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      <description>Why is it so important to give good critique and feedback to your writing partner?</description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>I think it's important to give good feedback so that others can feel supported and encouraged to do better.</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>I think it's smart to give feedback so you can get better</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Thomas</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Giving feedback can really improve the work someone does</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>feed back  </div>]]></description>
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         <title>yanelyL</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>the kid drawing named "austin" he kept listening to his friends or classmates and started making the drawing better and better and he did it better intel the last drawing of his school project and he got it better by listening to people and having the eyes of scientist  </div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>its smart because it can help them make it better.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Jas</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Feedback is good for writers because they know what they need to improve on<br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>feedback is key for better writing</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-02 21:13:35 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It's important to give honest feedback so you can improve</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Giving positive feedback can really improve the outcome.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>I Think everyone&nbsp; will change for better.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-08 20:58:01 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Anastasia</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is important to give good critique and feedback to your partner because it could improve the work to the end result to be better than expected.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>aj</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>trying harder can improve your work</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-14 15:59:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>ESAI AVILA</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>try and try and you will see improvement in life </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-14 16:22:22 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>AnthonyP</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>when you stop and revise your work    you can see where you have mesed up you can make it beater than it is.</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>it's telling you to try and try and you&nbsp;<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is most important to try and try until u do it.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Tatyana V </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is important to be a good critique and good writing partner because so, that the other partner or you can improve on what you started.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Haley </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>When you try, you can accomplish your goals.</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>This made me think that you have to try and try.And don't give up and learn from those that are around you.For you to reach your goal.</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>To me it's like austin never gave up and said you are right it does not look like the butterfly and thank for helping be.</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Never give up and keep trying<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>never give up and keep trying and is gonna be good.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Laila Olague </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>never give up on your writting<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>never give up<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>You should not give up or stop learning because you can always correct.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <title>When you try something but fail Never stop trying until you get it right</title>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-29 20:34:36 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Linda Villa</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Never give up on something and keep trying.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-10-03 20:39:39 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>alexa Murillo</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>never give up </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-10-03 20:48:43 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>diaa</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>never give up because  if you do you will fale but if you try  hard you  can do  it</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-10-04 15:57:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ashley Coreas </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>You can make more drafts if it's not&nbsp;<br>good the first time.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Almir T </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Never give up because if you do you fail in life.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Dominique Garcilazo</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is good to give good critique and feedback to you partner because then you can take that advice and make your writing even better than it was before</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-11-04 03:24:15 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Zack Woldeghiorghis</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>If you fail on your writing you should never give up</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Lily G</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>If you don't give good feedback, you and your partner are never going to get better at writing, drawing, etc and the other person will never know how to give good feedback.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Jeremy Turner\</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>I learned that you should always give 100% and that you should not give up.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-11-09 23:57:18 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jorlean Jaimes </title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/136617058</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>you make mistakes put you try multiple times an keep trying your best </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-11-10 03:04:40 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>OSCAR.A</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/138484955</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>never give up and always try your best </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-11-17 17:14:23 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Joshua </title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/138485610</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>If you always give up you will never learn from your mistakes.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-11-17 17:15:52 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>isaiah gonzales </title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/138504410</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>never give up on anything stay strong</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-11-17 18:05:26 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Eric Medel</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>you should never give and alway keep on trying and never give up</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-11-17 22:07:41 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lorraine Benavidez</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It's important to give good feedback to your writing partner because if you take your partner's advice, you could improve your writing.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Daniel Medina</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/138608435</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>It's good to know that you should never give up, ever.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-11-18 03:53:18 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jocelyn Penaloza</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>I learned that you should never give up and keep on trying.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-11-18 17:50:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>I learned that something may not come out perfect at first but if you keep trying you can improve</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/185703368</link>
         <description><![CDATA[]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-09-07 20:59:27 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/185703368</guid>
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      <item>
         <title>How to improve the right way.</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/197775274</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>You should always take a scientific look at the butterfly or object and draw an accurate image. If there are any mistakes, you can always improve to get a better result.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-10-17 13:34:59 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tommy.M</title>
         <author>s90701</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/300487079</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>because when you do they learn to do more to fix the mistakes they made to make the writing better.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-11-05 14:39:26 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Gidian</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/300626546</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>so you can help your friend get better at what ever your assiment is</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-11-05 18:00:11 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/300626546</guid>
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         <title>Say</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/380655691</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Give good feedback to your friends because they can help you and solve your issues. Your friends are honest trustworthy and can greatly improve your writing.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-09-05 20:50:18 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ruby</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/876795554</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>It's pivotal to give good feedback to your writing partner because if something isn't accurate, it can be misleading. Plus, we can always enhance or writing, so there's always room for improvement!</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-30 15:33:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Chloe Garcia</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/876808122</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>It's important to tell feedback to your writing partner because it could make them improve their writing.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-30 15:35:58 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/876808122</guid>
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         <title>Patrick Nagib</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/876976765</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>You should always be honest with yourself and others. If you believe someone might have made a mistake on something or simply could do it better, you should tell them in an honest but kind way. Helping someone do something better is never the wrong thing.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-30 16:14:32 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Emiliano Castellanos</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/876983409</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Never give up and sometimes feedback can help.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-30 16:16:02 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/876983409</guid>
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         <title>Gurnoor Brar</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/876986439</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>It's more helpful if you give help or get help from others because they can tell you what to fix if there are any mistakes and they will be honest with you. Another part of the prompt was how Austain never gave up, he kept on using drafts until he got it right, and he also got help by his friends who told him whats wrong. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-30 16:16:45 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Alexis</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/877381045</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Never give up always try your best.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-30 17:55:29 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/877381045</guid>
