Powerful Personal Narratives by Gabrielle Shkreli https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v Answer each of the following questions in the Padlet. Use specific examples/details from the story and make sure your name is on the post. en-us 2022-09-19 15:27:49 UTC 2022-09-22 12:30:06 UTC hello@padlet.com Marius 23gheorghem https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305148071 sets the setting shows it's in 2001 and a championship game and shows him struggling by how he thinks he is not good enough ]]> 2022-09-20 15:01:54 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305148071 Marius 23gheorghem https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305154041 The details that stood out to me the most is when he talks about how he doesn't think he good enough saying that there was "only one possible lesson to take away: that I just wasn’t good enough." 
another things that stood out to me was after his mom gave him a speech he talks about how much it hit him saying "Man…. that moment stuck with me."

]]> 2022-09-20 15:05:10 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305154041 Jack https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305157553 I feel like the sentences were acually a moderate length.]]> 2022-09-20 15:06:55 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305157553 Josue https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305160029 shows that it is 2001 aau tournament finals after a loss him thinking that he isnt good enough.]]> 2022-09-20 15:08:13 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305160029 Marius 23gheorghem https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305160087 starts with the struggle and how he is feeling then goes through and how he felt like he hit a all time low and was gonna give up and thought it was all over then his mom taught him a lesson that he still goes by to this day and he talks about examples of how he still uses the lesson today]]> 2022-09-20 15:08:15 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305160087 Jack https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305161101 She points out how much older her brother is, then states that she was a suprise]]> 2022-09-20 15:08:51 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305161101 Lorcan https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305161133 The begining curry was playin in his 13 u aau championship in tennesse and when he went out there he played bad infront of people and he was very down after the game saying that maybe he just isnt good enough ]]> 2022-09-20 15:08:52 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305161133 Marius 23gheorghem https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305161184 he uses a lot of short sentences.]]> 2022-09-20 15:08:54 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305161184 the sentences are a mix of short and long 23macintyrej1_1 https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305161783 2022-09-20 15:09:12 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305161783 Marius 23gheorghem https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305163810 he ends the story on how in present day he still uses the lesson his mom taught him all the years ago, he says whenever he is disrespected he always tells himself "This is no one’s story to write but mine. It’s no one’s story but mine."
This is effective since he shows how one lesson really can change his life and you see him go from being at a all-time low at the start of the story by the end you see him succeeding]]> 2022-09-20 15:10:18 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305163810 23massadj1_1 https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305164114 the author starts off by saying the age difference between her and her brother, and how she was a huge surprise to the family; unexpected.]]> 2022-09-20 15:10:26 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305164114 he went out and played his aau championship but lost and played badly in front of a lot of people, he thought that maybe he wasnt good enough and got really down on himself 23macintyrej1_1 https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305164193 2022-09-20 15:10:29 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305164193 Josue https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305165746 he said how he was staying in a holiday inn express in Tennessee, so just a visual. He also goes into detail on how it felt after losing a big game like that. a piece of language that stood out to me was the talk with his mom saying that no one can write your story but you.]]> 2022-09-20 15:11:15 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305165746 Josue https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305168891 starts with the game and how he was feeling after, then how he had the talk with his mom and how that stuck with him.
To the end where he still uses that piece of advice even in the nba. ]]> 2022-09-20 15:12:55 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305168891 Josue https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305170559 uses a couple of sentences into a paragraph then back into a sentence. ]]> 2022-09-20 15:13:38 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305170559 lorcan https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305171707 The details that stould out to me was curry just thinking that he wasnt good enough becuase ive felt that way beofre . You just fell down about a bad game and all these thoghts just start going through your mind . " Like, I wasn’t being a hothead. I wasn’t mad at losing. I was just…… down. I was in my turtle shell " .]]> 2022-09-20 15:14:08 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305171707 23massadj1_1 https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305171998 the sentences are long/short, but i also noticed how she is spacing new ideas in different paragraphs. she ended up making jokes about what people thought about her scar and kinda connects them to her personal life.]]> 2022-09-20 15:14:19 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305171998 Edlie https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305172181 Fey separates the paragraph to show the story in order and to show how she started to hate how people commented on her scar to her accepting how she feels towards these egomaniacs.]]> 2022-09-20 15:14:25 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305172181 Josue https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305173907 just like the story we read it brings him back to the present day where he still uses what he learned that day to push through even at the pro level. this is effective because as you can see he is one of the greatest players to ever play and its not for nothing.]]> 2022-09-20 15:15:19 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305173907 Lorcan https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305174540 The author usally has paragahs and sentences togehter but he has a good aout of short snetences moslty when its a though not what us going on ]]> 2022-09-20 15:15:38 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305174540 The details that stood out to me is when he starts saying that he might not be good enough. he talked with his mom after and he said that that moment really stuck with him. 23macintyrej1_1 https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305174655 2022-09-20 15:15:41 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305174655 Lorcan https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305175392 they use alot of short sentences not really any long ones ]]> 2022-09-20 15:16:04 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305175392 he doesnt write in paragraphs, he writes in small sentences. 23macintyrej1_1 https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305179024 2022-09-20 15:18:01 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305179024 Lorcan https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305179400 at the end of the story is Currys mom talking to him to make him feel better and when she is talking to him she gives him a very important . "This is no one’s story to write but mine." ]]> 2022-09-20 15:18:14 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305179400 Edlie https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305181664 She chooses to start the story by when she started to be moms belly, then to start of school. ending in how she reflects back on that period of time in her life ]]> 2022-09-20 15:19:29 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2305181664 Curry's mother talks to him towards the end of the narrative to try to make him feel better, and she teaches him a good lesson 23macintyrej1_1 https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2308657164 2022-09-22 12:29:12 UTC https://padlet.com/shkrelig/3k4hnrywbh8xvi1v/wish/2308657164