PRE822 - UNIT 9 - REVISION OF ESSAYS by Ly Le (M.A.)

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Take sth as the most convincing illustration of this: Cho ví dụ
Chốt lại template
1. NEGATIVE EFFECT

For thousands of years, people have flocked (đổ xô tới) to the cities, creating an explosive population growth. : đặt ra topic (background) cho bài
Hại 1: Despite economic progress^,^{dù giúp phát triển kt (đưa vào công thức nhượng bộ, khoe cấu trúc câu phức)} such an extensive influx of migrantsmay bring^{dù nó mang lại lợi}, accompanying it are many problems ^{đi kèm theo nó là nhiều vấn đề}, the most prominent among which is^{vấn đề nổi cộm nhất là} a strain on the city's infrastructure.
VD: This is starkly seen in^{công thức đưa ví dụ}megacities across this planet Earth such as Beijing, Delhi, New York or Dhaka.
Giải thích ví dụ trên: The rapid growth in population to enormous size has stretched ^{htht nói về việc bắt đầu trong qk có kết quả ở hiện tại}the demand for housing, transportation, clean water facilities, and electricity provision in these ^{có từ reference word nhắc lại từ xh trc đó để tăng điểm cohesion: chặt chẽ}urban areas to the limit. (stretch sth to the limit: đặt áp lực lên)
Hại 2: To make it even worse, an inadequate water supply and poor sanitation inviting infections and illnesses has intensified the population issue.
Ví dụ: (case cụ thể) The Covid-19 pandemic can serve as a clear exemplar for the community health hazard.
Giải thích ví dụ: Jam-packed with inhabitants, many of whom reside in slums and shanty parts of the city, Delhi, India instantly became an incubator for the highly fatal Coronavirus shortly before it spread worldwide in an appalling manner.

2. POSITIVE EFFECT
Mở gồm 2 câu:
+ Câu 1: giới thiệu topic: An increasing number of people have a tendency to opt for living in a big city because to some extent the city life seems very convenient and comfortable, especially with the younger
+ Câu 2: khẳng định nó có cả lợi cả hại: Nevertheless, it is my firm belief that living in urban areas have not only positive but also negative sides

Thân bài gồm 5 câu:
Câu 1 khẳng định có nhiều lợi
Câu 2 lợi rõ nhất là;
Câu 3 đưa ra example: Cứ viết bth nhưng nối với impact
(Therefore, thus)
Câu 4: lợi 2 Additionally
Câu 5: Chốt đoạn: Vậy rõ ràng là nó có lợi

3. CAUSE
Câu giới thiệu: Although,..
Giới thiệu nguyên nhân đầu tiên:There are several reasons for... One reason is,..
Giới thiệu nguyên nhân khác: Another underlying cause is..
Due to..
Owing to..
Because of..
One reason why..is
Kết luận: Chỉ ra hậu quả của vấn đề

4. SOLUTION
-To counteract these dangers, perhaps the most effective and the most immediate solution would be for employers to incorparate a fixed amount of free time into their workers' routine : Đưa ra giải pháp đầu tiên

-For example,companies might stick to a 'no work, phone calls or emails after five pm' policy, as is being suggested in Germany at present : Đưa ra ví dụ

- This would lessen the anxiety of high workloads and preserve family time: Đưa ra hiệu quả của giải pháp

-Another remedy may beto promote the use of relaxation techniques among workers, so that they make the most of the free time that they have: Đưa ra giải pháp khác
- Activities ranging from sport to yoga or family events can be used to maximise any opportunities for de-stressing that already exist: Đưa ra các dẫn chứng

5. Opinion: 3 công thức đưa ý kiến

1. Đặc điểm đề:

What is your opinion? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend? Do you agree or disagree? What do you think are the cause and effect of this?..

