https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m You'll revise a piece of text Ms. Hussey gives you for rhythm and other mechanical errors (spelling, grammar, punctuation). Make sure your name is with your post so that you can receive credit. en-us 2021-03-14 19:17:18 UTC 2021-04-21 22:27:14 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/270f.png laurenhussey https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1307917924 BANG it was so loud I screamed what was it I had no idea I ran downstairs but it was dark I tried to flick the switch but the power was out this was my house I knew it from memory but I was scared to wander beyond the where i felt safe suddenly something ran quickly by it made a crackling sound and it was then that I knew it was the same thing that same creature from  the last time suddenly i wasnt scared i was determined id get him this time if it was the last thing i did]]> 2021-03-14 19:19:51 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1307917924 ncruz0078 https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317190813 BANG! it was so loud, I screamed. what was it, I had no idea, I ran downstairs but it was dark. I tried to flick the switch but the power was out. this was my house I knew it from memory but I was scared to wander beyond the where i felt safe. suddenly something ran quickly by, it made a crackling sound and it was then that I knew it was the same thing. that same creature from last time. suddenly i wasnt scared, i was determined to get him this time, if it was the last thing i did.]]> 2021-03-16 18:03:38 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317190813 https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317191891 BANG!! it was so loud. I screamed but what was it I had no idea. I ran downstairs but it was dark. I tried to flick the switch but the power was out and this was my house. I knew it from memory but I was scared to wander beyond where i felt safe. Suddenly something ran quickly by me and it made a crackling sound. It was then that I knew it was the same thing.That same creature from the last time. Suddenly I wasn't scared and I was determined I'd get him this time if it was the last thing I did.]]> 2021-03-16 18:03:51 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317191891 https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317192794 BANG! It was so loud I screamed, what was it I had no idea. I ran downstairs but it was dark. I tried to flick the switch but the power was out but this was my house I knew it from memory but I was scared to wander beyond the where. I felt safe suddenly something ran quickly by it made a crackling sound and it was then that I knew it was the same thing that same creature from the last time. Suddenly I wasn't scared I was determined Id get him this time if it was the last thing I did.]]> 2021-03-16 18:04:01 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317192794 LizbethHernandezperiod5 https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317192866 BANGG! it was excruciatingly loud, I shrieked ¨what was it?¨ I impulsively ran downstairs. Pitch back, I flicked the switch, then realizing the power was out. I was too frightened to wander beyond where I felt safe. Suddenly, something fled by making a crackling sound. At that moment I knew it was the creature I had previously encountered. No longer was I scared, I was determined to get him this time...If it was the last thing I did.]]> 2021-03-16 18:04:02 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317192866 https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317193229 BANG! It was so loud and I screamed. What was it? I had no idea. I ran downstairs but it was dark. I tried to flick the switch but the power was out. This was my house and I knew it from memory. I was scared to wander beyond. I felt safe suddenly but something ran quickly and it made a crackling sound. It was then that I knew it was the same creature from the last time. Suddenly, I wasn't scared and I was determined to get him this time. If it was the last thing I did!]]> 2021-03-16 18:04:07 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317193229 mmarcos002 https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317193419 BANG!! It was so loud I screamed. what was it? I had no idea I ran downstairs but it was dark. I tried to flick the switch but the power was out. This was my house I knew it from memory, but I was scared to wander beyond the where I felt safe. Suddenly something ran quickly by it made a crackling sound and it was then that I knew it was the same thing that same creature from the last time.Suddenly I wasn't scared i was determined id get him this time if it was the last thing I did.]]> 2021-03-16 18:04:09 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317193419 https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317194887 BANG it was so loud I screamed what was it I had no idea I ran downstairs but it was dark I tried to flick the switch but the power was out this was my house I knew it from memory but I was scared to wander beyond the where I felt safe suddenly something ran quickly by it made a crackling sound and it was then that I knew it was the same thing that same creature from  the last time suddenly I wasn't scared I was determined id get him this time if it was the last thing I did]]> 2021-03-16 18:04:27 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317194887 https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317195260 BANG! It was so loud I screamed. What was it? I had no idea. I ran downstairs but, it was dark. I tried to flick the switch, but the power was out this was my house. I knew it from memory, but I was scared to wander beyond the where I felt safe suddenly something ran quickly by it made a crackling sound and it was then that I knew it was the same thing that same creature from the last time suddenly I wasn't scared I was determined I'd get him this time if it was the last thing I did.]]> 2021-03-16 18:04:32 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317195260 https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317195369 2021-03-16 18:04:33 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317195369 https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317197632 BANG it was so loud, I screamed what was it I had no idea. I ran downstairs but it was dark. I tried to flick the switch but the power was out at my house. I knew it but I was scared to wander beyond the where. I felt safe suddenly.Something ran quickly by it made a crackling sound and it was then that I knew it was the same thing that same creature from  the last time suddenly I wasnt scared I was determined I get him this time if it was the last thing i did. ]]> 2021-03-16 18:05:00 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317197632 lbarreto0003 https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317199775 BANG! It was so loud and I screamed. What was it? I had no idea. I ran downstairs, but it was dark. I tried to flick the switch, but the power was out. This was my house, I knew it from memory but I was scared to wander beyond the where I felt safe suddenly something ran quickly by it made a crackling sound and it was then that I knew it was the same thing that same creature from  the last time suddenly I wasn't scared I was determined id get him this time if it was the last thing I did. ]]> 2021-03-16 18:05:28 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317199775 ealasalva001 https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317204787 BANG! It was so loud, and I screamed. What was it? I had no idea. I ran downstairs, but it was dark. I tried to flick the switch, but the power was out. This was my house. I knew it from memory, but I was scared to wander beyond where I felt safe. Suddenly something ran quickly by it, made a crackling sound, and it was then that I knew it was the same thing that same creature from the last time. Suddenly I wasn't scared. I was determined I'd get him this time if it was the last thing I did. ]]> 2021-03-16 18:06:24 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317204787 mbrackett0002 https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317210201 2021-03-16 18:07:26 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317210201 jgonzales0091 https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317212411 BANG!!! It was really loud, I had screamed "What was that?". I had no idea what it was so I ran downstairs but it was pitch black, I tried to flick the switch but the power was out in my own house. I knew it from my memory but I was horrified to wander beyond the area that I felt safe suddenly something dashed quickly by there making a crackling sound. That was when I knew it was the same same creature from the last time suddenly I wasn't as scared as before instead I was determined that I would capture him this time if it was the last thing that I would have ever done.]]> 2021-03-16 18:07:53 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317212411 https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317219227 BANG! It was so loud, I screamed what was it I had no idea I ran downstairs but it was dark I tried to flick the switch but the power was out this was my house I knew it from memory but I was scared to wander beyond the where I felt safe suddenly something ran quickly by it made a crackling sound and it was then that I knew it was the same thing that same creature from  the last time suddenly I wasn't scared I was determined I'd get him this time if it was the last thing I did. 
-LeTroy Pruitt Jr. ]]> 2021-03-16 18:09:09 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317219227 https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317223431 BANG it was so loud, I screamed. what was it, I had no idea, I ran downstairs but it was dark. I tried to flick the switch but the power was out. this was my house I knew it from memory but I was scared to wander beyond the where i felt safe. suddenly something ran quickly by, it made a crackling sound and it was then that I knew it was the same thing. that same creature from last time. suddenly i wasn't scared, i was determined to get him this time if it was the last thing i did.]]> 2021-03-16 18:10:00 UTC https://padlet.com/laurenhussey/3ezg9w6g999x0d7m/wish/1317223431