Remake of Remake of Remake of My dazzling padlet by Unnati Ved https://padlet.com/unnati/3k7f0bxth47xiaft Made with a wink and a smile en-us 2020-10-21 06:42:30 UTC 2020-10-21 07:13:23 UTC hello@padlet.com Group 2 - Rishan, Abhimanyu, Hansini and Anvi. https://padlet.com/unnati/3k7f0bxth47xiaft/wish/847685534 character hanging from the edge of a roof by his fingertips

I was hanging from the edge of the roof, trying to pull myself up. "Come on" I told myself "You can do this." I pulled my stomach up. Now my legs. Then I see something; "Oh! Who are you?" I call out. There is a black figure walking across the roof towards me. He says "My friend, I am someone you know. Think about it." I think for about a nanosecond when he says "So you don't know? Ah well, the lesser the better. I am sorry my friend, but I have to do this." Then he got up and started pushing me off the roof "What are you doing?" I say. He gives no answer. He just says "Good bye." I fall off the roof into an endless black void.....................

English - 6,7, 6, 6,6= 6.5
show not tell - 7, 6, 6,6,- 6.5 
avg 6.5 ]]> 2020-10-21 06:43:35 UTC https://padlet.com/unnati/3k7f0bxth47xiaft/wish/847685534 group 3 https://padlet.com/unnati/3k7f0bxth47xiaft/wish/847685762 Robert is Hiding behind the bank. so when the bankers go to lunch he could come and steal some money. Or at the Night he could come and steal some money so when the bankers were eating lunch Robert dice a black coat puts A black Chennai on his head and goes inside the bank a banker forgot to get his wallet from his room invent to get back when he saw Robert he screamed and went to tell the head of the bank.]]> 2020-10-21 06:43:42 UTC https://padlet.com/unnati/3k7f0bxth47xiaft/wish/847685762 Group 1 https://padlet.com/unnati/3k7f0bxth47xiaft/wish/847686180 Noel was trapped in the cupboard after almost getting strangled by a strange man who appeared out of thin air. By the time he got out, the strange man was gone.

English - 7,6,6,-6.5
show not tell - 4, 3, - 3.5 ]]> 2020-10-21 06:43:53 UTC https://padlet.com/unnati/3k7f0bxth47xiaft/wish/847686180 Group 3 https://padlet.com/unnati/3k7f0bxth47xiaft/wish/847687701 character is hiding behind the counter of a bank-

Robbert the robber comes into a bank and blends in with the crowd. He sneaks behind the counter and stays there all day and at night when everyone leaves, he stuffs 

English - 8,9,8, = 8.5
show not tell - 7.5, 9,8= 8.5 ]]> 2020-10-21 06:44:37 UTC https://padlet.com/unnati/3k7f0bxth47xiaft/wish/847687701 Group- 2 https://padlet.com/unnati/3k7f0bxth47xiaft/wish/847691594 I had prepared half of my body, ready to die, as i was hanging on a weak roof by 2 of my fingertips, now one, and now none, i fell, 20 floors down, onto the road. But i was alive. I don’t know how, but i was alive

points - english - 5.5
show not tell - 5.7
avg - 5.6/10]]> 2020-10-21 06:46:24 UTC https://padlet.com/unnati/3k7f0bxth47xiaft/wish/847691594 The head of the bank was so angry and went to the bankers room to see Robert when he went to the room Robert vanished the Banka got so angry andnight she went to the bank with a torchlight and saw Robert And pulled years before he could Escape and took him to the police The police told what has he done the head of the bank told he came to a bank to steal some money the police was too angry and said Ron Robert you have to stay near me in the jail for a month Robert was so upset and said to the police that she didn’t do anything the police said okay but the banker said she did steal money then the police said give your bag when he open the bag he saw the money Robert was scared she was trapped in jail for a month When he came out Robert said to himself that I will never go to the bank and steal money ever again then after year when Robert forgot then he went to the bank and then just remember what happened last year then when his phone ringed The bankers thought it was a thief then the head of the bank got annoyed and said catch the thief when the bankers went Robert vanished and then he never went to the bank ever again. https://padlet.com/unnati/3k7f0bxth47xiaft/wish/847701888 2020-10-21 06:51:04 UTC https://padlet.com/unnati/3k7f0bxth47xiaft/wish/847701888 Then robbers daughter wanted to be a Thief Robert told his daughter what happened to him when he was a Thief His daughter was scared toO Andknow one in his family wanted to be a thief ever again https://padlet.com/unnati/3k7f0bxth47xiaft/wish/847725986 2020-10-21 07:01:51 UTC https://padlet.com/unnati/3k7f0bxth47xiaft/wish/847725986