>>>Đề chứa you, hỏi mình>> dạng opinion

2 Yêu cầu ngôn ngữ: Viết đoạn cần nhiều từ trình bày ý kiến cá nhân

Tôi nghĩ, tôi tin, tôi thấy, tôi xin cãi là, chắc chắn là, có lẽ là

3. Trình bày bài:

-Y hệt các đoạn đã học nhưng kèm thêm các từ ở mục 2 vào câu đầu tiên mỗi đoạn
-1 bài essay gồm: What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city?
-Mở: TP đang mở rộng chóng mặt, nhiều lợi, hại.
-Thân (2 đoạn)
Lợi: Tôi tin là sống ở Tp có nhiều lợi
Hại: Tôi thấy rõ là đi kèm với nhiều lợi là hại
-Kết: chốt lại thesis (nhiều lợi hại)

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CHỐT LẠI TEMPLATE

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🍏ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES
A.Mở bài
1.Mở bài, giới thiệu topic: An increasing number of sb have a tendency to opt for
2.Luận điểm cá nhân: Nevertheless, it is my firm belief that sth have not only positive but also negative sides
B.Thân bài
*Advantage
3.Mang lại nhiều lợi: On the one hand, sth might possibly benefit city-dwellers in several ways
4.Lợi rõ nhất là: One of the most prominent value is that
5.Do đó, mọi người có cơ hội: Therefore, one has high chances to
6.Thêm vào đó, X mang lại cho mọi người...: Additionally, sth offers its residents a vast choice of
7.Vậy rõ ràng là (chốt đoạn): Thus, there appears to be always
*Disadvantage

8.Mặt khác, có nhiều hại: On the other hand, there could be a number of drawbacks associated with sth
9.X là hại lớn nhất:Sth is one of the biggest handicaps city-dwellers might face
10.Hủy hoại, gây ra: sth could take a toll on sb or even trigger
11.Cái hại nữa là: Another downside of sth is
C.Kết bài

12.Vậy nó có thể được coi là cả lợi và hại: In conclusion, it is an undeniable fact that sth can be considered as both a boon and a bane
🍎CAUSE
1.Main idea:Although...
2.Ý nhỏ 1: the most common/ prevalent cause of is ...
3.Supporting:
-datas: Research has shown that + SV
-examples:This is starkly seen is .../Take sth as the most convincing illustration of this.
-impact.
4. Ý nhỏ 2:The most subtle/ potential cause is triggered by...
5.Supporting:
-datas: Research has shown that + SV
-examples:This is starkly seen is .../Take sth as the most convincing illustration of this.
-impact.
🍐SOLUTION
1.To counteract this danger , perhaps the most effective and most immediate solution would be...
2.Ảnh hưởng tốt:This would lessen...
3.Another solution remedy may be to V...
4.Conclusion: In conclusion, the main problem seem to A and B
🍊OPINION:I believe/ I hold/ From my perspective/ In my view/ I daresay/ I'm convinced that.

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TEMPLATE CÁC ĐOẠN

vyhuyenluong — 2022-10-31 13:25:25 UTC

*BTVN: 9C

CHỐT LẠI TEMPLATE CHO CÁC ĐỀ:
1. NEGATIVE EFFECT (DISADVANTAGE)
-have not only positive but also negative sides
-as for the negatives
-on the other one hand, there could be a number of drawbacks associated with
-another downside of...
-the long-term consequent problems of
-in particular
- to name one example
- this is clearly seen in the case of...
- the case of ... provides
- ultimately
- in conclusion
2. POSITIVE EFFECT (ADVANTAGE)
-One of the most prominent value is that
have not only positive but also negative sides
-on the one hand, ...might possibly benefit ... in several ways
-primarily, one of the greatest positive sides of...
-the perks of... is can extend to...
- Other factors such as
-in particular
- to name one example
- this is clearly seen in the case of...
- the case of ... provides
- ultimately
- in conclusion
3. CAUSE
-Although ... is deemed due to ...., there are many explanations for it.
-The most prevalent cause is
-Research has shown that (+ S V)
-a more subtle cause is
-in conclusion, the main problems seem to be
4. OPINION
-Nevertheless, it is my firm belief that
-From my perspective
-I believe
-I hold
-in my view
-i daresay
- i am convinced that
-I would argue that
-I take the opinion that
5. SOLUTION
-To counteract these dangers, perhaps the most effective and most immediate solution would be for
- another solution remedy may be to
-the key solution would be the

huonglyams — 2022-10-31 13:25:27 UTC

1. To counteract these dangers, the most effective and immediate solution would be for sb to V
2.

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opinion :hại 1
vd (+giải thích ví dụ )
hại 2
vd(case cụ thể ,giải thích )
In short

