西北雨 基礎 202 by 王政忠 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju en-us 2024-10-17 01:34:40 UTC 2025-04-24 10:23:59 UTC hello@padlet.com 1. 延續對於「補敘」的討論，我們知道了「西北雨來去」的完整經過在第二段已經敘述完畢，我們就來聚焦第二段解讀作者所說：大自然很像一齣戲劇．暖身題提到一齣戲劇大致可以分成三幕：序幕-主戲-結局．如果再細分，其實可以分成四幕，請閱讀第二段，分別為這四幕找出主角，並為這四幕下一個充滿戲劇性的標題. powerteacher2008 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3173322032 2024-10-17 01:36:12 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3173322032 3. 閱讀第三四五段，判斷這三段其實分別補敘了哪一幕?並劃出文章證據． powerteacher2008 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3173322970 2024-10-17 01:36:43 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3173322970 4. 總結「敘事手法」的探究，「補敘」就像運用了電影拍攝鏡頭的哪一種技巧？這種技巧可以為「敘述一個事件」帶來什麼閱讀感受？ powerteacher2008 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3173323729 2024-10-17 01:37:11 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3173323729 9. 「大雨」是這場戲劇的第一主角，我們多思考一題：根據上一題對大雨的具體及想像描寫，請條列整理這些描寫如何呼應暖身題所提的「西北雨主要特徵」． powerteacher2008 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3173327339 2024-10-17 01:39:07 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3173327339 11.最後，請以自己的話，再次詮釋作者說：大自然很像一齣戲劇． powerteacher2008 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3173328071 2024-10-17 01:39:35 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3173328071 第一組 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3175513208 2024-10-18 03:52:33 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3175513208 第二組 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3175513523 2024-10-18 03:52:47 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3175513523 第四組 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3175513562 2024-10-18 03:52:51 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3175513562 第五 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3175513736 2024-10-18 03:52:59 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3175513736 第三 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3175514201 2024-10-18 03:53:25 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3175514201 8 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3181175078 2024-10-22 07:48:09 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3181175078 17 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3181177729 2024-10-22 07:50:02 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3181177729 10 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3181178338 2024-10-22 07:50:26 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3181178338 第一組 sw1120371 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182879094 特寫，可以更仔細的說明之前沒有說明的很清楚的地方

ex:我今天拍一個人，一開始看不清楚五官，但只要我鏡頭放大到特寫，就可以看很清楚

]]> 2024-10-23 03:30:11 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182879094 第三 sw112033 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182880718 2024-10-23 03:31:07 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182880718 第六 sw112031 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182881060 特寫，因為這樣可以讓我們專注在這個事物上，明確知道作者想表達的細節、想法，讓讀者印象更深刻

]]> 2024-10-23 03:31:14 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182881060 第二 sw112023 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182882436 2024-10-23 03:32:05 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182882436 第六 sw112031 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182882581 1.雨勢大

2.雨時短

3.範圍小

]]> 2024-10-23 03:32:11 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182882581 第四😍 sw112021 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182884347 廣角。就像是展示完全過程了，接著在一個個到處他的細節，將它的每個特色記得清楚。

]]> 2024-10-23 03:33:16 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182884347 第二組 sw112028 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182887880 2024-10-23 03:35:16 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182887880 第一組 sw1120371 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182889662 1.雷陣很大呼應霹靂壓頂，沒有一個人不是被震攝得氣脫委頓

2.雨勢大呼應好像天上的水壩像在洩洪

3.範圍小呼應好像課文一場大西北雨便這樣過去了

]]> 2024-10-23 03:36:26 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182889662 第四😓 sw112021 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182890688 1來的快去的也快，雨勢大雷聲大 氣勢熊熊

2走了又回來，捉摸不透

3下完都會有大太陽空氣也會變清新

]]> 2024-10-23 03:37:02 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182890688 第五組 s0150536 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182890938 2024-10-23 03:37:13 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182890938 第三 sw112033 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182891837 2024-10-23 03:37:50 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182891837 14 sw112033 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182893379 因為一齣戲要有人、事、時、地、物且要有開頭和結尾也要有主旨還要有起、承、轉、合

]]> 2024-10-23 03:38:37 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182893379 第五組 s0150536 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182893855 2024-10-23 03:38:59 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182893855 18 sw1120371 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182897081 因為西北雨會突然的出現，然後下一場好大好大的雨，然後雨下沒多久又很快的停了，雨過後只剩下一大堆一臉茫然然後被雨淋濕的人吧，感覺剛剛的一切都像假的

]]> 2024-10-23 03:40:35 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182897081 7攲 sw112026 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182897547 大自然就像戲一樣會有各個角色陸續出現，就以西北雨為例：先有烏雲開場，然後換雷上場演出，最後在以太陽做結尾，完成了一場戲。

]]> 2024-10-23 03:40:52 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182897547 12 sw112031 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182898305 因為這場西北雨像戲劇一樣有起承轉合，「起」就是天還亮亮的，「承」是烏雲、閃電籠罩了田地，「轉」是雨下不久突然又停了，「合」是烏雲慢慢離開了太陽出來了

]]> 2024-10-23 03:41:22 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182898305 11 sw112030 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182899111 2024-10-23 03:41:53 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182899111 13 sw112032 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182899168 2024-10-23 03:41:55 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182899168 17 sw112036 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182899334 大自然像一齣戲劇，主角就是西北雨，戲劇的開頭是午後時在蕃薯田下了大雨，點出午後雷陣雨的主題由烏雲密佈拉開序幕，然後從烏雲到太陽的部分最精彩，接下來特寫三幕的畫面，最後則是以雨過天青來結束劇尾

]]> 2024-10-23 03:42:03 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182899334 4 sw112023 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182899444 2024-10-23 03:42:07 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182899444 8 sw112027 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182899746 作者會說大自然像一齣戲劇是因為：西北雨在很短的時間內發生很多變化，先烏雲，再打雷，然後下雨，最後出太陽。就像一齣劇最後有完美的結局一樣。

]]> 2024-10-23 03:42:18 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182899746 10 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182900103 就像戲劇般在平靜的片段中突然來個突襲，而在西北雨短短的大鬧後換來的平穩就像是在為之後的晴朗時刻做準備。

]]> 2024-10-23 03:42:35 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182900103 16 sw112035 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182900440 2024-10-23 03:42:49 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182900440 6 sw112025 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182900677 大自然像一齣劇，主角變成配角配角慢慢的變成主角，競爭激烈，無法知道下一幕是什麼，各個角色之間都有無形的連結，形成一齣戲劇

]]> 2024-10-23 03:42:58 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182900677 1 sw112020 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182900818 2024-10-23 03:43:03 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182900818 2 sw112021 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182900963 因為西北雨要下雨之前都會有一些像是打雷等，就跟一部戲劇一樣會先預告後面才會說明

]]> 2024-10-23 03:43:09 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182900963 9 sw112028 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182901325 2024-10-23 03:43:25 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182901325 15 s0150536 https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182901433 2024-10-23 03:43:28 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182901433 3 s0150625ntct https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182903032 2024-10-23 03:44:36 UTC https://padlet.com/powerteacher2008/3lk30lguewnwy8ju/wish/3182903032