Idea1: The world economy are developing stronger and stronger ->this development lead an increasing number of shopping malls which has numerous fascinating clothing and items stores-> Drive young people’s desire to purchase and consume more (spend a considerable amount of money from their monthly incomes on ......) -> unnecessary financial burdens stemming from needless products -> get into debt Many young people  are aimlessly wasting their time and money->they don’t have enough time for family, friends and outdoor activities-> this negatively affects close relationships and lead to the sedentary lifestyle.

impulsive buying

The world economy are developing stronger and stronger ->this development lead an increasing number of shopping malls which has numerous fascinating clothing and items stores

THE ECONOMIC PROGRESSION nowadays CAN LEAD TO AN increasing number of shopping malls WITH numerous fascinating DISCOUNTED PRODUCTS AND ENGAGING ACTIVITIES such as ....

Idea 2:Most young people tend to desire have numerous clothes and items without thinking about long-term use -> This not only causes waste for  consumers...... -> a significant impact on the environment.

feel stressed due to the heavy workload

Idea 1: Waste a great deal of time and money.

Supporting Idea 1: Malls offer a variety of brands with various advertising and products which CAN CERTAINLY TEMPT PEOPLE TO BUY THINGS IMPULSIVELY and misspend money and time on unnecessary items.

Supporting Idea 2: For instance, numerous women in Vietnam are even willing to spend a considerable proportion of their incomes on needless luxurious items.

NEEDLESS

Supporting Idea 3: Young individuals can suffer financial problems and may GET INTO DEBT due to the attraction of shopping malls, THE INFLUENCE OF ADVERTISING, AND THE AVAILABILITY OF THE CREDIT CARD. 

Idea 2: Have a negative impact on their physical health. 

Supporting Idea 1: An excessive amount of time spent visiting shopping malls can lead to a lack of outdoor activities, such as playing sports or other recreational activities which can help people maintain a far healthier lifestyle --> protect them from a range of common diseases caused by a sedentary lifestyle, such as obesity.

AN EXCESSIVE AMOUNT OF TIME SPENT ON BEING IN SHOPPING MALLS CAN LEAD TO/ MAKE .........

INSUFFICIENT TIME FOR OUTDOOR ACTIVITIES

idea1: financial problem

shopping malls offer a great deal of attractive activities and convenient services that can attract customers.-> Young individuals who are addicted to shopping may willingLY to pay a certain -> CONSIDERABLE amount of money FROM THEIR MONTHLY INCOMES for luxury things or some unnecessary items -> MAKE YOUNGSTERS SUBJECTED TO FINANCIAL PRECARIOUSNESS AND ...............

BE WILLING TO V: SẴN LÒNG

HOẠT ĐỘNG VÀ SP Ở MALL THU HÚT -> KHIẾN NG TRẺ SẴN SÀNG BỎ NHIỀU TGIAN -> KHÔNG ĐỦ TGIAN CHO...... -> .........

idea2: wasting money

As young people shop, their brain releases endorphins and dopamine, and over time, these feelings become addictive.

They might spend a great deal of money on shopping, even they pay for unnecessary items that they don't really need in reality. It can be more than they earn, which can lead to a lack of money and they cannot afford the cost of living

• Young people going to shopping malls can cause them financial problems because Shopping malls are designed to entice consumers to make purchases —> Young people who go to shopping malls will be attracted by those ads —> For they lack financial literacy, frequent visits to shopping malls can lead to impulsive buying behavior —> This can result in financial strain, debt and a lack of savings for more important things in the future

Idea 2:

• Young people going to shopping malls are wasting time because  Spending excessive time at shopping malls deprives young people of opportunities to engage in outdoor sports and other recreational activities or learning —> This has a significant impact on their well-being and physical health.

Firstly, I believe that young people going to shopping malls can cause them financial problems. Shopping malls are designed to entice consumers to make purchases, and young people are exposing themselves to large amounts of advertising and products which will drive their desire to purchase and consume more. For young people who have limited financial sources or lack financial literacy, frequent visits to shopping malls can lead to impulsive buying behavior. This can result in financial strain, debt, and a lack of savings for more important things in the future.

Secondly, Young people going to shopping malls are wasting time. A shopping center is a large space, and walking around in it will cause young people to spend a large amount of time playing or shopping. Young people who spend too much time wandering around shopping malls are missing out on important time that could be spent outdoors playing sports and participating in other recreational activities or learning. Spending time outdoors and engaging in physical activities can significantly improve your overall health and reduce the risk of common diseases caused by a sedentary lifestyle. So I think it is not only is spending too much time in shopping malls hurting the minds of today’s young, but it is also having many negative impacts on their physical health.

Many young people going to shopping malls FOR EXTENDED PERIODS OF TIME because there are (E42)-> Not enough time for family and Study -> Academic results and LEAD TO THE LOWER LEVEL OF Educational outcomes , lack of human contact in the home

SVO/ VO

Idea 2: Money

Using money to buy unnecessary things -> Could be seen as waste of money-> Short of money for SELF-DEVELOPMENT( such as learnING foreign languageS )->LEAD TO A HIGHER RISK OF BEING JOBLESS

The activities and goods at the shopping malls are attractive --> young people are interested and invest a great deal of time --> not enough time for family, friends, study, or work --> for example most of young people spend money on shopping and do not send it back to their parents

HOẠT ĐỘNG VÀ HÀNG HÓA Ở SHOPPING MALL HẤP DẪN -> NG TRẺ DỄ BỊ CUỐN VÀO VÀ DÀNH NHIỀU TGIAN -> K ĐỦ TGIAN CHO NHỮNG VIỆC KHÁC NHƯ .......-> ẢNH HUOWNHR

Idea 2: Economics

At the shopping malls, there are many strange and beautiful items that attract buyers or there are also many discounts programs --> it is easy for young people to spend too much money on shopping --> there is not enough money to pay for essentials or important needs such as tution fee, electricity, water, etc--> Get into debt and affect everyone, a bad reputation.

SHOPPING MALL CÓ NH DISCOUNTS -> NG TRẺ SẼ DỄ VUNG TIỀN VÀO MUA ĐỒ -> KHÔNG ĐỦ TIỀN CHO VIỆC ..../ GET INTO DEBT -> ..........

that is suitable for raising crops is in use.

xác định động từ chính -> 50% nghĩa câu

- Some young people might LACK THE PATIENCE TO CAREFULLY CONSIDER OPTIONS BEFORE [E38] making purchases 

 -> lead to COMPULSIVE SHOPPING [E38] (nếu dừng lại ở đây thì chưa fully extended, tiêu chí task response giảm, đẩy ý càng xa thì strong hơn.)

-> they could get into debt  -> create a financial burden on themselves and their family

2. ENVIRONMENT

- People are becoming materialistic and consumption-focused, WHICH leads to ever-increasing numbers of products

->  results in more waste stemming from manufacturers POLLUTING RIVERS AND OCEANS [E11]) and the depletion of natural resources 

 -> give rise to ENVIRONMENTAL DEGRADATION and pose a threat to natural habitat of other living creatures.