cause:main idea
ý nhỏ 1
supporting
ý nhỏ 2
supporting

disaventage: hại 1
vd( +giải thích )
hại 2
vd cụ thể ( giải thích )

adventage: lợi 1
giải thích
lợi 2
ví dụ ( +giải thích )
khẳng định ... có lợi

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CẤU TRÚC CỦA 1 BÀI LUẬN

vyhuyenluong — 2022-11-02 12:28:09 UTC

- Nếu đề hỏi ý kiến mình (có từ you) => thì mở bài câu luận điểm luôn chứa tôi nghĩ, tôi thấy
- mở bài gồm hai câu:
+ đưa topic
+ đưa quan điểm cá nhân
- kết luận gồm 2 câu:
+ khẳng định lại quan điểm cá nhân
+ Đưa ra đề xuất dựa trên luận điểm đã bàn
- cấu trúc 1 đoạn trong thân bài:
+ câu 1: đưa ra luận điểm chính: đại hc giúp ta trở thành công dân tốt
Those with the means and desire to attend university will find that this experience is very beneficial to preparing a person to become a productive member of society.

+ câu 2 + 3: giải thích công dân tốt nên (k những việc làm mà còn kĩ năng như network, team,...)
Not only can a higher education lead to employment opportunities, it can also teach a person to network, cooperate in a team and be more open-minded.

Tertiary education allows people to widen their own sphere (lĩnh vực) of influence (tầm ảnh hưởng) based on greater understanding of world issues. (dựa trên hiểu biết về vấn đề thế giới)

+ câu 4: ví dụ: đưa ra case cụ thể của tầm ảnh hưởng: teach others, share knowledge, contribute to the development of others
=> kết cấu đoạn văn 0 nhất thiết phải theo cứng một công thức mà các câu 2,3,4 có thể linh hoạt (có thể 2 giải thích, 1 vd hoặc cũng có thể 2 vd 1 giải thích, miễn là luận điểm chính ở hai đầu đoạn)

For example, a degree in English may lead to travel around the world to teach others, share knowledge and skills. A university degree also gives a person the confidence necessary to contribute to the development of others.

*bài viết:
1. nowadays, children watch much more tv than they did in the past. what is the reason for this? is this a negative or positive development?

2. What do you think about taking a gap year before going to university?

huonglyams — 2022-11-02 12:30:21 UTC

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U1vz__vR8hQ&ab_channel=AdamEschborn

2022-11-02 13:17:20 UTC

Although children who have a serious form of television addiction is deemed due to entertaining, there are many explanations for it. An increasing number of viewers have a tendency to opt for engaging in watching television because to some extent it helps them to relieve stress and anxious. Nevertheless, it is my firm belief that watching television have not only positive but also negative sides.

I am convinced that watching television might possibly benefit children in several ways. One of the most prominent value is that it seems amusing for express the young ones with a stressful life. Research has shown that many children keep an eye on the screen for a long time to reduce the pressure from school. Additionally, viewers are able to learn knowledge from the reality shows or the feature films to educational endeavor.

On the other hand, there may be some harmful effects of watching TV. Negative psychological effects are one of the biggest handicaps children face. When kids watch TV, they will see all those stupid commercials on TV, in which trashy pink plastic toys look supercool and totally magical, and they will get their parents to spend their hard-earned money to buy toys. If children’s parents do not respond, they can get naughty, irritable, gradually forming an anti-social personality.
In conclusion, it is an undeniable fact that watching TV can be considered as both a boon and a bane. However, in my opinion, its disadvantages are far outweighed by its advantages.

BÀI VIẾT WATCHING TV Vy & Trang Nhung

vyhuyenluong — 2022-11-02 13:17:48 UTC

I am convinced that watching television might possibly benefit children in several ways. One of the most prominent value is that it seems amusing for express the young ones with a stressful life. Research has shown that many children keep an eye on the screen for a long time to reduce the pressure from school. Additionally, viewers are able to learn knowledge from the reality shows or the feature films to educational endeavor.

On the other hand, there may be some harmful effects of watching TV. Negative psychological effects are one of the biggest handicaps children face. When kids watch TV, they will see all those stupid commercials on TV, in which trashy pink plastic toys look supercool and totally magical, and they will get their parents to spend their hard-earned money to buy toys. If children’s parents do not respond, they can get naughty, irritable, gradually forming an anti-social personality.

