June 2018 Paper 2 by Rukshana https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018 Question 1-4 en-us 2019-03-18 01:21:14 UTC 2026-01-05 04:52:02 UTC hello@padlet.com Text FSE https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342210616 2019-03-18 01:22:22 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342210616 Powerpoint FSE https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342210732 2019-03-18 01:23:00 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342210732 Question FSE https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342211573  Lines 18-25
How does the writer use language to describe the surfers and the sea.]]> 2019-03-18 01:27:35 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342211573 Adem huyanhle1 https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342305043 The writer uses language to describe the surfers as being “daring” the adjective of “daring” shows that the surfers are willing to take risks in-order to shower off “knelt and even stood on their surf-boards”. The writer shows that they are skilled and dare devils as they “uttering exultant cries” it shows their exotic personalities.

]]> 2019-03-18 09:57:23 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342305043 Jordan jordanperry2002 https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342305056 The writer describes the sea as powerful by using the Adjective "fierce breaker" the writer suggests that the sea is quick causing the surfers to be skilled to master this board breaking sport.
The theme presented here is man vs nature. This is shown with the quote "fierce breaker" as it shows us that the sea (nature) is dominating man (the surfers) so that they cant enter/ compete in the surfing sport.

secondly, The writer uses a simile to suggest the number of heads bobbing in and out. "number of heads bobbing out like corks in smooth water". The adjective "corks" portrays that the surfers cannot handle the fierceness that the sea is throwing at them which causes them to laydown and surrender.

Thirdly, The writer uses an adverb to show us that the surfers are amazing at riding the sea. "rode in majestically". The adjective "majestically" tells us that the surfers consider themselves the king of the sea so they are all Neptune and control the will of the sea.  ]]> 2019-03-18 09:57:26 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342305056 Travis travis_button03 https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342305262 The writer uses personification to describe the sea it does so in the  quote “carried shore-ward by its mighty impulse” with the verb carried it is like the sea loves the suffers and is letting them ride upon it 

]]> 2019-03-18 09:58:09 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342305262 Jacob jt4840708 https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342305312 The writer uses adverb to describe how the surfers are. "Rode in majestically" suggests how trained the surfers are and how magnificent they look. The adverb "majestically" this implies that they are fantasy like and unreal.

Then the writer uses an adjective to describe the action of the sea. "verge of engulfment" suggests that the sea is going to take out the surfer. The adjective "engulfment" implies that the sea is going to swallow the surfers like an animal.

Finally the writer uses a simile to describe the surfers in the water. "bobbing about like corks" suggests that you can only see their heads in the water. The word "bobbing" implies that there've beenknocked of their boards and there're moving with the waves.

]]> 2019-03-18 09:58:23 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342305312 Tay ra tvernau001 https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342305380 The writer describes the surfers by using an adverb "rode in majestically". This suggests that the surfers are very skilled at surfing. The word "Majestically" gives the impression that they are fantasy like.

The writer describes the sea as "Fierce breaker" This quote suggests that the sea is very powerful and chaotic. The word "fierce" tells that the sea is uncontrollable and snappy. 

Finally the writer describes the surfers as "daring riders" this suggests that surfers are dangerous and fearless. The word "daring" means that the surfers are exiting and risk-takers. ]]> 2019-03-18 09:58:40 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342305380 Diane ;) dianeroberts01 https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342306102 Firstly, The writer describes the sea as powerful by using an adjective, 'fierce breaker' this phrase symbolism the sea is powerful, quick and surfers could manage the sea. Another use of an adjective by the writer but to describe the surfers 'Majestically', this word describes how the surfers feel when on their boards like the kings of the sea. 

Secondly, The writer uses a simile to describes the surfers in the sea, 'Number of heads bobbing like corks'. The use of the simile helps the reader imagine whats going on in their head and brings it to life. ]]> 2019-03-18 10:01:41 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342306102 shols; https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342310847
the writer uses an adverb to describe the surfers and the sea]]> 2019-03-18 10:18:32 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342310847 Jordan jordanperry2002 https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342313168 Both writers have a positive view on surfing, however in source A Doyle is more appreciative of the sport whereas in Source B Bird is more weary of surfing.


Firstly the writer of source A recalls how as a young boy he was "dazzled" by the spectacle of surfing. He uses a metaphor to describe the "bronzed gods" which suggests that he loved to see people surfing which is how he got into the sport. However Bird enjoys the spectacle of surfing but is content to remain a spectator. "I held my breath in terror" here she uses first person to emphasise the shock and also the excitement of surfing. The verb "terror" suggests that because she has never seen the sport before she does not know what to expect, which is the complete opposite to Doyle in source A.

secondly, both sources describe the material that is needed to create the surf boards. In source B Bird informs us how she feels about the surf boards ."coffin lid" this tells us that she feels as if surfing is a bringer of death. she also gives us a religious aspect to surfing as she states " a wood from the native breadfruit tree, then blessed in a simple ritual".
 

]]> 2019-03-18 10:26:11 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342313168 Louise kirbylouise055 https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342313517 the writer uses language to to describe the sea and surfers by using a simile such as "number of heads bobbing like corks" this suggests that the sea was not smooth it was uneven and up and down therefore the surfers were floating on bumpy seas.

the writer desribes the sea by using the quote "fierce breaker" to show that the sea is powerful. the word firece describes the sea as being strong and quite controlling, which suggests that not everyone can take on the see unless your a professional surfer.]]> 2019-03-18 10:27:36 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342313517 Adem huyanhle1 https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342313748 Both sources have a positive view towards the sport as they both appreciate what the surfers are achieving, However in source A the writer is a professional surfer where as in source B the writer is a observer. 

