https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k en-us 2023-03-20 01:30:54 UTC 2023-04-24 05:09:33 UTC hello@padlet.com masi28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522908129 I think you could've explained the interior more by talking about how many bedrooms, how many people the house is available for and what type of showers.]]> 2023-03-20 04:28:57 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522908129 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522908822 WWW- You did lots of research with showed through with all of the different features you have included.
EBI- Next time you should include a waste program.]]> 2023-03-20 04:29:45 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522908822 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522909127 I think that the presentation was very good and informative,it also covered a wide range of factors needed for a sustainable house. ]]> 2023-03-20 04:30:04 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522909127 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522909881 I think you should include more statistics or facts and face the audience more (don't read off the screen).]]> 2023-03-20 04:30:46 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522909881 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522909934 You did all of the success criteria and you exlained everything clearly]]> 2023-03-20 04:30:49 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522909934 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522910101 WWW:i like how you really took advantage of the environment i think it really worked 

EBI: maybe next time you could add in sustainable furniture. ]]> 2023-03-20 04:30:58 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522910101 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522910173 you could have practiced the speech more as you all seemed unsure about what to say]]> 2023-03-20 04:31:03 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522910173 kamd28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522910416 WWW: you gave reasons to everything you said and had a lot of detail
EBI: better presenting, less looking at the board]]> 2023-03-20 04:31:18 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522910416 nygu28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522910586 WWW - There was a lot information about the materials and why they were good for the house
EBI - Use more statistics ]]> 2023-03-20 04:31:29 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522910586 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522910648 EBI: you could have researched the location better because perth has alot of hurricanes]]> 2023-03-20 04:31:32 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522910648 neto28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522910869 WWW: I like how they all took turns speaking and researched a lot while explaining it.

EBI: Next time don't read off the board]]> 2023-03-20 04:31:48 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522910869 kamd28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522922124 WWW: Lots of detail about the house
EBI: more pictures and diagrams]]> 2023-03-20 04:42:46 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522922124 masi28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522922168 WWW: you explained and said detailed things about individual stuff and had a very detailed explanation of the interior

EBI: I liked the details, however i think there could be more photos that would make it even more detailed and more encouriging]]> 2023-03-20 04:42:49 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522922168 emjo28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522922538 www: you guys had very specific things that you wanted in and on your house

ebi: next time you should share the speaking time because anna spoke most and sean didn't speak at all]]> 2023-03-20 04:43:09 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522922538 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522922722 You considered all of the success criteria and you described and exlained everything really clearly. I could icture the house in my mind]]> 2023-03-20 04:43:17 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522922722 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522922858 WWW: A lot of detail and research

EBI: Distribute the work more evenly (let Sean say something)]]> 2023-03-20 04:43:25 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522922858 nygu28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522923049 WWW - There was a lot of reaserch and lots of description.
EBI - More pictures]]> 2023-03-20 04:43:37 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522923049 neto28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522923061 WWW: I like how you drew the interior and made the presentation really specific.

EBI: Next time more pictures and let everyone speak equally.]]> 2023-03-20 04:43:37 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522923061 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522923313 EBI : i think you should spread the work more evenly]]> 2023-03-20 04:43:49 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522923313 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522923356 WWW: i think what you did with the waste was good and really made sense and would definitely help.

EBI: if there where more pictures.]]> 2023-03-20 04:43:52 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522923356 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522923779 I think it was very interesting it was explained well and it was very focused]]> 2023-03-20 04:44:17 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522923779 almb28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522923841 WWW: You did well on your explaining of why you should make your house cooler and you detailed your explanation of the interior 

EBI: I think you should add more pictures to show the audience   ]]> 2023-03-20 04:44:21 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522923841 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522925800 WWW: did more then she asked you to do and presentation was good
EBI:Spread out the work]]> 2023-03-20 04:46:13 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522925800 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522951017 www: you did lots of research and were able to explain it well
EBI: more pictures and diagrams]]> 2023-03-20 05:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522951017 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522951180 EBI: I think it would be better if you guys rehearsed your presentation more]]> 2023-03-20 05:01:05 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522951180 nygu28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522951207 WWW - lots of information about the building materials and waste and energy 
EBI - Don't repeat the facts]]> 2023-03-20 05:01:06 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522951207 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522951305 www: Lots of research done and you explained all of it also made sure to make everything is not far away and making sure to grow every thing locally
EBI: Desalination is a very energy consuming thing some solar panels wont cover it
  ]]> 2023-03-20 05:01:11 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522951305 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522951366 WWW: Great 3D design and lots of information

