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      <title>My glorious padlet by shiva sharma</title>
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      <pubDate>2017-04-05 05:10:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Dora</title>
         <author>ddavina400</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/nee_shiva/Yr5HL1/wish/164783169</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><em>Exploration: 3/6</em><br><strong>Positive: </strong><br>1. Aim included some specific measurements such as the length of the potato strip <br>2. Background information included details of osmosis and the effects on it on the cell wall or cell membrane and made reference to other plants <br>3. The hypothesis is qualitative and clear, with theory to back it up <br>4. DV included uncertainty<br>5. IV included the range in which the experiment would take place over with information about recording data each week <br>6. Controlled variables included how it would be controlled with values included if needed <br>7. Uncontrolled variables were identified and a method was placed to monitor the situation<br>8. Types of equipment with specific volumes was included <br>9. Clear steps and instructions <br><strong>Needs improvements: </strong><br>1. RQ needs to be more specific, like where is the potato stored in and the range of time it would be kept for&nbsp;<br>2. Aim should include the apparatus used to measure the change in mass of the potato and the various amounts of time (eg after 1 week?)<br>3. Background information should state the physical observable state of the plasma membrane&nbsp;<br>4. Hypothesis should include a graph to show the change in mass of the potato&nbsp;<br>5. No picture of experiment present&nbsp;<br>6. Dependent variable should include the equipment used to measure the change in mass (Electronic balance)&nbsp;<br>7.Controlled variable should include how each variable would affect the results.&nbsp;<br>8.Equipments should be placed in a table with uncertainty and quantity inserted.&nbsp;<br>9.Method should include specific apparatus needed for measurement (using a weighing balance to measure the mass loss) and how should the measurements be recorded (in a table?)&nbsp;<br>10. Safety, ethical, environmental issues not identified&nbsp;<br><br>Analysis: 4/6<br>Positive:&nbsp;<br>1. Specific and clear headings in table for collection of data&nbsp;<br>2. Overall heading was included&nbsp;<br>3. Sufficient data was collected&nbsp;<br>4. Independent variable was present in the first column with the rest being DV&nbsp;<br>5. Numbers were only in the table itself&nbsp;<br>6. Calculations carried out were accurate and correct<br>7. SD was included in the calcuations<br>Negative:<br>1. Number of decimal places were inconsistent&nbsp;<br>2. Some headers were missing units and uncertainty&nbsp;<br>3. How the values were calculated should be shown<br>4. Anomalies should not be removed&nbsp;<br><br>Evaluation: 3/6<br>Positive:&nbsp;<br>1. The conclusion was clear and made reference to the graph shown<br>2. Evaluation was structured with headings&nbsp;<br>3. Conclusion had scientific explanations to justify answers<br>4. Conclusion made a link to the predicted data&nbsp;<br><br>Needs improvements:&nbsp;<br>1. Identification of systematic or random error&nbsp;<br>2. Calculation of overall percentage uncertainty and error&nbsp;<br>3. More errors could be identified and described how it would affect the results as well as how to improve&nbsp;<br><br>Personal Engagement 0/2&nbsp;<br>1.There was no evidence of motive explained to do this experiment&nbsp;<br><br>Communication 3/4<br>1. No citations were found&nbsp;<br>2. Good structure of report&nbsp;<br><br>Total: 13/24</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-04-05 05:12:38 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tiffany</title>
         <author>tiffanytanwt0215</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/nee_shiva/Yr5HL1/wish/164783188</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Personal engagement (0/2): </strong><br><strong><em>Positive: </em></strong><br><br><strong><em>Needs improvements:</em></strong><strong><br></strong>- reason for choosing this RQ is not stated<strong><br></strong>- no personal experience is included <br><br><br><strong>Exploration: (3/6)</strong><br><strong><em>Positive:</em></strong><br>- clear background information<br>- aim of the practical is identified<br>-hypothesis is linked to scientific explanation<br>- uncertainty is stated in the variables<br><br><strong><em>Needs improvement:</em></strong><br>- RQ should include the dependent and independent variables, and how is the experiment addressed<br>- predicted graph is missing in the hypothesis<br>- title for the table of variables is missing<br>- reasons of controlling the variables are not stated<br>- more controlled/ uncontrolled variables should be stated<br>- chemicals, materials and equipment used in the practical are not clearly identified (the quantity used, the concentration, the uncertainty of the apparatus) and list them in a table form<br>- Procedure has to be more detailed (how to weigh the mass of the potato?? <br>--&gt; using electronic balance<br>how is the result to be presented: type of graph used).