https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum MAKE SURE YOU LOG IN FOR CREDIT. Using the rubric as a guide, give each artwork constructive feedback. Each post should contain feedback on at least 2 of the 6 rubric criteria. Move clockwise around your table (do not skip seats) and label each post with the artist's name (name tags should be displayed with work). Final post should be a reflection on your own work based on the feedback submitted by your peers. en-us 2017-03-27 14:17:20 UTC 2017-05-11 13:04:34 UTC hello@padlet.com 10019419 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163115853 The design is nice and clear but the only thing missing is depth around the edges]]> 2017-03-28 13:24:04 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163115853 00061629 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163115925 Too many colors but it goes together well. Overlapping is good. 

]]> 2017-03-28 13:24:14 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163115925 00028575 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116021 Very pretty design exceeds expectations on most criteria. But can't wait for depth and color to be applied.]]> 2017-03-28 13:24:27 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116021 10013086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116029 Your drawing is very unique! You should limit your drawing to 2 main colors and the visual weight is good but most of it seems to be at the top left corner. ]]> 2017-03-28 13:24:28 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116029 00055357 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116117 There may be a few uneven areas, but overall the artwork is very creative and in order. I understand you are not finished and I see where you are going. Very great work! ]]> 2017-03-28 13:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116117 00054834 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116224 I I like the planning and designing on the the paper with the design. The Repetition is good as well.]]> 2017-03-28 13:24:58 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116224 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116251 Nice drawing . Like how you use the newspaper and your colors ]]> 2017-03-28 13:25:01 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116251 10032705 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116375 Overall yours look nice . You were only suppose to use 4 hues though (color ). You should also add some  more newspaper too .

]]> 2017-03-28 13:25:17 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116375 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116579 I like the art that you made looks very creative and neat. All you need to add is more color and this would be a great piece of art.]]> 2017-03-28 13:25:43 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116579 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116612 Overall you artwork looks nice. But you could work on making your paint look smoother instead of making it look liked you rushed through it.

]]> 2017-03-28 13:25:44 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116612 00018993 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116616 The design is okay. Add more newspaper and color.]]> 2017-03-28 13:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116616 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116657 Your planning and design was good. Repetition was well repeated just add more newspaper.]]> 2017-03-28 13:25:50 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116657 shongnba https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116745 Did not complete coloring and newspaper. But I love the background of roses.

]]> 2017-03-28 13:26:05 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116745 00054834 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116887 I like the design of your work and the visual balance of the work.]]> 2017-03-28 13:26:28 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163116887 10022525 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117049 osos your is turning out good but you need more overlap]]> 2017-03-28 13:26:51 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117049 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117062 Could use more depth. The design looks good.]]> 2017-03-28 13:26:52 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117062 00016710 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117121 Your collage looks very nice! I think your strongest category is Visual Balance. The hearts are balanced out well across the paper. Your weakness would be Depth. I see some shading in your collage, but it looks sketchy. Overall, great job!

]]> 2017-03-28 13:27:01 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117121 10019419 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117227 too many colors mixed together making the artwork look dark and dull. But planning and design is great giving the person to really look at whats there]]> 2017-03-28 13:27:15 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117227 00028575 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117493 Your work is very pretty and unique but needs one more color applied to it.]]> 2017-03-28 13:27:52 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117493 00034559 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117524 Your shapes are arranged in way that catches a viewers attention. You haven't added any color yet so I think you should work on adding color.]]> 2017-03-28 13:27:57 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117524 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117566 I like the creation you made looks very colorful and neat. All you need to do now is add more shade to you painting.]]> 2017-03-28 13:28:03 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117566 00055357 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117695 Art Work is very beautiful and neat. The patterns are in order as far as balance and the weight. Very creative! ]]> 2017-03-28 13:28:21 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117695 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117783 The artwork is good. Could use more repetition in artwork and could've took you time drawing lines. ]]> 2017-03-28 13:28:36 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117783 00054834 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117919 I like the planning and designs of this artwork. I don't see anything wrong with it.]]> 2017-03-28 13:29:03 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163117919 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118080 2017-03-28 13:29:30 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118080 10020713 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118153 Design is great. It needs more depth.

