https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj Colonialism en-us 2017-03-26 16:12:20 UTC 2017-03-27 04:11:57 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162679599 2017-03-27 01:31:53 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162679599 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162679618 Imperial expansion and growth (You're missing the sense of European imperialism here) ]]> 2017-03-27 01:31:59 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162679618 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162679766 2017-03-27 01:32:48 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162679766 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162679774 2017-03-27 01:32:53 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162679774 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162679841 the imperial expansion and growing power of power (This is good except for the 'growing power of power'?)

]]> 2017-03-27 01:33:24 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162679841 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162679943 Many activities in opposition to imperialism in whole world internet. Good attempt at a complete paraphrase here. The only problem is the word 'internet'. The 'internet' probablay didn't exist back then ;-)]]> 2017-03-27 01:34:14 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162679943 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162679947 The expansion of Europe's imperia 
I guess you didn't have time to finish? I'll help you finish now: 'The expansion of Europe's imperial dominion and its increase in strength'. ]]> 2017-03-27 01:34:16 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162679947 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162680011 (Remember, 'imperial' is an adjective. An adjective needs a noun, so 'the expansion of Europe's imperial what?']]> 2017-03-27 01:34:40 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162680011 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162680137 the expansion of Europe's imperial and the growing power of it Good stuff, but 'imperial' is an adjective. An adjective needs a noun. So, imperial what? Also, more concise than 'the expansion of it' would be 'its expansion'. ]]> 2017-03-27 01:35:41 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162680137 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162680362 2017-03-27 01:37:30 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162680362 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162680735 The wordwide agitation of the anti-imperialism - I think you could try to paraphrase this further. For example, what is a synonym for 'worldwide'? ]]> 2017-03-27 01:40:27 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162680735 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162680887 An anti-imperialism of tension network in whole world

Good attempt here but I don't know what 'tension network' means. In the original, the meaning is global network', right? 


I 'd like to find a word to replace "agitation " . eheheh
I'd suggest, instead of 'network of agitation', you could write: 'a movement', for example: '...a global movement against imperialism'. 

]]> 2017-03-27 01:41:23 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162680887 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162680907 The worries from all around the globe objecting (the)? imperialism
Good. You are really trying to paraphrase thoroughly here. You're missing a word between 'objecting' and 
'imperialism', though. 

]]> 2017-03-27 01:41:42 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162680907 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162680910 (This is a good attempt but I'm afraid you have changed the meaning of the original. You want to avoid doing this. This paraphrase suggests that the world-wide network against imperialism is a bad thing, but the orignal doesn't)
Consider the following: the global movement against imperialism

]]> 2017-03-27 01:41:43 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162680910 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162681010 The original isn't about the rule of  'the range'. 'The range' isn't a specific amount, if you see what I mean? You could say, 'the range of their rule' instead. ]]> 2017-03-27 01:42:42 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162681010 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162681126 Hang on, you're doing number 3, aren't you? Good attempt. I'd change it slightly to something like the following: 'their rule's range and...' Actually, this is very hard...Hang on a second...I might need to re-phrase it completely. 'The extent and the power of their dominion'. (Doesn't sound as good as the original, though...)

]]> 2017-03-27 01:43:40 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162681126 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162681211 Good stuff, but you could paraphrase further here. 'World-wide'. ]]> 2017-03-27 01:44:22 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162681211 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162681458 'The change atmosphere' doesn't work as a noun phrase. If you use a verb before the noun, it should be an 'ing' form, as in 'the changing atmosphere'. 'Permeate' does not mean 'perform', but means 'to be completely inside something'. So, in the original text, it means that 'change of atmosphere was completely inside the colonies'. How about the following: The desire for change that was spread throughout the colonies'?]]> 2017-03-27 01:46:48 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162681458 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162681996 A great number of colonies were influenced by the changing circumstance. This is a very good attempt, especially the first part, but the second part doesn't quite 'get' the meaning of the original, which is that there was a revolutionary idea in the colonies, an idea that was looking to a future of change, a future very different from the one now. ]]> 2017-03-27 01:52:03 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162681996 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162682091 the wind of change was spreading all over a huge amount of colonies.

Very nice :-)
If you want to make it slightly more concise, you could write: '...was spreading throughout a large...' ('Huge' is a little non-academic)]]> 2017-03-27 01:52:53 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162682091 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162682457 An agitatiinal network for  anti imperialism around the worl. Be careful of spelling here: 'agitational' and 'world'. I probably wouldn't use 'for' here, just before 'anti' as they tend to have an opposite meaning. To avoid any lack of clarity, how about: 'An agitational network of anti-imperialism around the world'? ]]> 2017-03-27 01:56:34 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162682457 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162682696 the changing situation which led to peemeation of colonies. Good try, but 'permeation of colonies' isn't the correct meaning here. As the reader, I would ask 'permeation of what in the colonies'? 'The changing situation which permeated the colonies' would get this meaning, but isn't different enough from the original. How about: 'the changing situation, the idea of which was spread through the colonies...'?]]> 2017-03-27 01:59:26 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162682696 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/3i1idjyq8wjj/wish/162682797 a entirely distinctive public voice and operations
Good attempt here, as you really are trying to get the 'essence' of the original. A few things: an entirely. 'public voice' would be 'public opinion'. 'Operations' is a little too vague, as it doesn't capture the idea of 'range of actions'. You could write, 'a variety of actions'. I think it's ok to keep 'actions' here as you've already paraphrased everything else and the original is the singular 'action', whereas the paraphrase is the plural. 



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