<br>- experimental set-up diagram is missing<br>-missing safety, ethnical and environmental issues<br><br><br><strong>Analysis (4/6)</strong><br><strong><em>Positive:</em></strong><br>- titles of the tables are clearly identified <br>- uncertainties of the results are stated<br>- standard deviation is calculated to identify the reliability of the data<br>- description of the formula (standard deviation) used<br><br><strong><em>Needs improvements:<br></em></strong><strong>-</strong> insufficient data collected<br>- no qualitative observations is given<br>- inconsistency in the decimal places in both the table and graph<br>- title of the graph is missing<br>- equation of the best fit line is not stated<br>- major and minor gridlines should be included in the graph<br>- description of the graph is not detail enough<br><br><br><strong>Evaluation (3/6)</strong><br><strong><em>Positive:</em></strong><br>- conclusion refers back to the RQ of the practical<br>- supported with scientific explanation<br><br><br><strong><em>Needs improvements:</em></strong><br>- literature value is not identified and compared in the conclusion<br>- systematic or random errors more significant in the practical??? (compare percentage error and percentage uncertainty)<br>- errors stated are not clearly identified its type of errors (systematic or random)<br>- not enough errors identified<br>- strength of the practical is not identified<br><br><br><strong>Communication: (3/4)</strong><br><strong><em>Positive:</em></strong><br>- font size is clear<br>- report is well structure with clear headings<br>- pages of the report<br><strong><br></strong><strong><em>Needs improvements:</em></strong><br>- no citations<br>- no personal engagement<br><br><strong>Total: 13/24</strong><br><br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-04-05 05:12:59 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Juan</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/nee_shiva/Yr5HL1/wish/164783193</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Personal Engagement - 0<br>No personal experience or motive mentioned<br>Exploration - 3:<br>Positive:<br>- Topic and goal of the experiment were mentioned<br>-Repeats were done<br>- RQ includes IV,DV, and species name.<br><br>Negative:<br>-RQ is not clear and range of IV was not mentioned<br>-Method of acquiring data was not clear<br>-Background Information was vague and not clear<br>-Quantitative Hypothesis was not included<br>-Range of IV was not included in the table<br>-Method to measure DV was not mentioned<br>-How each CV could affect the fairness of the experiment was not mentioned<br>-Uncertainties of apparatus used was not mentioned in the apparatus table<br>-Methods described was not clear and confusing<br>-Table representing the data collected was not included<br>-Methods to collect data does not address RG<br>-Annotated Photo was not included<br>-Safety Concerns were not mentioned<br><br>Analysis-4<br>-Raw Data table is clear and explained<br>-Units and uncertainties are included<br>-IV is in the first column<br>-Sufficient amount of columns used to represent the data<br>-Only numbers are in the body of the table<br>-standard deviation was included<br>-conclusion was clear<br><br>Need Improvement<br>-decimal points in the table is not consistent<br>-decimal points of uncertainty is not consistent with that of data<br>-minimum amount of qualitative data was included<br>-method to calculate dv was not included<br>-worked example was not included<br><br>Evaluation-3<br>-detailed<br>-supported by data<br>-justified<br>-cv was mentioned<br>-possible source error was mentioned<br>-weaknesses and possible improvements were made<br><br><br>Need improvement<br>-no strength are were discussed<br><br>Communication<br>-well structured<br>-headings were used to make it clearer<br>-understandable<br>-</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-04-05 05:13:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Shwetha</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/nee_shiva/Yr5HL1/wish/164783200</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>PE: 0/2<br>- No insight on why this RQ is chosen and no initiative is taken to show motivation to carry out this experiment.<br>Ex: 4/6<br>- RQ is not focussed enough and fails to include the necessary variables such as the independent and dependent variables.<br>- Aim is fairly well written with adequate details<br>- Background info: Gives overview of osmosis, cell turgidity and flaccidity and relates it well back to the RQ (potatoes). No citations are given.&nbsp;<br>Hypothesis: Detailed and outlines the aspects relating to the RQ but needs to be more focussed and concise. There is no sketched/predicted graph. Overall, it is quantitative but lacks a few details.