In conclusion, it is an undeniable fact that watching TV can be considered as both a boon and a bane. However, in my opinion, its disadvantages are far outweighed by its advantages.

Minh Hoàng & Minh Châu

2022-11-02 13:18:14 UTC

Nowadays, the problem of children getting addicted to TV programs has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although this issue can be attributed to a whole of reasons but the young generation will be growing up in positive or negative development depending on how they enclitic this habit.
There are a myriad of reasons why kids spend much time on television than they did in the past. First, the difference in timeline as well as science and technology is a major contributor to this change. These days, we are living in the 4.0 era and there has been many remarkable upgrades from the old television to an smart TV which can connect to networks. With the rapid appear of social networks, they tend to watch programs with attractive and eye-catching content. In fact, these programs provide visual and sound effects that pique children's curiosity.
With the explosion of technology, more and more children are interested in watching TV than they did in the past. Nevertheless, It is my firm belief that watching TV has not only negative but also positive sides.
On the one hand, I personally believe that watching TV has an essential role in developing children's knowledge and characteristics. Watching TV programs such as National Geographic, and Discovery Channel will give children opportunities to widen their horizons of knowledge and provide them with colorful pictures of the world we live in. Moreover, children are likely to become well-behaved citizens if they watch cartoons in which the main character is a hero who defends rights and justice. Also, the main benefit of watching TV is to relieve stress and anxiety after a long and tired at school.
On the other hand, there are a number of reasons why children’s development would be negatively affected by watching TV. Firstly, extended hours of sitting in front of the TV will very likely take a toll on children's physical and mental health. Studies have shown that children these days suffer from a myriad of health problems such as obesity, and eye strain due to hours of watching TV. To make it even worse, watching TV is believed to be the reason for unproductivity, lack of focus, creativity and social skills among children.
In conclusion, it is irrefutable that watching TV has not only negative but also positive sides. So, therefore, parents should encourage their children to watch educational TV programs and have an appropriate amount of time to watch TV.

Nhắc lại cấu trúc của 1 bài luận

2022-11-02 13:18:24 UTC

- Nếu bài hỏi ý mình (có từ you)-> Thì mở bài câu luận điểm luôn chứa "tôi nghĩ, tôi thấy"
- Mở bài gồm 2 câu:
+ Đưa topic
+ Đưa quan điểm cá nhân
-Kết luận gồm 2 câu:
+Khẳng định lại quan điểm cá nhân
+Đưa ra đề suất dựa trên luận điểm đã bảo

Cấu trúc một đoạn trong thân bài:
A sample paragraph ( the benefit of university education)
Those with the means and desire to attend university (những người thích đại học) will find (sẽ thấy) that this experience is very beneficial to preparing a person to become a productive member of society.
C1: đưa ra luận điểm chính (đh sẽ cb cta thành công dân tốt)

Not only can a higher education lead to employment opportunities, it can also teach a person to network, cooperate in a team and be more open-minded.
C2+3: giải thích cd tốt như thế nào

Tertiary education allows people to widen their employment opportunities (nhiều cơ hội việc làm) as well as their own sphere of influence based on greater understanding of world issues.

For example, a degree in English may lead to travel around the world to teach others, share knowledge and skills. A university degree also gives a person the confidence necessary to contribute to the development of others.
C4: ví dụ đưa ra case cụ thể của tầm ảnh hưởng

Kết cục đoạn văn ko nhất thiết phải cứng theo công thức mà các câu 2 3 4 có thể linh hoạt (1 gt, 2vd or 2gt, 1vd), miễn là câu luận điểm chính ở ngay đầu đoạn và các câu trong đoạn ko chệch khỏi lđ chính

Lê Minh Hoàng - Trần Minh Châu - Writting Essay ( In nghiên: my part )

2022-11-02 13:20:27 UTC

There are a myriad of reasons why kids spend much time on television than they did in the past. First, the difference in timeline as well as science and technology is a major contributor to this change. These days, we are living in the 4.0 era and there has been many remarkable upgrades from the old television to an smart TV which can connect to networks. With the rapid appear of social networks, they tend to watch programs with attractive and eye-catching content. In fact, these programs provide visual and sound effects that pique children's curiosity.

