https://padlet.com/27jhutchinson1/3q3yth581sfdwnfc Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 20:55:28 UTC 2026-03-12 05:08:55 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f3c8.png 27mkarp https://padlet.com/27jhutchinson1/3q3yth581sfdwnfc/wish/1074573179 I really was intreaged at the rush and anxeity that rushed threw you in a split second of hearing the words. I liked how you described the scenarios feeling threw discriptions. I do think that you could include a little more of how niave your parents were in the situation.]]> 2021-01-11 15:41:28 UTC https://padlet.com/27jhutchinson1/3q3yth581sfdwnfc/wish/1074573179 27jheiberg https://padlet.com/27jhutchinson1/3q3yth581sfdwnfc/wish/1074577259 Jack. H
1. You did a amazing job on the entire peace 
2. I love how you described stuff 
My wish is for it to just be longer 
 Good job you did really good.🙉🐠🌊]]> 2021-01-11 15:42:13 UTC https://padlet.com/27jhutchinson1/3q3yth581sfdwnfc/wish/1074577259 27bbalestrino https://padlet.com/27jhutchinson1/3q3yth581sfdwnfc/wish/1074901163 Great job with adding all of your inner thoughts i could really tell how you were feeling in the moment. i wouldn't be able to imagine moving to Montana.]]> 2021-01-11 16:37:09 UTC https://padlet.com/27jhutchinson1/3q3yth581sfdwnfc/wish/1074901163 https://padlet.com/27jhutchinson1/3q3yth581sfdwnfc/wish/1282846433 2021-03-08 16:01:23 UTC https://padlet.com/27jhutchinson1/3q3yth581sfdwnfc/wish/1282846433 https://padlet.com/27jhutchinson1/3q3yth581sfdwnfc/wish/1509664867 My first star is that you really gave a lot of really good reasons and evidence to go along with your statement, It was really well written, and had a lot of reasons to support your claim. Also you really went into detail about how sports could positively affect people lives, and how it could be negative if people don’t have them. What i wish you did is that you morphed some of the different parts together. But other that that good job! 👏 ]]> 2021-05-10 15:30:45 UTC https://padlet.com/27jhutchinson1/3q3yth581sfdwnfc/wish/1509664867 27mmartucci https://padlet.com/27jhutchinson1/3q3yth581sfdwnfc/wish/1509736783 I really liked the scene you started with in your introduction paragraph I feel like that got me more into the story. I like how you described the different scenes and events that took place. One wish I have is maybe you could have tried to add on a little bit more but overall it was really good!]]> 2021-05-10 15:44:00 UTC https://padlet.com/27jhutchinson1/3q3yth581sfdwnfc/wish/1509736783 27bbalestrino https://padlet.com/27jhutchinson1/3q3yth581sfdwnfc/wish/1610156854 I really enjoyed the creativity and originality of your story. I also enjoyed the part where you explained the real truth and i think that was very creative. One thing i think you should’ve added is in the log instead of telling the reader about the real truth right away, have the person in the log find a file and read out the real truth. 

]]> 2021-06-16 14:49:05 UTC https://padlet.com/27jhutchinson1/3q3yth581sfdwnfc/wish/1610156854 27miannotta https://padlet.com/27jhutchinson1/3q3yth581sfdwnfc/wish/1612348756 Hi, JT! I read your creative writing piece “The Wrath of The Plugs” and one thing that stood out to me was your log. I really liked how you used it as a back story about the first time plugs were seen coming alive. It really hooked me into your story. The second thing that stood out to me was the story about a plug ruining a boy named Jay’s Christmas. That’ll convince many people to unplug their plugs. One wish I have is that you add a little more history to the plugs. Who made the plugs? Did they want them to come alive? Something like that. Overall, great piece 😃.

]]> 2021-06-17 14:16:51 UTC https://padlet.com/27jhutchinson1/3q3yth581sfdwnfc/wish/1612348756 27kchen https://padlet.com/27jhutchinson1/3q3yth581sfdwnfc/wish/1614366362 I really like how you added many pictures in your piece because it is illustrating the piece. I like all the pictures, especially the picture on slide 5. Another thing that you did well is that you created some tips so I know what to do if my plug is moving. One of the tips that you include in your piece is “Check every single night on your plugs to make sure that they are unplugged” Good job on writing your tips. An improvement I can offer is to add more details and to expand your piece. You can explain how the plugs grew legs and you can also add more details. But I really like to read your piece.

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