https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95 You will make 5 posts today. Using your silent critique forms, make a post for each artwork you evaluated. Title those posts with the seat number of the artwork. In each post, write at least one strength, one weakness, and one suggestion. We will take some time to pass back out our forms to the artists. Take time to reflect on the feedback you were given. Make a new post. Use your name as the title. Briefly describe the feedback you received. en-us 2017-02-09 17:46:47 UTC 2017-02-10 17:05:07 UTC hello@padlet.com llaney1 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152870476 There are a lot of details, but some details aren't quite right. Handles are too wide. 3D effect looks good on the handles but not the blades. Make final line smooth.]]> 2017-02-09 18:20:41 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152870476 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152870873 There are very little details and have none 3-D form.

]]> 2017-02-09 18:21:52 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152870873 00030727 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152871670 The 3-D effect could've been better. The drawing was a bit to wide but other than that the rest of the drawing was well done.

]]> 2017-02-09 18:24:11 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152871670 00011318 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152871729 After looking at this drawing, the the details were very noticeable, and his 3D effect was very neat but by me looking at the contour drawing the pencil has been picked up many of times 
 ]]> 2017-02-09 18:24:20 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152871729 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152871790 They did a great job with keeping their pencil on the paper for continuous contour but could have done better with paying attention to detail and adding the 3D effect.]]> 2017-02-09 18:24:32 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152871790 00052894 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152872052 3d drawing could have been better no 3d movement at all no color  blades are bent color could have been added  more smooth lines could have been added  very crippled all over 

]]> 2017-02-09 18:25:17 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152872052 10019159 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152872917 Very neat Drawing, but blades are too thick. Hard to see 3D (if any). Lines are very smooth but could be sharper. ]]> 2017-02-09 18:27:42 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152872917 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152873447 There are very many details, but the contour is not contuous or smooth. Also, the right handle doesn't have the 3-D effect ]]> 2017-02-09 18:29:05 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152873447 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152873491 wasn't really accurate ]]> 2017-02-09 18:29:13 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152873491 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152873793 Good detailung and 3-D drawing with smooth lines. It's not continuous and not proportional to the tool.]]> 2017-02-09 18:30:05 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152873793 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152873794 there are good details, but not everything is in the right place or accurate. the 3d lines for parts of the sissors are good, but you should make everything 3d. ]]> 2017-02-09 18:30:06 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152873794 00030727 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152874466 Needs more detail and 3-D is not present at all. Its a very neat drawing with well done contour. Add 3-D to this drawing.]]> 2017-02-09 18:31:54 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152874466 00052894 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152874696 They did great with the 3d detail and with the smooth lines 

]]> 2017-02-09 18:32:24 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152874696 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152874867 neatly drawn ]]> 2017-02-09 18:32:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152874867 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152874990 Have a lot of details and a lot of details.

]]> 2017-02-09 18:33:06 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152874990 00027474 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152875091 this drawing was very nice and well drawn it captures the physical features of the scissors really well]]> 2017-02-09 18:33:18 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152875091 00032089 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152875305 Did a very great job love the art 


]]> 2017-02-09 18:33:49 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152875305 10019159 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152875428 Blades are different sizes. Some signs of 3D, but hard to tell because of light drawing. Lines are kinda rigid and over lapping]]> 2017-02-09 18:34:09 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152875428 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152875566 your lines are nicely drawn, and you have good detail. however you should make the drawing 3d, and make the shapes a little more accurate ]]> 2017-02-09 18:34:32 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152875566 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152875767 Artwork seems to not be finished ]]> 2017-02-09 18:35:07 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152875767 00030727 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152875953 The 3-D on this drawing was fine. The contour was well executed and you also had great attention to detail.]]> 2017-02-09 18:35:35 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152875953 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152876047 There's no strengths. The drawing is not proportioned, no contour line, no 3-D planes, and has no detail.]]> 2017-02-09 18:35:49 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152876047 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152876075 The handles and blades don't look proportional and the 3-D form is hard to see, but the contour is very smooth and contin]]> 2017-02-09 18:35:54 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152876075 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152876150 have a lot of rough lines and also have 3-D forming, have a lot of details.]]> 2017-02-09 18:36:08 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152876150 00026702 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152876171 2017-02-09 18:36:12 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152876171 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152876253 They did well with adding a 3D effect but could have used more detail with the blades and used continuous contour ]]> 2017-02-09 18:36:25 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152876253 00011318 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152876740 There wasn't many details but the 3D effect was very good and the lines were smooth.