On the one hand, I personally believe that watching TV has an essential role in developing children's knowledge and characteristics. Watching TV programs such as National Geographic, and Discovery Channel will give children opportunities to widen their horizons of knowledge and provide them with colorful pictures of the world we live in. Moreover, children are likely to become well-behaved citizens if they watch cartoons in which the main character is a hero who defends rights and justice. Also, the main benefit of watching TV is to relieve stress and anxiety after a long and tired at school.
On the other hand, there are a number of reasons why children’s development would be negatively affected by watching TV. Firstly, extended hours of sitting in front of the TV will very likely take a toll on children's physical and mental health. Studies have shown that children these days suffer from a myriad of health problems such as obesity, and eye strain due to hours of watching TV. To make it even worse, watching TV is believed to be the reason for unproductivity, lack of focus, creativity and social skills among children
In conclusion, it is irrefutable that watching TV has not only negative but also positive sides. So, therefore, parents should encourage their children to watch educational TV programs and have an appropriate amount of time to watch TV.

phnhung + trúc linh 🍑

2022-11-02 13:25:15 UTC

DISADVANTAGES
On the other hand, I daresay those who take a gap year are vulnerable to lack knowledge accumulated. Though enhance social skills, youngsters fear that a gap year might deprive them of all the specialized knowledge. Therefore, students may become less confident and fall behind other classmates. To make it even worse, it appears the type of peer pressure which makes victims concern about their potential. Thus, a gap year, perhaps, takes a serious toll on academic progress.

🍑🍑 bài hoàn chỉnh Trúc Linh + Phương Nhung

2022-11-02 13:25:50 UTC

An increasing number of high-school graduates (ng tot nghiep cap 3) have a tendency to take one year off. Although many countries across the globe particularly incite, I hold that taking a gap year have both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, taking one year off might possibly benefit in several ways. One of the most prominent values is that young people are able to gain a myriad of opportunities. For example, after high-school graduates took a year off and discover their passion, they noticed that instead of pursuing further education, going to work is appropriate to themselves. Additionally, taking a gap year also provides experiences for youngsters to broden their horizon. Not only can a gap year lead to higher communicate skills, it can also teach a person to be self-reliant and master at financial management. Thus, there appears to be always something exciting for high-school graduates to take a gap year.
On the other hand, I daresay those who take a gap year are vulnerable to lack knowledge accumulated. Though enhance social skills, youngsters fear that a gap year might deprive them of all the specialized knowledge. Therefore, students may become less confident and fall behind other classmates. To make it even worse, it appears the type of peer pressure which makes victims concern about their potential. Thus, a gap year, perhaps, takes a serious toll on academic progress.
By the way of conclusion, it is fair to say that taking a gap year has a great positive sides in experiences, but it also exists downside in academic major ( nganh hoc ).

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CHỐT LẠI TEMPLATE

nguyennhu180406 — 2022-11-06 01:54:54 UTC

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gjo0FkxDAhbk0HKUrMxGYmFKI9h6Y5YsG7xMOYAm348/edit?usp=sharing

NHẮC LẠI CẤU TRÚC CỦA BÀI LUẬN

nguyennhu180406 — 2022-11-06 02:30:07 UTC

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lSpKEQN9H0ELZOIOOrMTQGx2uqZKdyZox3Nft0tNJY8/edit?usp=sharing

nguyennhu180406 — 2022-11-06 02:58:46 UTC

7. TRANSLATE INTO ENGLISH

1. Người ta hay nghỉ 1 năm trước khi học tiếp đại học để xác định xem nên học cao lên hay đi làm luôn.

=> People often take off one year before college to determine whether to take further education or work.

take off = fly
take a year off = pause for a year
take further education or work => pursue further education or to go to work = enter the world of work.

2. Nhiều học sinh coi gap year là cơ hội đi du lịch.

=> Many students regard the gap year as a chance to travel around.

3. Nhà tuyển dụng thường thích các ứng viên có kinh nghiệm làm việc thực tiễn.(appeal)

=> Candidates with hands-on experiments appeals to employers (nhà tuyển dụng).

=> Candidates with practical work experiences often appeal to employers.