<br>-Variables: Dependent variable needs to state how the amount of water loss will be measured.<br>Independent variable does include a rage but does not record how measurements will be taken. Controlled and uncontrolled variables are adequate.<br>An: 4/6<br>- The raw data table includes processed data as well, shows lack of understanding between the raw and processed data.&nbsp;<br>- Uncertainties and uncertainties with units are labelled well along with clear and explanatory titles.<br>- Inconsistency in raw data decimal tables<br>-The IV is not in the first column<br>- Sample calculations are not given for marker's understanding as to how the processed data was attained<br>- Qualitative data associated with the data collected is not included to further show understanding.<br>Graph:<br>- No indication of what the two lines on the graph are for<br>- Axis are labelled clearly with correct units&nbsp;<br>-Graph is appropriate to the RQ and aim, and both graphs have an explanatory title<br>- Trend line for both graphs are present<br>- Anomalous results are expressed in the description for the graphs, specific details regarding the anomalous results, such as certain results not fitting into the general pattern of results<br>-Mention of deviation shows further in-depth analysis done<br>Data:<br>-Data processing contains no sample calculations, in particular the percentage value for change in mass</div><div>Ev: 4<br>- Refers back to the RQ<br>- Assesses the graphs<br>-Detailed conclusion<br>Com: 3<br>- Neat and structured report<br>- Easily readable&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-04-05 05:13:15 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Kano</title>
         <author>liu_kano0721</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/nee_shiva/Yr5HL1/wish/164783205</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Personal engagement:<br><br></strong>1. do not motivation shows in the report at all.<br><br><strong>0/2<br></strong><br><strong>Exploration:</strong><br><br>1.RQ:<br>not clearly described(by..). variables are not mentioned<br>2.background information:<br>detailed information but references is not mentioned.<br>3.hypothesis:<br>no graph and quantitative data given.<br>4.variables:<br>variables should be more detailed, many variables did not mention in the report.<br>each variables need be identified how to control and why to control.<br>5.apparatus:<br>the list should be write in list form, include name,size,number,uncertainty and concentration.<br>6.procedure<br>process should be more detailed.<br>7.ethic issues:<br>absent<br> <br><strong>&nbsp;3/6<br><br>analysis<br><br>1.</strong>data table:<br>inconsistent decimal places in the table.<br>calculations is not given.<br>titles are all given<br>standard deviation is present and show clearly<br>correct unit and uncertainty was given<br>2.graph:<br>graphs are clear labeled<br>what is the curve line?<br><br><strong>4/6</strong><br><br><strong>evaluation</strong><br><br>1.error stated is not detailed enough<br>2.conclusion relate back to the research question.<br>3.limitations was mentioned<br>4.evaluation is detailed and clear explained.<br>5.strength is not mentioned in the report.<br><br><strong>5/6<br><br>communication<br></strong><br>1. fonts is proper<br>2. report is well sturctured<br>3.the use of terminology words are correct<br><br><strong><br>4/4<br><br>total 16/24<br></strong><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-04-05 05:13:21 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Nirel</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/nee_shiva/Yr5HL1/wish/164783211</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>personal engagement 0/2<br></strong>- no justification was written for choosing the RQ<br>- there is not much evidence of personal input in designing the experiment <br><br><strong>exploration 3/6</strong></div><div><em>needs improvement</em></div><div>- RQ needs to include how the independent variable will be measured <br>- hypothesis should include any graph trends (of the change in mass of the potato) that might be observed <br>- controlled variables should include why the variables need to be controlled and its effect on the experiment if they are not controlled<br>- a diagram should be included as part of the method<br>- no safety or ethical issues were discussed<br>- no references shown for background information<br><em>positive</em><br>- the aim is clearly stated<br>- background information is sufficient and is easily understood<br><br><strong>analysis 4/6<br></strong><em>needs improvement</em><strong><br></strong>- decimal points in the 'mean change in mass' column is not consistent with the rest of the data <br><em>positive</em><br>- sufficient data has been collected<br>- standard deviation is presented&nbsp; well <br>- table of results are well organised with titles<br>- anomalous points are identified and supported by data<strong><br><br>evaluation 5/6</strong><br><em>positive</em><br>- the conclusion refers back to the RQ and scientific theory is used to support it<br>- conclusion is supported with data<br>- limitations and uncertainties were discussed in a systematic way<br><br><strong>communication 4/4<br></strong><em>positive<br></em>- report is well structured with appropriate titles <br>- relevant and concise<br>- there is appropriate use of terminology <br><br><strong>total: 16/24</strong></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-04-05 05:13:28 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Nadya</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/nee_shiva/Yr5HL1/wish/164783213</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Total ;16/24<br>Exploration :&nbsp; 4/6<br>- RQ too brief and not focused,IV&amp; DV not clearly identified.