]]> 2017-02-09 18:37:46 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152876740 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152877057 have a lot of details shows a lot 3-D form, have a continuous lines.]]> 2017-02-09 18:38:41 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152877057 00026702 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152877113 Good job

]]> 2017-02-09 18:38:50 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152877113 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152877152 Drawing is really good ]]> 2017-02-09 18:38:56 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152877152 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152877154 your lines are smooth, and you payed attention to detail. the blades are not the same size and it looks like you picked up your pencil. ]]> 2017-02-09 18:38:56 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152877154 10019159 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152877289 Kinda accurate but not accurate enough. Little to none 3D. 50% finished]]> 2017-02-09 18:39:14 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152877289 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152877736 I can change a lot of things about my drawing.


]]> 2017-02-09 18:40:23 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152877736 10017427 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152878244 The tool was drawn really well and looks like the actual object. The only suggestion is to make your lines neater and smoother

]]> 2017-02-09 18:41:38 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152878244 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152878609 There are lots of details but not proportioned well. The 3-D planes are good but some areas are too thick. The contour line was very good]]> 2017-02-09 18:42:33 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152878609 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152878703 Nice work but needs more 3D Form ]]> 2017-02-09 18:42:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152878703 00032089 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152878831 Did a great job keep the work up 


]]> 2017-02-09 18:43:06 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152878831 00011318 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152878838 Many details and creativity but could've done better with the 3D effect and great job with the continuous contour.
 ]]> 2017-02-09 18:43:06 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152878838 10009722 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152878968 2017-02-09 18:43:25 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152878968 00030727 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152879023 Everything here was done okay. Proportions could've been better but the 3-D, Detail, and Contour lines were fine.]]> 2017-02-09 18:43:35 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152879023 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152879124 They did a good job with getting the overall outline of the scissors, but they could used some 3D effect and continuous contour.]]> 2017-02-09 18:43:50 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152879124 10009722 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152879128 great work!]]> 2017-02-09 18:43:51 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152879128 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152879197 Everything looks great, the scissors look like the tool. There needs to be a contour line added. Other than that it's great.]]> 2017-02-09 18:44:01 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152879197 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152879305 artwork was great, good detail and very neat. ]]> 2017-02-09 18:44:16 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152879305 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152879411 good]]> 2017-02-09 18:44:33 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152879411 10017427 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152879528 The handles are drawn to big but the 3D lines are nice and the lines are nice and clean. Just make your handles smaller. 

]]> 2017-02-09 18:44:50 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152879528 10019159 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152879642 Very Neat and accurate. Good signs of 3D. Very smooth and continuous lines.]]> 2017-02-09 18:45:08 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152879642 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152879856 i just need to work on my 3d]]> 2017-02-09 18:45:40 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152879856 10017427 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152880019 The drawing looks like the object but the handles are to big so make them smaller. The 3D lines are drawn in the right place and the lines are smooth. ]]> 2017-02-09 18:46:01 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152880019 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152880245 There very many details. However, the blades aren't drawn accurately or proportional. It is hard to see the 3D form. The contour is continuous but rough ]]> 2017-02-09 18:46:35 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152880245 10017427 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152880627 Great work. Just make your blades smaller. ]]> 2017-02-09 18:47:37 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152880627 00011318 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152880645 Could've done better , there are no details. Wasn't any 3D effects and lines were uneven and not accurate ]]> 2017-02-09 18:47:39 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152880645 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152880879 I need to work on my positioning of the scissors ]]> 2017-02-09 18:48:08 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152880879 00027474 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152880973 Good representation of the scissors ]]> 2017-02-09 18:48:19 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152880973 00027474 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152881252 smooth contour lines and sharp details ]]> 2017-02-09 18:49:00 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152881252 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152881310 They could have done a better job with porportions, they did job with the 3D effect, but they could continuous contour.]]> 2017-02-09 18:49:12 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152881310 10017427 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152881311 People said that my artwork was good. The only suggestion was too work on my 3D lines. ]]> 2017-02-09 18:49:12 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152881311 10019159 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152881360 I need to draw more smoother and don't erase as much]]> 2017-02-09 18:49:20 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152881360 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152881514 The proportion and neatness of the drawing forn]]> 2017-02-09 18:49:44 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/152881514 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/153115955 I need to work on my continues contour.]]> 2017-02-10 17:03:56 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3pkcdxqm0n95/wish/153115955