https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1 Write your short fiction with 6 elements of a story en-us 2021-08-27 04:58:03 UTC 2024-07-14 17:10:01 UTC hello@padlet.com vbarbara https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700166058 2021-08-27 04:58:03 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700166058 vbarbara https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700166061 Rudolph told me a story: Santa ate a burger on a farm in winter, but he got too fat. So he went to the gym and got slim.]]> 2021-08-27 04:58:03 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700166061 vbarbara https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700166064 1. Read your friends' comments to get ideas.
2. Read your friends' short fictions to get ideas.
3. Rewrite your short fiction. You can change some elements of your fiction to make it better and you can also add more information. 
4. Look at the example below: 
Rudolph told me a crazy story: Santa ate a double cheeseburger with fries on a faraway farm in summer, but he got too fat, he was bigger than an elephant. So he went to the gym and got slim. Now, he can fight polar bears!  ]]> 2021-08-27 04:58:03 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700166064 vbarbara https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700166066 1. Read your friends' posts again.
2. Look at the "How to write feedback(comments)" box and write comments (make sure you follow the ABC model) to at least 1 of your friends.

]]> 2021-08-27 04:58:03 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700166066 vbarbara https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700166067 1. Click on the white + button.
2. Write your full name.
3. Write a short fiction with 6 elements of a story. Start with "... told me a story: ..." You can look at the example. 
4. If you want, you can add a picture.
5. Click on publish.
6. Type "I'm done" in the chat box. ]]> 2021-08-27 04:58:03 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700166067 vbarbara https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700166069 A] Make at least one compliment!
1. Amazing!
2. Good job! 
3. Well done!

B] Give at least one reason why you liked their work.
1. I liked your fiction because ...
2. What I liked about your fiction was ...

C] Give them one idea to make their fiction better.
Maybe you can change ...

]]> 2021-08-27 04:58:03 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700166069 vbarbara https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700166075 2021-08-27 04:58:03 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700166075 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700432271 I thought of a story: Once upon a time, blahblahblah went to his friend's house in the summer because he had a summer vacation. He played too much with his friend and he went home at 12 P.M. His parents ( blah and blahblah ) scolded him a lot. So blahblahblah got a solution: He ran to his bed and slept so he won't get scolded.]]> 2021-08-27 07:40:48 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700432271 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700432668 My friend told me a story: Once upon a time. There are two humans. their names are Reindeer and Santa. One day Reindeer eat to much burger and Santa angry ,because Reindeer eat his dinner so he wishes whith the god to variable Reindeer to an animal have a red nose. And that animal name reindeer. That is all about the legendary of reindeer. And after that God give Santa the magic to give good child present. If you eats burger in Christmas will not have any present!
                                          -End-]]> 2021-08-27 07:41:10 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700432668 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700434324 Goku fight with Vegeta in the desert in summer, but Vegeta is strong than Goku. So he should to practice fighting to win Vegeta.]]> 2021-08-27 07:42:31 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700434324 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700434839 My friend told: minions is not run , then minions got too short. Then Minions eat vegetables and go gym every nigh. And 1 year ago minions get tall ]]> 2021-08-27 07:42:59 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700434839 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700437484 dinosaur told me a story:Dragon is dig in his garden but he`s digger is too small so he cant dig fast so he have to buy many iron because he have to make the new one.]]> 2021-08-27 07:45:16 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700437484 minhummm https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700438490 Mom told me a story: A friendly whale swam in the sea in autumn, but he didn't have friends. So he made a party and he got many friends.]]> 2021-08-27 07:45:57 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700438490 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700439406 "A" told me a story: he went to a restaurant to eat on the summer vacation, but he ate too much and got fat. So he go to the gym instead of go the restaurant.]]> 2021-08-27 07:46:44 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700439406 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700440160 Doraemon are too fat so cats are not like doraemon . Then, he weight loss and he successful weight loss .and some cat are play with doraemon.]]> 2021-08-27 07:47:26 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700440160 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700440515 Minh Duc told me a story: Huy Hieu ate a pizza on Domino's in spring, but he got too thin. So he went to Dominp's again and got a little bit fat!]]> 2021-08-27 07:47:44 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700440515 phong035168 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700440782 Nobita told me a story: Doraemon has ate too much dorayaki, but he had a stomach ache. So he went to the WC.]]> 2021-08-27 07:47:59 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700440782 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700441188 one day , mah friend - Dép Lào told me a story : An ant 🐜 name Fic tried to hind an frog 🐸 name Frog , but the ant 🐜 it fell off the mountain next to an river next to Dép Lào house next to an tree have bees 🐝 live there next to an cave have an brave bear live there who have the bee honey next to Satan big big hell next to the farmer farm who have an tree that the bees live there . when Fic fall off....ofcourse he will die cause it an very tall mountain, when you go to the mountain peek... you will see thư big big big cloud cause that an heaven ....yea....IM OUT]]> 2021-08-27 07:48:22 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700441188 thu051172 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700441673 Doraemon told me a story: Nobita played video games in his room at night,but after that,he went to sleep and forgot the homework.So the next day,he went to Desuki's house and did the homework.]]> 2021-08-27 07:48:48 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700441673 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700442014 a dog was play with me in my house, but it so  litter bit crazy.So i will put him into the cage, do not thing with him anymore.]]> 2021-08-27 07:49:04 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700442014 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700443307 the kid name jack play football ,but the kid kick the ball to the neighbor garden. The kid talk to the neighbor, so the neighbor give back Jack a ball.

]]> 2021-08-27 07:50:17 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700443307 chau045904 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700444458 Jake family like eat fast food.He ate it everday until they got very fat.Everone told they to go to the gym but they didn't want to.They got fat everday and then one day jake family is bigger than the world]]> 2021-08-27 07:51:20 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700444458 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700447480 My mom told me a story : A cat is drinking a milk he is walking on the road. And one day he got corona virus. So he is going to a hospital and asking for some help]]> 2021-08-27 07:54:03 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700447480 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700448202 Hermione told to me : Harry ate pumkin pie, frog chocolate,full-flavoured candy,... on a Hogwarts express in new schoolyear , so he got too fat. So he went to school grounds to run  and he got slim.

]]> 2021-08-27 07:54:26 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700448202 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700451320 A cat name bella play with her friend . Her friend name koko. they BFF.]]> 2021-08-27 07:57:27 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700451320 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700452822 but my team had a wrong shoot. 

• and the bullet flew to the master of the cute robot and he died.                                     
• the robot was angry and he transformed to a scary robot and he killed and people in my team, but I had ran out of the forest. The robot  followed me and I sorry him and him transformed again to a cute robot and I was a new master of him 

]]> 2021-08-27 07:58:43 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700452822 linh037255 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700456437 My friend told me a story: Nobita is do a test at school and but he has a bad score so nobita mother is angry at him.Then he told Doraemon to help him with his treasure but he didn't argee so nobita decided to studied hard and he has a good score.]]> 2021-08-27 08:02:16 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700456437 dung039055 https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700465916 My brother told me a story: In the mornig, my brother had a hamburger and he wants me and him ate a hamburger, after 3 weeks I went to brother house,my brother take a hamburger, but the hamburger was very horrible and my brother throw a hamburger in the rubbish,and my brother was very sad!!]]> 2021-08-27 08:11:24 UTC https://padlet.com/vbarbara/3no65a7ma2g955t1/wish/1700465916