<br>- Aim is well written and outlined the overall experiment<br>- Background information explained osmosis in detail and enhances understanding of the investigation<br>- Hypothesis does not mention any quantitative expectations and is not straight forward. No graph is included either&nbsp;<br>- IV is identified with the range<br>- DV is identified with uncertainty of measuring instrument<br>- Controlled variables, did not explained how each would impact the results<br>- Uncertainties were not included in the equipment list<br>-Procedure steps is unclear and vague.<br>-No photo of set up included<br>- No reasons given for choice of how data will be presented.<br>- Safety and environmental concerns are not given&nbsp;<br><br>Analysis: 5/6<br>Positives;<br>-Title for raw data table is given<br>- Headings and uncertainties is correctly identified<br>- Sufficient qualitative data is recorded<br>- Statistical test is used&nbsp;<br>- IV is in first column<br>- Sample calculation for mean is given&nbsp;<br>- Graphs are appropriate with title written<br>- Anomalous points identified<br><br>Needs improvement:<br>- Decimal points are not consistent throughout the table<br>- No minor gridlines on graph&nbsp;<br><br>Evaluation; 4/6<br>Positives:<br>- Conclusion is detailed and focused with references to graphs&nbsp; and standard deviation<br>- Realistic improvements was stated<br>- Limitations and sources of uncertainties was identified<br><br>Negatives:<br>- No strengths was discussed<br>- Only few errors were identified<br>- Type of error not identified&nbsp;<br><br>Communication 3/4<br>- Report is quite organised and concise&nbsp;<br>- Use of terminology is correct&nbsp;<br>- Raw and processed data is well presented<br><br>Personal engagement; 0/2<br>No interest shown and did not justify as to why the topic was chosen</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-04-05 05:13:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Claudia</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/nee_shiva/Yr5HL1/wish/164783214</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Personal Engagement: <br></strong>0/2<br>No effort or interest were shown. The title and the RQ wasn't detailed.<strong><br><br></strong><strong><em>Exploration:</em></strong><br>Need Improvement:<br>1) Research question ( is too vague and it needs more elaboration.<br>2) Background information can include diagrams such as graphs to illustrate the hypothesis. Referencing wasn't stated.<br>3) Variables stated need to mention on how it impacted the experiment and what ways they should do to control and monitor it.<br>4) There should also be more variables stated. <br>5) The equipment list needs to be a table that states the quantity, concentration, volume and lastly, uncertainties of the apparatus.<br>6) Procedure wasn't good as it was all over the place and not detailed enough.<br>Positive:<br>1) Units were stated in the equipment list.<br>2) Information given in the background information was relevant.<br>2/6<br><strong><em>Analysis:<br></em></strong>Needs Improvement:<br>1) No minor gridlines in the graph.<br>2) The decimal places are not consistent in the graph and the table.<br>3) <br><br>Positive:<br>1) Good labelling of the different tables.<br>2) Good explanation of the graphs.<br>3) Uncertainties are give in the table,<br><br><strong>Evaluation: </strong>5/6<strong><br></strong>positive: <br>1) the conclusion was well elaborated and it answers the RQ<br>2) conclusion included statement of the data and uncertainties.<br><strong><em><br>communication 3/4<br>positive:&nbsp;<br>1)&nbsp; The IA report was well written and it was well structured.<br>2)&nbsp; In the report, he discussed the data clearly and the background information was also referred.&nbsp;<br><br></em></strong><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>William  : 13/25</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/nee_shiva/Yr5HL1/wish/164783217</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Personal Engagement: 0<br></strong>The experiment is not interesting and there is little evidence that the student went out looking for a variety of experiments to carry out.<br><br><strong>Exploration: 4/6</strong><br><br>Positive:<br>Topic of investigation is identified<br>Background information is relevant and does provide understanding.