Uniform Piece by https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d en-us 2017-10-19 15:52:29 UTC 2017-10-19 17:50:17 UTC hello@padlet.com 1.Its was good https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772796 2.I thank you could work on the wording ]]> 2017-10-19 16:55:56 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772796 1. I like the way you used strong feeling https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772820 2. My suggestion is to add some goog transition words 
Bradley

]]> 2017-10-19 16:55:58 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772820 1. Your introduction was good https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772825 2. Your piece would need 5 paragraphs
Ava Futrell]]> 2017-10-19 16:55:58 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772825 1. I like the introduction. https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772835 2. Try working on explaining your 3 key points

]]> 2017-10-19 16:55:59 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772835 1.I like how you used the word horrible in stead of bad. https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772844 2.I don´t know]]> 2017-10-19 16:56:00 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772844 1. I like the way you done your intro paragraph https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772852 2. I think you could have done more transitions and your conclusion needs a little work.
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]]> 2017-10-19 16:56:00 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772852 1. I like the way instead of putting bad idea you put horrible idea. https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772853 2. I think you need work on your transition words.
Albany O'Neill]]> 2017-10-19 16:56:01 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772853 1. https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772855 2017-10-19 16:56:01 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772855 1.you did good on your introduction https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772862 2.try to stay on track with your key points]]> 2017-10-19 16:56:01 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772862 1.I really like the way you set up your introduction. https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772867 2.Maybe try to swich it up a little and use some different transitions.
Abby]]> 2017-10-19 16:56:02 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772867 1.The introduction was good https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772886 2.Need work on putting 5 paragraphs ]]> 2017-10-19 16:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772886 https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772910 I liked the way you used your words
you need to work on your conclusion]]> 2017-10-19 16:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198772910 https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198773126 I think in my opinion you did really good, because I liked how you described how horrible it would be.]]> 2017-10-19 16:56:21 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198773126 1 I like the way you used some transition. https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198773228 2 Use more transition words Kylielynn.grantham]]> 2017-10-19 16:56:34 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198773228 1.I liked the way you described how much it costes https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198773229 2.you could foucs on key pontes
Aiden toon]]> 2017-10-19 16:56:34 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198773229 1. I like your interdroduction https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198773931 2. Try working on 3 key points.]]> 2017-10-19 16:57:51 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198773931 https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198773946 2017-10-19 16:57:53 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_schmidt/3w4o30h3qd3d/wish/198773946