https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq EAP Writing en-us 2017-11-14 17:25:50 UTC 2023-07-25 07:23:12 UTC hello@padlet.com 893978830 https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/206851295 Today,i wrote my first draft for Task I.First,i wrote the summary and then i evaluated the text,i found that some problems in my draft.For instance,i find that my evaluation is too long .So i have to abstract them into 150 words .the other problem is that i do not use some Academic words that make my article much more critical. in addition,i just copy original sentences from the article in my draft.This will lead to rising of the reference of  copying,so i should recombine theses sentences. Furthermore,my draft in lack of logic.I mean that there is no connection between every sentence.                    ]]> 2017-11-14 17:28:05 UTC https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/206851295 893978830 https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/206957498 Draft]]> 2017-11-14 20:28:29 UTC https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/206957498 893978830 https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/208807766 Feedback]]> 2017-11-20 17:16:36 UTC https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/208807766 893978830 https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/208894602 Feedback]]> 2017-11-20 20:56:14 UTC https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/208894602 893978830 https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/209695125 Today,i wrote my first draft for Task 2.First,i wrote the summary and then i evaluated the text,i find it is difficult to find the link between two article and combine them into the summary and evaluation.Because i have to simplify the context of the connection and use a simple sentence structure.I find that it is also Academic words into the article.I 
also find that my sentence are not critical enough to support my point.Next time, i need to review two article again to find the key sentence to make me sentences more critical

]]> 2017-11-23 12:47:30 UTC https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/209695125 893978830 https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/209721368 2017-11-23 14:27:50 UTC https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/209721368 893978830 https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/209721479 2017-11-23 14:28:19 UTC https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/209721479 893978830 https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/211468317 2017-11-29 16:00:07 UTC https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/211468317 893978830 https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/211469281 2017-11-29 16:01:33 UTC https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/211469281 893978830 https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/213373204 Today,i wrote my first draft for Task 2.First,i wrote the summary and then i evaluated the text,i found that it is still not critical because i find it is difficult to use academic phrase in the article,In addition, i do not wire more detail about my evidence to support my evidence, and there is a problem in the link between two article,there is no comparing in the article.Furthermore i found that my evaluation just include the advantages about two article, i think i should also talk some limitation about two article such as some biased in two articles.]]> 2017-12-05 16:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/213373204 893978830 https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/213378530 2017-12-05 16:33:32 UTC https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/213378530 893978830 https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/213379227 2017-12-05 16:34:56 UTC https://padlet.com/893978830/3gw9t8l4z5sq/wish/213379227