Changing the Classics, "Write it ..." by anabel.school

YASMINE

2018-04-05 13:02:43 UTC

Hansel and Gretel (Sara)

2018-04-14 14:07:31 UTC

When Hansel and Gretel arrive to the original candy house, they meet and old woman, but, unlike the original version, she isn't an evil witch, and her house isn't made from sweets and chocolate, i'ts absolutely ordinary: it looks like a candy house, but it's just an illusion.

The old woman used to live there with her daughter and her two grandchildren. However, one day, they disappeared during a storm. Since that day, she is very sad and alone, and, despite the fact that se has enough money, she isn't happy because the only thing she needs to be fortunate is company.

Hansel and Gretel will decide to stay with her in order to make the old woman happier, and they will live together forever as a new familiy.

Sleeping Beauty (Javi)

2018-04-22 19:07:38 UTC

When the prince prepares to cross the field of spikes guarded by the dragon, Maleficent appears and casts a spell to capture the prince between the ears scream desesperately for help.
This scream managed to reach princess's room, she was still sleeping, but suddenly something unexpected happened. The prince shoute: "I can't even save my love, what kind of prince am I?", at that moment, as if those words had some power, the princess up. She ran to the balcony of the tower to warn everyone. The witch saw her and ordered the dragon to kill her. The dragon released the prince and flew straight to the princess, but she wasn't afraid longer. The princess exclaimed, "what kind of princess am I, If I can't save my prince". Then the dragon stopped short, looking with theses red eyes at the princess and turned against the witch. He took Malefic away, to his lair and even when they were far away the cries of the witch here still heard. The princess ran towards her prince, who was unconscious in the feld. She approached him and to wake him, she kissed him. When the prince opened his eyes, the princess said with a sweet smile: "Good morning sleeping beauty".

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2018-05-07 19:40:59 UTC

The three (Andrea

2018-05-07 19:40:59 UTC

The three pigs isn´t my favourite story but it be very educated. I like this so much because it teaches you a lot of things. The story is about three pigs, and each one make his own house, one of them is very lasy and he built a strraw house, an other made a wood house and the last one made a brick house . In that forest there was a wolf, which would destroy the house if they weren´t very resistent. Only the brick house was stop enought.

With this story we learn that it´s better to do thing well and not make them quick, because if we do them fast it will go wrong and you will have to repeart it.
Never theless if you do them well and with patience you do it well and don´t have to repeat.

Sleeping beauty(Daniel

2018-05-13 13:15:57 UTC

For make a change there a lot of do this. In my opinion the best final for Sleeping beauty is:
The princesa poke with spinning whel, the curse of the bad fairy don't make effect at the moment, but the next day she don't get up in the morning. The King and the Queen ordered to all the castle that they find a medicine for this curse but they don't find this.
The princess continue to sleep during a lot of years.

Cinderella (BEA)

2018-05-13 16:12:50 UTC

Cinderella is my favorite story because it is about love and it is very educational.
A young woman who does not have parents grows up with her stepmother and her two stepsisters, bad and ugly, who make her life impossible and treat her like a maid.
Fate gives them their due and thanks to their fairy godmother can meet the prince and fall in love. Finally the kindly Cinderella forgives them.
Change in the story:

Cinderella decides to treat her stepsisters and stepmother like they did. She turns them into servants and gardeners of the palace for a few months so that they suffer like her. Finally he forgives them and expels them from the country.

María

2018-05-13 21:53:41 UTC

In the Hansel and Gretel tale, when the childs arrived to the house, and get stuck inside, they started to eat the house when the witch leave it. When she arrived, the two childs have made a big hole in the wall and run to the village.
They were safe and the witch was so angry.

my favourite classic

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