Show, Not Tell Activity by Mrs Tan - Shirui https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18 Use 'Show, not tell' to describe the actions/feelings of the characters. en-us 2018-03-23 23:59:35 UTC 2024-10-15 00:56:03 UTC hello@padlet.com Helping words capricornger https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/245681640 Helping words:
lethargic
dragging her feet
slouching
breathing hard / panting heavily
faced was flushed
perspiring profusely
Beads of perspiration rolled down her face.]]> 2018-03-24 00:04:04 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/245681640 Helping words capricornger https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/245682173 could not believe her luck/eyes
shoulders slumped
walking up the flights of steps 
her jaw dropped
speechless]]> 2018-03-24 00:15:10 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/245682173 Helping words capricornger https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/245682213 walked up
rendered his helping hands
She smiled from ear to ear.
broke into a warm smile
eyes sparkled
Her eyes lit with joy. 

How did Mrs Teo feel when Tom offered to help? ]]> 2018-03-24 00:15:59 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/245682213 Helping words capricornger https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/245682239 complimented / praised him
thanked profusely
grateful
thankful
helpful
civic-mindedness
neighbourly
He beamed with pride/joy for doing a good deed]]> 2018-03-24 00:16:35 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/245682239 Name:Ethel,Deiondre https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246353903 Tom walked up to Mrs Teo and asked her politely, "Do you need any help?" Mrs Teo smiled from  ear to ear upon hearing that]]> 2018-03-27 04:29:42 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246353903 Natelie,Anaqin. https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246353928 Tom  walked up and asked, "Do you need help?" Mrs Teo's eyes lit up. "Yes I do."]]> 2018-03-27 04:29:55 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246353928 Wen Mian and Renee https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246353931 Mrs Teo was dragging her feet and slouching from carrying the heavy bags. Her face was flushed. Beads of perspiration rolled down Mrs Teo's face. ]]> 2018-03-27 04:29:59 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246353931 Yu Ning,Lisa https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246353953 Panting heavily, beads of perspiration rolled down Mrs Teo's face. She was very lethargic, holding on to the bags of grocery in her sweaty hands.]]> 2018-03-27 04:30:10 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246353953 Name Jeriel , Kagan https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246353972 Mrs Teo was shocked speechless and her  jaw was wide open when she realised that the lift was out of order. She now had to climb up the tall flight of steps. Beads of perspiration rolled down her face as she dragged herself up. ]]> 2018-03-27 04:30:17 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246353972 TING WEI,LUCIUS https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246353990 Mrs Teo praised Tom for his help. Tom was glad to have done a good deed.]]> 2018-03-27 04:30:25 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246353990 Siddharth, Wen Kai https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354017 "Oh no!" exclaimed Mrs Teo. She forgot her car keys. She ran back to the lift lobby. To her horror, the lift was out of order! Her shoulders slumped and her jaw droppedSpeechless , she ended up taking the flight of stairs.]]> 2018-03-27 04:30:40 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354017 Xavier and Yashwanth https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354028 Tom  walked up to the teacher and rendered his helping hand. The teacher started to smile from ear to ear. Her eyes sparkled like pure diamonds. "Thank you Tom for helping me," she praised Tom.]]> 2018-03-27 04:30:48 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354028 Khushi, Si Jing https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354109 Mrs Teo was dragging her feet and her pms were sweating from carrying the heavy bags. ]]> 2018-03-27 04:31:42 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354109 Aaradhana,Amelia https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354110 Beads of perspiration rolled down Mrs Teo's  face. She was slouching and dragging her feet. She was so lethargic that when she entered her house, she placed the heavy bags onto the dining table and plopped herself onto her comfy sofa.''FinallyI I have reached home!'']]> 2018-03-27 04:31:42 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354110 Charissa ,Celine https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354203 Mrs Teo's heart was in her mouth, beads of perspiration rolled down her face. She could not believe her luck. Her shoulders slumped as she thought of walking up the flight of stairs.]]> 2018-03-27 04:32:42 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354203 Yiting ,Jia pei https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354215  Mrs Teo's eyes sparkled and she smiled from ear to ear. She broke into a warm smile and her eyes lit with joy when she heard Tom offered his help.]]> 2018-03-27 04:32:49 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354215 Joshua,Vijay https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354268 Mrs Teo was tired from carrying  
the gigantic bags, dragging them along the street as she been walking for hours.

]]> 2018-03-27 04:33:26 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354268 Name: Faith, Evelyn https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354284 Mrs Teo complimented Tom for helping her. She offered Tom some sweets. Tom accepted the sweets and thanked Mrs Teo. 'I should be the one thanking you,' she explained. 'I just wanted to do a good deed,' Tom pointed out shyly.]]> 2018-03-27 04:33:35 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354284 Esha,Nipuna. https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354326 Mrs.Teo thanked Tom profusely.Her eyes sparkled. "What would you like in return?" she asked. "Nothing at all, Madam."]]> 2018-03-27 04:34:02 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354326 Yan Tze,Mukundan https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354353 Tom rendered his helping hand to Mrs Teo. Mrs Teo  asked for help as she was carrying a lot of bags. Tom offered his help.]]> 2018-03-27 04:34:25 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354353 Kushi, Si Jing https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354589 Mrs Teo was dragging her feet and her palms were sweating from carrying lots of bags.]]> 2018-03-27 04:36:50 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354589 Caleb,Ryan https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354606 Mrs Teo's shoulders slumped and she was perspiring profusely. She was slouching and dragging her feet while carrying the heavy bags. ]]> 2018-03-27 04:37:04 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354606 Keryn,Zhi Wei https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354877 Mrs Teo could not believe her eyes. Her shoulders slumped so she ended up walking up the flights of stairs because the lift broke down.]]> 2018-03-27 04:39:11 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246354877 Wen Mian and Renee https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246355021 Mrs Teo's eyes widened in disbelief when she realised that the lift was out of order. ]]> 2018-03-27 04:40:28 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246355021 Name 1:Chloe,Name.2:Leaya https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246355032 Tom walked up and  rendered a helping hand as he said politely, "Do you need any help?" "Of course!" Mrs Teo eyes sparked as she gave a warm smile.]]> 2018-03-27 04:40:39 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246355032 Natelie, Anaqin https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246355135 "Thank you Tom," thanked Mrs Teo. Tom beamed beamed with pride. He knew that he had done a good dead. ]]> 2018-03-27 04:41:49 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246355135 Si Jing , Khushi https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246355194 Mrs Teo's heart was in her throat when she realised that the lift was out of order. She could not believe her eyes and stood like a statue. Her mouth widened in fright. Her legs shivered]]> 2018-03-27 04:42:26 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246355194 https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246355665 Mrs Teo's eyes sparkled and she smiled from ear to ear. She broke into a warm smile and her eyes lit up upon hearing Tom's offer. ]]> 2018-03-27 04:48:37 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246355665 Yi ting ,Jia Pei https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246355804 Mrs Teo thanked Tom profusely for his great help. Tom beamed with pride as he knew he had done a good deed. "We should help our neighbours, ''Tom replied. ]]> 2018-03-27 04:50:02 UTC https://padlet.com/capricornger/3D_shownottell_18/wish/246355804