https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n Choose one of the "boring" leads and rewrite it using a technique or two we just reviewed. Be creative! en-us 2020-12-01 03:03:52 UTC 2020-12-03 15:57:54 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975966667 I nervously opened the door and walked in. In the room a group of students turned theirs heads to look at me. My teacher walked over to me to introduce herself but instead she pointed to the clock. I realized then that I was late.]]> 2020-12-01 15:20:30 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975966667 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975966831 While I was swimming, just minding my own business, A shark was in the water!  The water was fairly deep, but close enough to shore where I wouldn't have expected to see a shark. It scared me to the point that I got out of the water. Once I got out, I was remembering that I was close enough to see the shark baring its razor sharp teeth.]]> 2020-12-01 15:20:32 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975966831 10114032 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975966886 I was surfing on a beach my family in the water the waves were 12 feet i was at the top when i saw a fin that Was a point and it was coming for where my family was so i yelled shark but it might have been to late. ]]> 2020-12-01 15:20:33 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975966886 10280021 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975967156 As I nervously walk into the classroom, thinking about nothing but how nervous I am and how will the other kids will think of me.]]> 2020-12-01 15:20:36 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975967156 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975967462 As I go into the chilly cold ocean people kept yelling my name , “ Natasha ! , Natasha! Get out of the water but I didn’t know what they saw  or said .I was wondering why . Just as I realized . I got a tickle at my foot , I went back up and I saw a gray fin with a scar on it , I closed my eyes and stayed Stilled for a while but it was still there. But it was too late .


]]> 2020-12-01 15:20:39 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975967462 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975967513 I was swimming with my best friend, James, at the beach. The water was very cold. The frigid temperature of the water hit my toes. James and I dove into the water, then I saw a fin swimming towards us. A prank I thought, it's gotta be a prank. But there was something telling me to get out of the water. I swam as fast as I could to shore. ]]> 2020-12-01 15:20:40 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975967513 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975967786 I was so excited to walk into my classroom and have fun on the first day of school.]]> 2020-12-01 15:20:43 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975967786 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975967940 I think everyone noticed how big my grin it could go even wider!]]> 2020-12-01 15:20:45 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975967940 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975968359 I’m freaked out, I’m nervous, I’m scared. Tonight’s the big night every one will be watching. The big talent show was here and i was trembling. I felt like i forgot how to do my talent, i felt like i could not do anything.]]> 2020-12-01 15:20:50 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975968359 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975969288 As I was swimming in the water with my family we were just talking about how we are going to have an amazing weekend. A few minutes later my sister shouted “ I see a SHARK!” My dad said not to panick because it doesn’t like getting close to shore but we should move out of the water. We quickly moved out of the water and waited for the shark to go away. It when away 5 minutes later and we swam back into the water.]]> 2020-12-01 15:21:00 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975969288 10113054 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975969629 I was so excited, My birthday! I couldn’t believe it. I opened up the door and everybody said surprise! I got so freaked out I tripped and fell. ]]> 2020-12-01 15:21:03 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975969629 10135502 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975969694 I was nervous as I Stepped  on the 
Shinning  stage. It was the large talent show my school has every year that I all way do.]]> 2020-12-01 15:21:04 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975969694 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975969995 I was ecstatic, my birthday party was going to begin in 5 minutes! All my friends would be there.]]> 2020-12-01 15:21:07 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975969995 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975972925 I was nervous to go to class for the first time. ]]> 2020-12-01 15:21:38 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975972925 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975973749 2020-12-01 15:21:46 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975973749 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975974415 Ity was the first day of school i was anxious to start class i quickly walked into the room and here’s what I found ]]> 2020-12-01 15:21:54 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975974415 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975974728 2020-12-01 15:21:57 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975974728 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975975194 As I waited in the empty party room waiting for it to fill up with people I was SO excited like the most excited then I ever have been.]]> 2020-12-01 15:22:02 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975975194 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975977187 I had butterflies in my stomach, and  I was breathing heavily as I slowly made my way onto the stage. I didn’t plan to be this scared. I was waiting for this night for so long, but now I want it to end.]]> 2020-12-01 15:22:24 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975977187 10110372 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975977465 I had been practicing my role in the Spring Show for weeks.  I couldn’t believe the big opening night was finally here. I could smell the flowers in the audience.  I was so nervous I might mess up.  Would I remember all my lines?]]> 2020-12-01 15:22:27 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975977465 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975978023 2020-12-01 15:22:33 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975978023 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975979784 One day when i was swimming at the beach i heard some yell something... i could not make out what he said so I kept swimming, then headed someone say “SHARK”!!! Next I was swimming for my life. Finally i saw a fin coming toward me and a swam even faster and I finally made it safely.]]> 2020-12-01 15:22:44 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975979784 10368651 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975986757 Sara

As I’m swimming in the warm water, I feel a presence near me. Something moving under me. I feel my stomach tense up. Was there something swimming under me? No. I pretend its nothing. A few minutes later I feel the presence again. I look under the water, scanning the clear, beautiful ocean when I come face to face with a giant shark. I see its sharp teeth, reminding me of razor sharp knifes, and I immediately panic. Breath breath, if you slowly swim away it wont hurt you. Next thing I know I’m on the shore shaking, trying to get the image of the horrifying shark out of my head. I’ll never get over it.]]> 2020-12-01 15:24:01 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/975986757 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983832730 As my birthday neared, I was ecstatic. Decoration were being hung, and the cake was in the fridge. Soon, all my friends would be here, and we could celebrate together.