]]> 2017-03-28 13:29:42 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118153 00018993 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118203 I like your background of leaves. Add some depth.]]> 2017-03-28 13:29:50 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118203 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118244 I like how your art has unique pictures and shapes. All you need to do is add more colors and more shade and some news paper.]]> 2017-03-28 13:29:58 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118244 10019419 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118269 Too many empty spaces not giving the person to really look at what's on it. But the design is good ]]> 2017-03-28 13:30:02 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118269 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118371 I really like you Rhythm in your artwork and design. It is a really good looking piece of artwork. Great Job.

]]> 2017-03-28 13:30:20 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118371 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118592 You have no newpaper or coloring but  the composition  is nice.

]]> 2017-03-28 13:30:56 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118592 00055357 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118678 Art work is in order and neat. Color is balanced out through out the whole picture. ]]> 2017-03-28 13:31:10 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118678 10032705 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118681 You could have used repetition more . I don think you planned this out . Overall your colors look nice 

]]> 2017-03-28 13:31:10 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118681 00028575 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118704 Exceeds expectations on alot of the criteria but needs depth to be applied and there are a few empty spaces.]]> 2017-03-28 13:31:14 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118704 10013086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118739 I like the way you did your drawing, it's different from others. The only thing is there isn't much overlapping and i realize you didn't finish so, color and shading. ]]> 2017-03-28 13:31:21 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118739 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118915 I like your drawing. The artwork could use more repetition and could've took up more space.]]> 2017-03-28 13:31:55 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118915 00061629 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118936 More than 2 Hues, Balance and repition is good. Guides the viewers eye.]]> 2017-03-28 13:31:59 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163118936 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119151 Your whole paper look amazing and nice love the roses. Now you just need to add more paint and newspaper and shade. Other than that you are doing a great job.]]> 2017-03-28 13:32:41 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119151 10019419 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119163 There's not enough depth in the artwork leaving too much empty space and only having one color on it.]]> 2017-03-28 13:32:43 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119163 00034559 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119214 I think you need to work on movement because you don't have anything overlapping.]]> 2017-03-28 13:32:52 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119214 00030013 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119266 2017-03-28 13:33:00 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119266 00055357 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119438 Art work is really CREATIVE. Remember... Less is more. Colors are balanced out and nicely done. ]]> 2017-03-28 13:33:21 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119438 00016710 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119483 I think your exceed in the Planning & Design and Color. The pattern is a lot, but I think your face stands out the most. Repetition is one of your weaknesses. Overall, I like the collage. Great job!]]> 2017-03-28 13:33:26 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119483 00028575 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119541 This drawing is very pretty and unique. More depth can be applied.]]> 2017-03-28 13:33:37 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119541 00061629 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119608 Too many hues. Love all the details, I like the highlights instead of shadows.]]> 2017-03-28 13:33:48 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119608 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119626 Need more color More repetition ]]> 2017-03-28 13:33:52 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119626 shongnba https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119687 No color and newspaper not full complete.]]> 2017-03-28 13:34:01 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119687 00018993 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119714 Add some color. Try and stick with only a couple of things instead of multiple items.]]> 2017-03-28 13:34:04 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119714 00054834 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119822 I like the visual balance and the planning and design of the artwork. Just need more paint.]]> 2017-03-28 13:34:20 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119822 10019419 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119850 Design is beautiful but the only think that's missing is depth not showing in it]]> 2017-03-28 13:34:23 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119850 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119879 the composition  is awesome  but no color or newspaper  is incorporated ]]> 2017-03-28 13:34:26 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163119879 10013086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120030 The only thing is repetition, the shape in your drawing aren't repeated but everything else is good. ]]> 2017-03-28 13:34:51 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120030 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120036 I really like the balance and repetition. It could've used at least 1 different artwork. But Overall it is a very good artwork.]]> 2017-03-28 13:34:51 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120036 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120128 Need more repetition and color.]]> 2017-03-28 13:35:07 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120128 00061629 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120233 I like the design so far, very symetrical. I like how the newspaper overlaps the faces. Needs color. ]]> 2017-03-28 13:35:24 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120233 00018993 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120246 Add some color and some more details]]> 2017-03-28 13:35:27 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120246 00035902 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120319 I like how creative your art was you showed that you love football. Now you need to add newspaper and color.]]> 2017-03-28 13:35:40 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120319 00054834 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120441 Like the designs and the color of the art. Just needs more paint.]]> 2017-03-28 13:35:58 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120441 shongnba https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120462 No coloring and no newspaper but project looks descent.