<br><br>Need improvement:<br>Research question is not focused.<br>No variables identified and no methods of measurement or data collection are identified<br><br>Aim should include the equipment being used to measure<br><br>Monitoring of variables could be organised clearer<br><br>Equipment list does not contain uncertainties of the apparatus<br>Better if a table format was used so that it is clearly presented. No specification of the type of potatoes used.<br><br>Procedure does not include what equipment is used to measure and record the values. <br><br><strong>Analysis: 4/6<br></strong>Positives:<br>Well organised table with clear data shown. Title specifies what the data is about.<br><br>Anomalous points included <br><br>Table is clearly labeled and organised<br><br>Standard deviation is included<br><br>Explanation of the calculation is presented and why it is carried out is also clear.<strong><br><br></strong>units and uncertainties given in table<br><strong><br></strong>Needs improvement:<br>inconsistent decimal places for values. <br>The actual example calculations for the values are not shown.<br><br>Graphs contain 2 lines in each so it is unclear which one the is the correct result.<strong><br><br><br><br></strong>Decimal points between raw data and processed data are not consistent.<strong><br><br><br>Evaluation 3/6<br><br></strong>contains reference to the data collected<br>is detailed and has relevant comparison to in scientific context<strong><br><br></strong>identifies the standard deviation and reliability of results<br>Method is analysed and evaluation of the control of the variables are given<br>Uncertainties are identified<strong><br></strong>identified that number of results collected is insufficient to come to a conclusion       <br>Methods of improvement are identified and relevant <strong><br><br><br></strong>no reference to research question<br>uncontrolled variables are not identified<br>Measuring errors and systematic errors are not identified<br>more repeats are suggest but no further extensions of the investigation are expressed<strong><br><br>Communication 2/4<br><br></strong>Reports is well structured and subheadings make it clear<br>concise and relevant<br><br><br>subject specific terminology is used but not consistently throughout the entire report.<br><br>presentation of raw data could be clearer but conventions for presentation of processed and raw data are not completely met<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-04-05 05:13:37 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>JEN</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/nee_shiva/Yr5HL1/wish/164783242</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Personal Engagement (1)<br>(-)</strong>no motivation and justification of RQ<br>(+)there is designing and layout of the analysis and implementation of the layout<br><strong>Exploration (2)<br>(+)</strong>Topic of investigation identified.<br>(-)RQ not clearly stated, no IV (and species name?)<br>(+)Background info is clear and relevant.<br>(-)No graph for hypothesis <br>(-)No clear range for IV<br>(-)No measuring tool stated in DV (uncertainty is included)<br><strong>(+)</strong>Clear control variable <br><strong>(+)</strong>Uncontrolled variable identified<br>(-)No uncertainty for equipment<br><strong>(+)</strong>Method address RQ<br><strong>(+)</strong>Method presented in step-wise format. <br>(-)Not enough repeats.<br><strong>(+)</strong>Method of measuring DV mentioned<br>(-)No annotated photo of equipment and set-up.<br>(-)No reason for how results will be presented <br>(-)No safety/ethics/environmental concerns not stated<br>(-)No citations<br><br><strong>Analysis (4)<br>(+)</strong>There is sufficient relevant quantitative data, record on table and title. <br><strong>(+)</strong>Uncertainties and SI units clearly stated on the first column. <br>(+)Each analyses support with graph and title<br>(+)rich explanation in conclusion <br><br><strong>Evaluation (5)<br>(+)</strong>focused conclusion with appropriate reference to RQ and hypothesise. <br><strong>(+)</strong>Very rich evaluation and is separated to paragraphs to aid reading.<br><strong>(+)</strong>data used in evaluation <br><strong>(+)</strong>limitation and uncertainty mentioned with consequence <br>(-)extension of the experiment not mentioned<br><br><strong>Communication (2/4)<br></strong>(-)No citations <br><strong>(+)</strong>report is clear and structured <br>relevant length <br>(-)focused RQ and investigation but not fully explained<br><strong>(+)</strong>correct raw and process data<br><br>14/<br><br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-04-05 05:14:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Grace</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/nee_shiva/Yr5HL1/wish/164783256</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><em>Personal Engagement 0/2</em><br>(-) The experiment is commonly carried out and basic. Student did not explain his/her rationale for choosing this topic.<br><br><em>Exploration 3/6</em><br>(-) RQ needs to be more focused as it is vague. Can be improved by identifying DV and IV.