4. Nếu nghỉ 1 năm để đi du lịch, em sợ sẽ quên hết kiến thức đã học hồi phổ thông.

=> Many fear that a gap year might deprive students of all the knowledge accumulated earlier.

Cấu trúc: deprive sb of sth: tước khỏi cái sth từ sb

5. Bố mẹ em mà giàu và cho em tiền đi du lịch, chả tội gì em không đi.

=> If supported by wealthy parents, it is unusual for one not to take the opportunity.

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1. Người ta hay nghỉ 1 năm trc khi học tiếp đại học để xác định xem nên học cao lên hay đi làm luôn.
➡️People take one year off before collegue to determine whether to pursue further education or enter the world of work.

2. Nhiều học sinh coi gap year là cơ hội đi du lịch.
➡️Many students consider the gap year as an opportunity to travel.

3. Nhà tuyển dụng thường thích các ứng viên có kinh nghiệm làm việc thực tiễn.(appeal)
➡️Candidates with practical work experiences often appeals employers.
4. Nếu nghỉ 1 năm để đi du lịch, em sợ sẽ quên hết kiến thức đã học hồi phổ thông.
➡️If students take a gap year for traveling, many fear that a gap year might deprive students of all the accummulated earlier.
5. Bố mẹ em mà giàu và cho em tiền đi du lịch, chả tội gì em không đi.
➡️If supported by wealthy parents, it is unusal for one not to take the opportunity.

Topic 1: Nowadays, children watch much more television than they did in the past. What is the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

nguyennhu180406 — 2022-11-07 12:08:17 UTC

In this day and age, among children, there is a growing interest in watching television much more than they did in the past. Although it is a common belief that this issue is due to TV programs, there are a number of compelling reasons. First, since the nature of children is curious, they tend to watch TV programs containing attractive and eye-catching contents. In fact, these programs provide visual and sound effects, which evokes children’s curiosity. Second, because of doing work and earning money to meet the standard of living, parents leave their kids with TV. This means that they are able to pay less attention to them, leading to their children’s expanded screen hours.

Despite being regarded as a negative effect on children with many health risks, watching television also has a positive side pertaining to reducing stress.

On the one hand, spending time watching TV might possibly benefit children in several ways. One of the most prominent values is that it can relieve stress after school. Therefore, one has chances to watch whatever he likes, which is considered a reward. Additionally, watching TV can broaden their mind and widen their knowledge about the world through academic programs.

On the other hand, spending free time on watching TV instead of active or creative things may impede the development of creativity, stunt the brain development. According to pediatricians and researches, TV provides no educational benefits for children 2 years old and younger, and can in fact be harmful. In addition, when children see advertisements about trashy pink plastic toys, they are lured by what they see. They will persuade their parents to purchase for that stuff and if parents refuse their desire, they will become badly-behaved. To make it even worse, violent scenes frequently appear on television and may have negative effects on children. Children who see violent acts are more likely to display aggressive or violent behavior.

In conclusion, it is undeniable that watching TV can be considered as both positive and negative attributes; however, its advantages are far outweighed by its disadvantages.

Topic 2: In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

nguyennhu180406 — 2022-11-07 12:09:06 UTC

An increasing number of young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Although many countries across the globe incite, I firmly believe that taking a gap year has both the upside pertaining to practical work and the downside relating to the learning process.

On the one hand, there are a host of substantial benefits that a student may receive from taking a gap year. One of the most prominent values is that students can receive hands-on expertise, which students can experience varied professions. Thus that work experience can help you determine if the path you are considering will be a good one for your own life experiences, goals, and skills. The second benefit accruing from taking a year off to work or travel is gaining new life skills. As you gain those new life experiences, you will also gain life skills. Take your gap year to learn how to budget, manage your time, cook, keep a home or apartment clean, and navigate your local community.

Despite these advantages, accompanying it are many disadvantages, the most prominent among which is the difficulties to transition back to school. Your study habits and learning abilities may (từ trôi đi, phai mờ ý ạ) as you take that year off. Therefore, students may face another problem pertaining to peer pressure. When a student goes to school after his year off, some of his peers will be a year ahead of him.

In summary, taking a gap year has its both benefits and drawbacks. I hold that a student should think carefully to opt to do that or not, it will be relied on their thoughts and the ways they tolerate problems.

2022-11-14 12:24:01 UTC