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         <title>Akeimy Espinoza</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/877381177</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>In my opinion it is okay to give feedback to people because that helps them get better and learn from their mistakes.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-30 17:55:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Josef Kincaid</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/877389892</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>When writing or drawing  or anything else don't just give up persivior.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-30 17:57:46 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/877389892</guid>
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         <title>Maximo Meghnagi</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/877474628</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I think the fact that the the boy "austin" wasn't told ok you did good in the first draft was smart. It was good they told him to keep trying until he eventually got it right. Now that boy knows not to give up until he has it right or close.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-30 18:20:30 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jadon Chancellor</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/877489714</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I think it's important because if you give feedback to your partner you can help them out and be a nice friend. You can help them improve and get better so they can end up doing it on their own. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-30 18:24:47 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Keala </title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/877495251</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I belive feedback is imporant because if you don´t have feed back then your can´t improve your work and if you try your best then you want work to be the best. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-30 18:26:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Madison Young </title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/877504278</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is important to give good feedback because you can help you partner or anyone improve so they can get better at something.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-30 18:29:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Sufyaan Patel</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264599440</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>If you give good and fair feedback people can improve.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-18 16:53:01 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Aarav J</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264602105</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>When you try you can acheice. Stpping and revising your work can show where you have messed up and can help you improve. Good feedback can improve your writing</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-18 16:55:38 UTC</pubDate>
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      <item>
         <title>Arjun</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264602390</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>You have to give critique so the person can improve.<br>&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-18 16:55:54 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264602390</guid>
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         <title>Aiden </title>
         <author>ak5217_2</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264606034</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is important because if you just agree whatever a person does they'll think everyone agrees with him and that's not good and it helps the person grow and encourage them.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-18 16:59:30 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ishaan Sibia</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264607727</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I learned that feedback can support writers and it is important to give feedback so they can improve their overall writing skills.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-18 17:01:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Dev Ganatra</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264797122</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Giving feedback is important to know what you can do to make it better.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-18 20:06:32 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Zaahir Agha</title>
         <author>za63511</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264811080</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>It's important to give good feedback because the person you don't know what was wrong until you are told how it could be better. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-18 20:27:18 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264811080</guid>
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         <title>Jett</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264811284</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>so they can improve their writing skill</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-18 20:27:36 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264811284</guid>
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      <item>
         <title>Aditya M.</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264834403</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I think that you have to give feedback in order to get better and better.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-18 21:04:35 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264834403</guid>
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         <title>Leah Parsons</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264836042</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I think its important to give feedback so the writer can improve it and make it better.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-18 21:07:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Carson K</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264839099</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I think it is inportant to give good feedback because it helps your partner get better at writting, correct there errors and help them improve in anything they need help in</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-18 21:13:11 UTC</pubDate>
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      <item>
         <title>Jessica Sheely</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264847687</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Because it can help them learn how to do things better and to help them improve.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-18 21:27:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Anya H</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264847960</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Feedback is important to improve work.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-18 21:28:10 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Camila Reyes</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264854457</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Giving someone positive and helpful feedback can help them become better in whatever it is they're doing<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-18 21:41:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Nicco</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264860990</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is good to give people good feedback so they can have more energy and dedication to the project and be happier</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-18 21:53:08 UTC</pubDate>
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      <item>
         <title>Rio</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2264982104</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I think it is important to give good feedback this way others can feel encouraged and this way they can improve.  </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-19 01:04:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Sammy</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2265635427</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is important to give good critique and feedback to your writing partner because it can help improve another person's work and let them use their best writing. When you help give feedback to someone, they can change their work so that it can be their best.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-19 16:11:26 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Allen</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2265669695</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>To complete what you want to do, you better try hard</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-19 16:47:40 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>James</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2265775320</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I think it is important to get feedback from another so you can feel supported and great on what your doing. A feedback from someone you trust will likely get them to give you some compliments so you can feel lifted up to keep doing what you're doing,</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-19 18:52:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jonathan Yu</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2265783962</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Honest feedback is good for improving on your writing<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-19 19:03:19 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Shayna</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2265784464</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I think it is good to get feedback because then you can get better. I know this because in the video&nbsp;the kid drawing listened to his friends and improved.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-19 19:04:03 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Gabi Keenan</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2265788313</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>It's important to give positive feedback because then they can improve their writing.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-19 19:09:44 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Nafisa A </title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2265790326</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>It's important to give truthful feedback without being mean, and the person who is receiving the feedback should listen and then can improve the work. It also encourages people to do more.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-19 19:12:43 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Elise</title>
         <author>ec80071</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2265802471</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>It's important to give good feedback to your partner so that they can grow and improve as a writer and you can grow and improve as a person.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-19 19:28:39 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Meghana Goda</title>
         <author>mg8411_2</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2265802875</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>It's really important to give good critique to your partner so they can improve on their work.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-19 19:29:24 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Evan Lu</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2265803258</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>It's important because you can give feedback to your partner. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-19 19:30:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Brackson</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2265804836</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I think feedback can improve someone knowledge and there writing piece.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-08-19 19:32:44 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Darian Kell</title>
         <author>dk6296_2</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/thughes/3dwoae2awjul/wish/2265807371</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>You can give good feedback and be positive and responses should follow that positivity.<br>You can also talk it out and suggest good and new ideas. Be honest don't hold back but also be kind with your words.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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