https://padlet.com/25gobara/3z8tywnqrojz Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2018-10-01 15:38:19 UTC 2018-12-07 16:17:10 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-uploads.storage.googleapis.com/263325825/fbe8fecba0ad05fabb965255fa75b787/Realistic_minecraft_diamond 25sdiana https://padlet.com/25gobara/3z8tywnqrojz/wish/309865656 I really like your hook gets the reader deeper into the story.I love all the detail you put into your story.I think you could add some more character traits to your main character. ]]> 2018-11-30 16:51:56 UTC https://padlet.com/25gobara/3z8tywnqrojz/wish/309865656 https://padlet.com/25gobara/3z8tywnqrojz/wish/312183187 Hey,Anonymous here (Logan Gray) I like the book so far it seems like I'm really there. I also love how it shows some good traits about the main character,But its is missing just a little more detail and some traits]]> 2018-12-07 11:45:02 UTC https://padlet.com/25gobara/3z8tywnqrojz/wish/312183187