<br>(+) The basic structure of the investigation is outlined, i.e. RQ, Aim, Background Info, etc. <br>(+) Aim is much more detailed than RQ as it not only identifies the DV and IV, it also takes into account the method of measuring DV.<br>(+) Background information supports the investigation by explaining the processes that are happening at a molecular level.<br>(-) There is no referencing to sources that were used in the background information. This can be improved by inserting footnotes and citing the sources. <br>(+) Hypothesis is quantitative <br>(-) Equipment is not listed with uncertainty <br>(-) Methodology is vague<br>(-) No photo of set up<br><br><em>Analysis 4/6</em><br>(+) Headings, correct SI units and correct uncertainties are at the top of the columns<br>(-) The raw data and process data should be recorded and calculated in separate tables respectively. <br>(-) Decimal places are inconsistent with raw and process data.<br>(+) Analysis for graph includes anomalous results and relationship between the two variables (DV and IV)<br><br><em>Evaluation 4/6</em><br>(+) conclusion supports the RQ<br>(+) uncertainties were clearly . elaborated, e.g. biological uncertainties<br>(-) does not mention the strengths of the practical<br>(-) uncertainties and improvements were not very organised. Could use a table to match each uncertainty with the suggested improvement<br><br><em>Communication 3/4</em><br>(+) good structure; general outline of the report is clear<br>(+) easy to read, e.g. use of page numbers<br>(-) no citation<br><br>Total 14/24</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-04-05 05:14:17 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jun</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/nee_shiva/Yr5HL1/wish/164783271</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Negative<br>Does not show any motivation<br>RQ not that decriptive<br>Variables are not detailed<br>No credit given or where the information was found<br>Method of finding data was not given<br>The decimal point is not consistent<br>Hypothesis should include a table or graph<br>Not enough repeats<br>Uncertainties are not there for the measuring equipments<br>Positive<br>Background information was plentiful<br>Sufficient Quantitative Data<br>The IA is quite clear and its objectives can be seen.&nbsp;<br>The structure of the IA is good<br>PE&nbsp; 0<br>EX &nbsp; 3<br>AN &nbsp; 4<br>EV &nbsp; 4<br>CM &nbsp; 3<br>Total: 14</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-04-05 05:14:46 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Pascal</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/nee_shiva/Yr5HL1/wish/164783275</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Personal engagement</strong> 0/2<br>- No justification for as to why the RQ was chosen <br>- No initiative in designing or presentation<br><strong>Exploration</strong> 4/6<br>- RQ is not clear enough, too vague<br>- Aim details everything that will be investigated<br>- Background information is relevant and concise enough to understand<br>- The variables were identified and how they would be measured, controlled as well minimized was mentioned <br>- The uncertainties were not given for the measuring apparatus used <br>- Methodology is <br><strong>Analysis </strong>4/6<br>- Decimal point used is not kept the same <br>- Graphs were well explained and labelled<br><strong>Evaluation</strong> 4/6<br>- Several good sources of errors and ways to improve them were mentioned <br><strong>Communication </strong>3/4<br>- Report is well structured and relevant<br>- Not concise sometimes</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-04-05 05:14:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Isaac</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/nee_shiva/Yr5HL1/wish/164783286</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Personal E. (0/2)<br>Little interest is shown in the topic. Student should invest more into engagement.<br><br>Exploration (3/6)<br>Positive<br>1. Background information shows knowledge on the topic and experiment.<br>2. The aim is given clearly and relates to the background information.<br><br></div><div>Needs Improvement<br>1. Variables are not detailed enough, should show how the experiment is being affected.<br>2. The hypothesis is dragged on and more complicated than it should be.&nbsp;<br>3. Uncertainties for the measuring equipment were not given.<br>4. Research question is not relevant and scientific. It should relate more to the background information and the topic itself.<br><br>Analysis (4/6)<br>Positive<br>1. Tables for all 5 weeks are given. Data is calculated and results are simple to process.<br>2. Standard deviation is recorded, giving more insight to the results.<br><br>Needs Improvement<br>1. Decimal points are not consistent for raw data and calculations.<br>2. A graph of the independent variable against the dependent variable should be plotted for more results.<br><br>Evaluation (4/6)<br>Positive<br>1. Conclusion is done with&nbsp;<br><br>Communication (2/4)</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-04-05 05:15:06 UTC</pubDate>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/nee_shiva/Yr5HL1/wish/164783602</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Jiashu<br>PE:<br>Exploration:<br>Analysis<br>Evaluation&nbsp;<br>Communication&nbsp;<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-04-05 05:20:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Rheanna</title>
