https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk How do you view it differently now? en-us 2019-04-26 10:47:23 UTC 2019-04-26 13:33:05 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354443833 Short sentences 
Chronological order]]> 2019-04-26 13:31:28 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354443833 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354443863 I’ve learned that it’s not just about what it is that’s in it but what the reader thinks when reading this and what makes them want to carry on reading -Shearn]]> 2019-04-26 13:31:33 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354443863 jpotts18 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354443866 I learnt that I need to think about what the writer wants the reader to think.]]> 2019-04-26 13:31:34 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354443866 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354443961 I now know that structure is about the order or the way that the author lays out his writing to pull the reader’s attention in.]]> 2019-04-26 13:31:43 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354443961 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354443977 I now know what techniques I need to use to answer the question.]]> 2019-04-26 13:31:45 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354443977 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444002 I can see how the author shifts our attention with how the sentences are structured and can change how we think of the story.]]> 2019-04-26 13:31:49 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444002 opharoah18 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444009 He talks about the person and the knife and then he moves onto the murders and the toddler escaping



Hlep me get out of here please]]> 2019-04-26 13:31:50 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444009 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444066 I learned that I need to think about the different kinds of structures that are in the text such as short sentences and flashbacks]]> 2019-04-26 13:31:59 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444066 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444090 Give learned that you use different type sentence lengths and types ]]> 2019-04-26 13:32:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444090 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444109 In media res

Building tension]]> 2019-04-26 13:32:05 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444109 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444172 Shift and focus and how to use them in sentences and can explain what they mean ]]> 2019-04-26 13:32:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444172 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444175 You can use short and quick sentences to build up the readers intrest ]]> 2019-04-26 13:32:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444175 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444200 2019-04-26 13:32:17 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444200 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444206 He uses in media res because In the text it states, “there was a hand in the darkness and it held a knife which builds suspense so your intrigued to read on - Harvey ]]> 2019-04-26 13:32:18 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444206 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444265 I have learnt that to answer this question we need to think about how the writer, structures the opening, the middle and the ending, not just how it is on a whole.]]> 2019-04-26 13:32:27 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444265 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444266 I’ve learned that you can start a story off with tension by using in media rez]]> 2019-04-26 13:32:27 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444266 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444300 I learnt how to link what the text is suggesting into my answer to the question and how it creates and affect (well, sort of)]]> 2019-04-26 13:32:31 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444300 jbusson18 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444308 That it is a bit like the p and second z in pezz]]> 2019-04-26 13:32:32 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444308 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444357 In media res
Short senteces
build up sentences]]> 2019-04-26 13:32:38 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444357 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444358 I could use the tense of the writing and the order of how it’s written in ]]> 2019-04-26 13:32:39 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444358 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444360 I have learned about how to structure sentences using in media res and how to use shift focus zoom]]> 2019-04-26 13:32:39 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444360 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444367 Ryan:

Short sentences, chronological- order, focus, zoom, shift   ]]> 2019-04-26 13:32:40 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444367 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444415 I know that you need to change the structure of a story to make it intriguing and unique.]]> 2019-04-26 13:32:44 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444415 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444503 I have learnt how the different factors that the author uses when he creates a book and how to answer a question on it]]> 2019-04-26 13:32:54 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444503 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444553 I have learned that structure is not just about the layout or order in which things are written but about things like short sentences, rate, in media res, shift focus and zoom and narrative devices]]> 2019-04-26 13:33:04 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444553 https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444562 He uses short sentences and paragraphs to introduce things faster and to capture the readers attention. They will also use in media res and chronological order to entice the reader. You can also use shift, focus and zoom]]> 2019-04-26 13:33:05 UTC https://padlet.com/lbrugnoli/3f8x1b60jsjk/wish/354444562