Secondly, in source A Mike views the surfers as “bronzed gods” he has an optimistic view as he himself wants to participate in the sport.  Mike is more interested in doing the actual sport as he fell in love with it when he went to “Manhattan pier” as a young boy, this shows that he’s been growing up with the dream of predicating “I was just dazzled” in the godly sport, However in source B Isabella has a very mellow tone view towards the surfers as she’s observing the sport where she is very relaxed and doesn’t have the urge to patriciate in the daring sport. 

]]> 2019-03-18 10:28:27 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342313748 Diane ;) dianeroberts01 https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342314782 Both writers have a positive view on a surfing, both writers have a different view on surfing, In source A the writer, Mike Doyle, he is more appreciative of the sport. Where as Isabella Bird would rather watch and like to watch them.

Firstly, In source A the writer has a more of a happier mood and a passionate tone. He describes him as a young boy being 'Dazzled', he uses a metaphor to describe how the surfers looked 'bronzed gods', this quote implies he loved how they looked and that's why he fell in love with the sport of surfing at such a young age. He also uses triplets to describe how they looked, 'good shape, happier and healthier' this quote suggests how good the surfers looked after they bodies and cared about their personal image. Another technique the writer uses is facts, '11 feet long, 24 inches wide, weighed 50 or 60 pounds'.

Secondly, in source B, Bird describes the surfing boards 'coffin lid', this quote suggest how she feels about the sport equipment, a type of death. Bird is quite happy to just relax and enjoy spectating the surfers. The ton of this extract is very mellow.]]> 2019-03-18 10:32:16 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342314782 TAYLOR tvernau001 https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342314868 Both writers have a positive attitude towards the sport. However Doyle in source B is willing to participate straight away "as if I was there on the board myself". but Bird is only wanting to spectate the surfers "went down to the beach to enjoy". Doyle uses a metaphor "bronzed gods" this suggests that he sees them as supernatural and  they control like Neptune (Greek god). This source has a admirable tone which the writer has created. Doyle enjoys to take part in the surfing "I managed to paddle" where as Bird is spectating which has an entertaining tone. Bird describes the surfers as "legions" seeing them as an army which is coordinated whereas in source A it only a small amount of surfers which are riding randomly  "some dozen".      ]]> 2019-03-18 10:32:33 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342314868 Jacob jt4840708 https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342315962 Both sources enjoy the sport surfing and both have a positive attitude towards surfing, However they both have different views. In sources A the writer wants to join in but, In source B the writer is a spectator. 

In source A the writer is more describing the surfers. The metaphor "bronzed gods" implies that you have to be look like a god to surfer. "Gods" suggests that the surfers control the sea and are invincible. However, in source B the writer is more describing the sea. The adjective "verge of engulfment" implies that the sea is hunting the surfers and trying to swallow the surfers. The word "engulfment" suggests the sea is going to cover the surfers.

In source A the writer is talking about how he has learning how to surf. "completely panicked" this suggests that he is in expedients and doesn't know what to do next. the word "panicked" implies that he is scared of what is going to happen next. However, in source B the writer is looking forward to watch the show. "Grand display" suggests that the professionals are going out to surf. the word "grand" implies that the surfers are going to put on a  impressive display. 

In source A the writer is very keen to go to the beach when ever he can. "As much time as I'd spent at the beach" this suggests that the young boy is in love with the sport surfing. "I'd spent" the writer has put this is the first person to show us it is close to his heart. However, in source B the writer talks about going down to the beach for a bit. "Went down to the beach for two hours" this suggests that she is not as keen as the young boy in source A.     ]]> 2019-03-18 10:36:29 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342315962 shols https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342316152 both writers have postive view about the surfers and the sea 
whereas in source A Mike Doyle 
is so much intrested in surfing whereas in source B it is just sitting back and watching the sport and not really appealing. in source B in lines 24 sliding off their board this shows that isabella is enjoying the sport.
however in source A Mike Doyle wants to take part in the sport in order to become a professional surfer you need to be fit, fearless, you need to be able ]]> 2019-03-18 10:37:17 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342316152 Travis travis_button03 https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342317386 both sources like the activity however as there are born in different times so how surfing is done differently ]]> 2019-03-18 10:42:04 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342317386 Beverley https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342317516 The writer uses adjectives to describe the sea "As the waves speeds on, and the bottom strikes the ground, the top breaks into a huge comer. This is showing how violent the see really is. 
The writer also describes the surfers ]]> 2019-03-18 10:42:35 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342317516 louise kirbylouise055 https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342322600 Both sources are similar ....]]> 2019-03-18 11:02:39 UTC https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342322600 Jordan jordanperry2002 https://padlet.com/FSE/J2018/wish/342912011 source A tells us that the boards are "much lighter and much better balsa wood boards were just starting to appear" inferring that they are developing better ways to surf. In source B however they tell us that the boards are from the "Native breadfruit tree" and are "blessed in a simple ritual" which gives us a religious aspect. surfing is apart of the culture heritage of Hawaii which is why they stick to traditional and custom surrounding the boards whereas in California, surfing is a competitive sport so people want to develop better boards to give them an edge.
Also their detailed descriptions of each board are different. In source A Doyle tells us that the boards were "11 feet long, 24 inches wide and weighed 50 or 60 pounds" the fact that he used measurements shows us that he takes pride in knowing everything about the boards and knows the exact measurements. wheres as in source B Bird says "about two feet broad and from six to nine feet long" this tells us that she doesn't know anything about surfing and is just giving an estimate. which shows how different the sources are.

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