]]> 2020-12-03 14:30:43 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983832730 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983833590 I heard yelling and screaming as I got back on my surf board. What are they yelling about? Maybe it was that I just had successfully surfed a twenty foot wave. Out of the corner of my eye I saw a dark object drifting through the water. That is when I saw the fin, cutting through the water. ]]> 2020-12-03 14:30:54 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983833590 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983833809 Mom was running there and over there again and again. “ Are the snacks done?  “ Yes mom , they are . “  When everyone one in the room came in with big smiles all over the place , I had a big smile on my face .  All the kids were laughing and having fun.]]> 2020-12-03 14:30:56 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983833809 10113054 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983834290 “Oh my,”I said. There was a shark in the water running right towards me.      
I was so freaked out it was crazy. I was more freaked out than when the dog chased me on Halloween.]]> 2020-12-03 14:31:03 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983834290 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983839724 I was swimming on the beach can then a was a shark fin at first i thought it was fake until it got real close and it was real i yellled SHARK and people were running out of the water running for their life and i ran as fast as i could.]]> 2020-12-03 14:32:13 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983839724 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983840427 I nervously stepped into my new school. I walked around the maze of halls, until I found my classroom. I slowly opened the door, and walked inside. My teacher introduced herself, and pointed to an empty desk. I sat down. School has begun. ]]> 2020-12-03 14:32:20 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983840427 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983844350 It had come. The day I was dreading. The first day of school. I got off the bus and strode into my classroom.]]> 2020-12-03 14:33:03 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983844350 10114032 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983848899 I was in the loading dock to go to Florida in a airplane i was about to board when i froze like ice i had saw one of may favorite basketball player Stephen curry he had a mob around him so I decided to take a photo a dock on my airplane. ]]> 2020-12-03 14:33:57 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983848899 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983849408 I went on a plane to go to the most beautiful place. But i saw a Peterson coming. And he had a very important thing. And it was money. And i really needed it. And he gave me some. And it was the best day. And i was so excited. And so happy.]]> 2020-12-03 14:34:04 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983849408 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983849560 i saw the number in the gate turn green, and my mom and i walked in. this summer we were going to the vacation house at the beach. we had just gotten on the plane, and i saw a person in the crowd. i looked over, and i saw him. it was george washington! ]]> 2020-12-03 14:34:06 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983849560 10280021 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983849959 I walked onto the white plane shining brightly in the sun. I walked into the plane and saw my friend wearing a bright blue shirt. ]]> 2020-12-03 14:34:10 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983849959 10368651 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983850235 I walk onto the plane to go back to Wisconsin I start looking for my seat, row 12 seat C. I walk through the many rows of first class, so many it seems like it goes on forever. But right when I thought I saw the end to get to the economy seats I see her. She’s surrounded by four people taking pictures of her and her security trying to get them away. I didn’t know who she was but I made sure that I had to get a picture.]]> 2020-12-03 14:34:14 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983850235 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983850584 As I walked up the steep   stairs to board The airplane, it caught my eye, “Look!” I said “There she is” I saw a famous person. She is my favorite celebrity! She had on a red dress and was boarding the exact same flight as me!]]> 2020-12-03 14:34:18 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983850584 10135502 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983861717 As I got on the plane some thing caught my eye. I was a frist class seat with a tv. “Are we siting there” I asked my dad.]]> 2020-12-03 14:36:27 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983861717 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983875000 I’m shaking trying to loosen the nerves that must be shivering like its winter. I’m trying to say something but there are no words. It’s all jumbled syllables. The butterflies In my stomach are flying as fast their little wings could go.]]> 2020-12-03 14:39:10 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/983875000 https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/984057463 It was a nice sunny day and I was at the beach, swimming in the water.  While I was swimming, I saw a dark shadow underneath me.  A seal, maybe?  Or a large fish?  Whatever it was, it was none of my concern.  About three minutes later, I saw the shadow again...except it was coming towards me, and it wasn’t a seal, or a fish!  It was a large shark, with sharp ragged teeth. ]]> 2020-12-03 15:15:06 UTC https://padlet.com/anne_brown1/3tcjvni4flltzl8n/wish/984057463