EBIs: Don't repeat the same information, shorter sentences and face the audience]]> 2023-03-20 05:01:14 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522951366 dhpr28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522951415 www: you did a lot of research because you explained a lot about how you would get food and how you would deal with waste
ebi: Other people speak because Khudeja spoke the most. ]]> 2023-03-20 05:01:17 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522951415 almb28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522952000 WWW: You did lots of research and you explained well on the different gardens 

EBI: You can add more pictures to show more details ]]> 2023-03-20 05:01:31 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522952000 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522952290 I think that thepresentation was good]]> 2023-03-20 05:01:48 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522952290 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522952456 WWW- great detail and lots of research]]> 2023-03-20 05:01:55 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522952456 emjo28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522960492 www: you just hit most of the success criteria SLAYY]]> 2023-03-20 05:07:52 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522960492 masi28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522960973 WWW: I think you explained your location very deeply and that really showed and convinced a-lot

EBI: I think you could've shown an actually photo of the end product of the house to make it more clear and show what it actually looks like.]]> 2023-03-20 05:08:13 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522960973 dhpr28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522961282 WWW: You thought about how you would collect water and energy very well

EBI: everybody spoke]]> 2023-03-20 05:08:24 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522961282 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522961575 I think you should have shown us the whole house

]]> 2023-03-20 05:08:37 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522961575 almb28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522961664 WWW: You did well on explaining the different features

EBI: everyone in the group spoke ]]> 2023-03-20 05:08:41 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522961664 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522961668 I think you explained your location verry well and it was verry informative]]> 2023-03-20 05:08:41 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522961668 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522961996 EBI: I think you guys should even out the work load on the presentation ]]> 2023-03-20 05:08:54 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522961996 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522962321 WWW: Made sure to describe your area and made sure to show us all your ideas well.
EBI: Make sure everyone presents ]]> 2023-03-20 05:09:08 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522962321 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522962383 WWW: Considered and chose the location really well
EBI: Distribute the work more evenly]]> 2023-03-20 05:09:11 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522962383 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522962532 WWW- great consideration over the location of the house and liked different features very well.
EBI- You should include how all of the features fit togeather]]> 2023-03-20 05:09:17 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522962532 neto28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522962608 WWW: There was a lot of detail.

EBI: Next time make sure everyone equally speaks]]> 2023-03-20 05:09:20 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522962608 nygu28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522962634 www - Explained the location very well 
ebi - everyone presents  ]]> 2023-03-20 05:09:21 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522962634 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522963912 WWW: you were able to choose a good location which is sustainable
EBI: make sure everyone presents equally]]> 2023-03-20 05:10:14 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2522963912 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565161780 WWW: Very big world and you can tell they worked very hard on it.
EBI: Make sure work is distributed evenly because some people were speaking more then others.]]> 2023-04-24 05:00:31 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565161780 masi28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565162398 WWW: you made a very good presentation and it was very specific and you explained each item very well.
EBI: Maybe you could've explained the waste of the house]]> 2023-04-24 05:01:07 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565162398 reha28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565162589 WWW : cool additions to the world. out in much effort and thought about the ideas well.

EBI: could think about the materials you used in Minecraft because it seems unrealistic in sum parts]]> 2023-04-24 05:01:18 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565162589 dhpr28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565162684 WWW: You added a market that has locally sourced crops

EBI: You added the meats]]> 2023-04-24 05:01:25 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565162684 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565162903 WWW
It was a good description and had lots of accurate detail.]]> 2023-04-24 05:01:39 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565162903 emjo28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565162988 www: you really thought about how and what makes your house sustainable.