         <author>rheanna_sampayo</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/nee_shiva/Yr5HL1/wish/165044069</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Exploration (3/6)<br></strong>- Topic of the investigation is identified<br>- The research question is quite vague as it does not include the independent, depend variable as well as the name of the species of potato that will be investigated<br>- The background information is relevant and appropriate to the investigation, giving a scientific support to the hypothesis that is inferred thereafter<br>- The hypothesis is qualitative not quantitative as it does not explain what is expected to happen at focal temperatures. No graph to provide support &amp; evidence is provided<br>- The independent variable is identified with brief details of the range<br>-The Dependent variable is identified however there is no details of the measuring tools, but a plus point is that the uncertainty is included. <br>- The controlled variable are identified with how to control them but no description of their effect if not controlled. <br>- Uncontrolled variables are identified and their method of being monitored. <br>- Equipment list is identified with the size, number of equipment but not the uncertainty. <br>- Method to collect data does not address the research question <br>- There is no annotated picture of the equipment and the setup.<br>- There is no reason of how the results will be presented<br>- No safety or ethical considerations given<br>- No full citation !!<br><br><strong>Analysis (4/6)<br>- </strong>Some suficient relevant quantitative data<br>- The headings and SI units are given with uncertainties <br>- IV is in the first column<br>- Decimal places are not consistent throughout<br>- Decimal places are not consistent with the uncertainty<br>- No qualitative data recorded<br>- SD are recorded<br>- evidence of calculations <br>- Errors bars not required<br>- Graph is clear and axes labelled clearly <br>- Trend line is not drawn with coefficient of determination (R2) <br>- some conclusion is given based on the data (partially) <br><strong>Evaluation (4/6)<br>- </strong>Detail conclusion is described with reference to the research question <br>- Conclusion is supported by the data<br>- Conclusion is not explained and justified to the relevant comparison to the accepted scientific context<br>- No unexpected answer are discussed <br>- Strengths not described but weaknesses are discussed <br>- Sources of uncertainties are not very organised throughout <br>- The implications of the limitations are discussed<br>- Relevant suggestions for the improvement are discussed <br>- Extension is not discussed<strong><br>Communication (2/4) <br>- </strong>Well structured <br>- relevant and concise (8 pages)<br>- Focus is understandable but not present coherently<br>- Subject specific terminology is not used widely <br>- Some errors are present within the report<br>- Raw and processed data have been followed and are somewhat correct<br><strong><br><br>Personal Engagement (1/2) <br>- </strong>Justification for choosing the RQ is not included, it does not demonstrate interest or curiosity&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-04-06 04:56:32 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Sarah</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/nee_shiva/Yr5HL1/wish/165044321</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Personal engagemen</strong>t: 0<br>-choice of topic is not explained &amp; interest in the topic not shown<br><strong>Exploration</strong>: 4<br>-topic of investigation is identified but the rq(clearly stated) is not described fully <br>-background info is entirely appropriate and relevant, as well as supports the investigation<br>-variables are identified but method to keep each control variable not explained<br>-full citation not included(detail needed)<br>-safety not included<br><strong>Analysis</strong>: 4<br>-tables and heading included <br>-decimal points are not consistent.<br>-repeats are not sufficient<br>-qualitative data not present <br>-calculations. used appropriately in investigation.<br>-graphs are clear with axes labeled clearly with correct units<br><strong>Evaluation: 3<br>&nbsp;-</strong>a detailed conclusion is given and justified relevantly.<br>-limitations identified, as well as sources of uncertainty<br>-realistic suggestions for improvement discussed.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-04-06 05:01:59 UTC</pubDate>
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