw when you run past an area versus walking past it.

For Martin Yang

I liked hearing about the process for each proposition. It was also interesting to hear how you felt about the interactions between nature and people. The bunny was obviously the best image.

For Seyeon Kim

I liked that the propositions let us see a part of your life and what you cherish. Connections between yourself, nature, and others (friends, family) were great.

For Matthew Steiner

I liked the photos. All the interactions you had with nature and the connections you drew from there were great too.

Sarah

By Kirra Trites

Sarah

• • Great poem and how you memorize the script well

Maeghan

• • I like the photo that making it engaging

Jadyn

• • I like the joke that you put on the first slide

Sarah

• • I love the drawing (the idea of shadow) and all the painting you have it is beautiful

Martin

• • I love the idea that use tap water to replace beach and how drinking water is a privilege

Seyeon

- I like how colourful the slide is and it is engaging

Matthew

- Funny drawing and the presentation is clear and organized

-Gary

You were very clear when you presented, and you provided great examples that were easy to follow. It was evident that you put a lot of thought into each of your propositions. 

Daniel 
I liked how you gave multiple examples of the areas that inspired your proposition. Showing three different spots and demonstrating your experiment with three different objects in the water was a great way to illustrate your ideas.  

Jemma 
You did a great job showing each step of your proposition. Your mind maps, and overall process were well presented. And your artwork was beautiful! 

Mckenzie 
You did well, but I would suggest slowing down your pace a bit. Overall, your presentation was clear, and I liked the way you used photos in your PowerPoint.  

Erin 
I liked how you incorporated a place you grew up visiting as a child into your proposition. Using personal memories adds depth and a stronger connection to your project. 

Katrina  
I like how you incorporated a childhood memory into your first proposition, as it adds another perspective and enhances the depth and meaning of your reflection. One suggestion for next time is to include your journal in PowerPoint so we can see your documentation even though you’ve given a debrief.  

Maeghan Sheridan  
I like how you used your reflection by creating a journal.  
Jadyn  
Next time, I would suggest using natural water instead of tap water for Proposition 2. Also, try to make your explanation of your propositions a bit clearer when presenting. You did a great job of drawing your third proposition! 

Gery  
I like how you incorporated parts of your week when you taught the class into your reflection on your propositions. It showed that you deeply understood the message of what we learned and what your group taught us. 

Sarah Webster 
I like your art piece because it is very colorful and effectively conveys the idea of your proposition. 

Martin 
For your fourth proposition, I really liked the poem you wrote—it was relatable as well. Next time, try to read less from your phone and make more eye contact with the group. 

Seyeon 
You did a great job of speaking clearly while discussing your PowerPoint. I liked the use of transitions throughout, as no one else had incorporated them yet. Also, your artwork was very cute! 

Matthew 
You did a great job explaining your steps and processes throughout your presentation. You communicated your ideas very clearly. 

I love the poem that you did, it really put me into the setting of the forest

I also really enjoyed the part about really embracing your inner child.

Daniel:

I love the duck in your video 10/10 stole the show. I enjoyed how you connected art to your environment and real life emotions. And amazing dancing skills, I really felt the emotions that you put into the choreography. 

Jemma:

I also love midmaps, they are super cool, I enjoyed the very journal style of your presentation. Also your amazing artists and your drawings are amazing. I think that really well refelcted the propositions that you were given 

Erin:

I really like the analogies. Like the one walking the same path but in different environments can look super different. I also get super nostalgic when going to the beach. 

Katrina: 

I think your short story idea is super creative. It reminded me of the complexities of relationships. I also really liked your poem, overall I think that you are a super good writer, with some amazing original ideas. 

Meghan:

I enjoyed your story and how the environment reflected the emotions that the characters were feeling. Also the photos in step 2 looked super cool. I think your thoughts of experiences and place and how an experience at a place can affect your feelings and thoughts toward a place can be affected. I think your art was super creative

Maeghan: 

I think that your reflections were super in depth and super interesting to listen to. I love your turtles on the logs 10/10 better than I could ever do. I think it is super impactful about how you demonstrated how environments and places impact our memories, feelings and thoughts. 

Jadyn:

I really liked how you slowly got more comfortable presenting as time went on! I like the art piece that you created for proposition 3. It was super creative and a unique representation of your experiences. 

Gary:

I enjoyed how you explained what you gained and what emotions you felt during these experiences. I enjoyed how your reflections allowed you to consider ordinary things that you might not normally consider

Sarah:

Your shadow and light art piece was super creative and a good representation of the balance of light and shadows. Why were you wearing shorts in winter goof. The spiral art piece looked super fun and I liked the self portrait. Water colours 10/10 look amazing. 

Martin:

I appreciated your reflections on who moments in the past by other people have affected our lives. I also enjoyed the rhyming of the poem that you did. You also made an interesting observation that you made on the openness of people and the weather. I love the fact that you walked three hours to find a bunny. 

Seyeon:

I appreciate the photos of the cats. I love the little sketches, they are super cute and creative representations of your personality and hobbies. I love the message that you gained that it is never too late to start a goal or dream that you have. The rhyming in your poem. 

Matthew:

I love the colours that you used to represent sound in your sound art piece. I find it creative how you took one sense sound and placed it into sight. I find it super interesting how you personified the tree

From McKenzie