 ]]> 2023-04-24 05:01:43 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565162988 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565162994 WWW: you explained thoroughly about the features you've decided to use and linked it well to your chosen location.
EBI: include how to manage your waste, let nehir speak more]]> 2023-04-24 05:01:43 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565162994 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565163017 WWW: I liked that you did lots of research and you were able to explain the different features of the house
EBI: include how you manage your waste]]> 2023-04-24 05:01:45 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565163017 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565163185 WWW: I think you have made a decent presentation on minecraft and have put a lot of effort in researching about the materials
EBI: if you put in how you manage your waste and speak clearly ]]> 2023-04-24 05:01:55 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565163185 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565163369 Www: you did a good job explaining and researching
Ebi: Could have been louder and didn't explain how to manage waist.  ]]> 2023-04-24 05:02:08 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565163369 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565164485 WWW: I think is was very well thought through and the presentation (graphics and explanation) were good.

EBI: It would be better if you could include more about waste and if the video linked slightly more to the speech.]]> 2023-04-24 05:03:12 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565164485 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565164722 WWW- really like how much work and detail have been put into both into making the house design and designing and entire communities to show how your house can get all of its necessities.

EBI- how is waste overall handled?]]> 2023-04-24 05:03:28 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565164722 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565165046 WWW: The presentation of the houses and the sustainable aspects of the area was great.

EBI: Have more people speak up.]]> 2023-04-24 05:03:48 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565165046 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565166193 www: no transport is needed. Very good house and neighborhood.added a marcket that had local crops
ebi:next time make people speak equally and make cooper speak louder and clearer]]> 2023-04-24 05:04:34 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565166193 emjo28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565168370 www: i like you ideas of what can make you house more attractive to people


ebi: less laughing  ]]> 2023-04-24 05:06:50 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565168370 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565168444 WWW: The presentation is eye catching and you were able to do lots of research on this topic
EBI: zach, you need to project your voice so everyone can hear you, be more confident ]]> 2023-04-24 05:06:55 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565168444 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565168762 WWW: you have put in most of the success criteria in your presentation and also laid out the presentation very well

EBI: I think you should have added more photos to help us visualize what it would look like]]> 2023-04-24 05:07:16 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565168762 masi28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565168870 WWW: you explained each slide very well and it was laid out very nice. you also explained each topic and had very detailed paragraphs that was easy to see

EBI: maybe you could've added more photos which would really convince the audience]]> 2023-04-24 05:07:23 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565168870 reha28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565169689 WWW: Good explanations and examples with good details and ideas in the house.
Zach was the best(probably did everything)

EBI:  you could add a reference or example on what the house could look like so it is easier to imagine. you could be more confident while speaking and speak louder. don't laugh.]]> 2023-04-24 05:08:13 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565169689 dhpr28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565169989 WWW: I like that you used wind turbines and solar panels in your house since it is very sustainable.

EBI: You should not read off the screen and you should look at your audience more and be more specific with the materials that you used in your house.]]> 2023-04-24 05:08:23 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565169989 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565170031 www: the slide looks really good and has good information.

EBI: you could read it louder]]> 2023-04-24 05:08:26 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565170031 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565170042 WWW: Very neat and well prepared document
EBI: Try not to read off screen too much]]> 2023-04-24 05:08:26 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565170042 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565170612 www: You explained well your points. You equally spoke the same amount. You included eco friendly materials and added a local Market.
EBI: you could speak louder next time less laughing ]]> 2023-04-24 05:09:00 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565170612 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565170642 Www: Did a lot of research And covered for a lost teammate
Ebi: A bit silent ]]> 2023-04-24 05:09:02 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565170642 kamd28 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565170729 WWW: very good ideas and thoughts on the aspects of your house
EBI: everyone could speak louder and more details ]]> 2023-04-24 05:09:07 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565170729 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565171174 You talked about most of the things in detail]]> 2023-04-24 05:09:31 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565171174 https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565171206 From Naomi:
WWW: It was all well explained and the location and materials chosen were good.

EBI: The presenting wasn't very engaging. It might have been better if you explained your ideas from bullet points.

From Nehir:
WWW:I liked how you talked about a lot of stuff and explained it.

EBI: Pictures of the house you made.]]> 2023-04-24 05:09:33 UTC https://padlet.com/list4/3eq0tv1zeia1j30k/wish/2565171206