B1 opinion essay by Iwona Iwanska

iwonahiwanska — 2025-02-11 21:48:43 UTC

Looking forward to your group opinion essay:)

Paragraph 2 (Threats)

2025-02-12 12:52:57 UTC

When on the topic of preserving seas and oceans, it is fundamental to mention pollution and the loss of biodiversity. This includes oil spills, plastic waste and the usage of pesticides. Not only does it pose a threat to the ocean itself, but also causes the decline of the marine life population. It is common belief that sea creatures can become entangled in plastic nets and suffocate. Moreover chemical pollution decreases the quality of life for many ocean species. Without them, the ocean's ecosystem gets disrupted and many people could lose a significant source of income and food.

Conclusion by julia

2025-02-12 13:04:31 UTC

In conclusion, I believe there is the possibility of saving our seas and oceans, if the solutions above are applied. But it takes courage and devotion from individuals and industires. If we take action now, I am fully convinced that we can restore our marine ecosystem and major part of our water reservoirs could be saved from pollution and other threats. Every small step counts and together we can make a diffrence.

Introduction

2025-02-12 13:13:44 UTC

Throughout the history world has been affected by Industrial Revolution. The ignorance of the negative impact it has left is visibly seen all around the world. Up until 2000s state of our oceans and seas was neglected,causing reduction of biodiversity, water pollution, as well as destruction of natural habitat. Those drastic changes caught attention of the public eye. This motivated people to create ecological organizations that gave hope for those concerned about the future of environment. While some are convinced that there is no point in saving the ocean, my belief is that there are steps that can be taken in order to preserve it.

paragraph 3

2025-02-12 13:14:38 UTC

Therefore we have to take matters into our own hands and come up with an appropriate solution. It’s common knowledge that the fundament of making change is raising the awareness. For instance, the government could create a program in elementary schools to teach kids from an early age about preserving oceans and seas. Secondly, I believe huge companies shall be charged for damaging the oceans ecosystem. Having said that we as a society shouldn’t let them get away with it by boycotting them.

Paragraph 2 (threats)

2025-02-12 13:16:25 UTC

It is common knowledge that currently one of the most concerning problems is water pollution which is detrimental for aquatic life causing many species to be endangered. For instance plastic waste can cause severe damage to sea creatures such as turtles, whales and fish, making it difficult for them to move or in extreme cases threatening their lives. Another burning issue is overfishing, which is now becoming more common. While the demand for fish and crustaceans is increasing, the ecosystem is losing its diversity since specific species are progressively disappearing.