]]> 2017-03-28 13:35:59 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120462 00034559 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120556 Your planning and design was good many original drawing was traced.]]> 2017-03-28 13:36:12 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120556 00028575 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120581 Limit yourself to two hues.]]> 2017-03-28 13:36:16 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120581 00055357 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120625 Very nice and thought out! 
The colors really balance out. I love the artwork  ]]> 2017-03-28 13:36:22 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120625 00018993 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120637 Finish outlining and try and fill in some more of the white space. Add newspaper and color.]]> 2017-03-28 13:36:23 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120637 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120739 Need more repetition and color and newspaper.]]> 2017-03-28 13:36:39 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120739 10032705 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120767 I think you need to add color . Choose to hues and lighten . darker en and mix them . I also think you needed use proportions more .]]> 2017-03-28 13:36:43 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120767 10020713 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120770 Looks great. Very good visuals]]> 2017-03-28 13:36:43 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120770 00028575 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120794 Drawing is very beautiful and exceeds expectations on most criteria but has more than two hues]]> 2017-03-28 13:36:46 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120794 00054834 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120904 like the designs and the color just need to be finished.]]> 2017-03-28 13:37:01 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163120904 00061629 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121010 Very little design and planning. No balanced. I like the color but it needs another hue.]]> 2017-03-28 13:37:16 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121010 10022525 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121086 like your artwork just need color

]]> 2017-03-28 13:37:26 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121086 00034559 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121151 Planning and designing was good. You have a color scheme

]]> 2017-03-28 13:37:34 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121151 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121191 Good repetition and background.]]> 2017-03-28 13:37:40 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121191 shongnba https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121199 Colors done and newspaper is done you should finish the hair. Other then that pretty good]]> 2017-03-28 13:37:41 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121199 10032705 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121246 I thought you could have choose more than 2 objects to repeat . I think you need some color and newspapaer and it will look great 

]]> 2017-03-28 13:37:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121246 00061629 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121330 Only 2 hues, balanced. Overlaps nicely. Contrast. Good visual weight. Rhythm.]]> 2017-03-28 13:38:01 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121330 00016710 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121446 I think your design is well thought out. You lack depth in your collage. Overall, great job!

]]> 2017-03-28 13:38:20 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121446 00055357 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121484 Artwork is not finished. Creativity is nice, but overall neatness could be used. More critique will be used when done]]> 2017-03-28 13:38:24 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121484 10032705 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121547 I dont think thsi was planned out . It looks like you just threw objects on a paper 


]]> 2017-03-28 13:38:34 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121547 10013086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121556 I like the designs in your drawing, they really stand out in your drawing. You should limit your drawing to 2 hues and add shading]]> 2017-03-28 13:38:35 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121556 10022525 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121582 i like the overlap and the artwork just need color

]]> 2017-03-28 13:38:40 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121582 10019419 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121692 I don't have enough repetition]]> 2017-03-28 13:38:58 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121692 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121697 I believe that my strength's are Rhythm and Design. And I feel that one of my weakness's are composition and depth]]> 2017-03-28 13:38:59 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121697 00034559 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121801 You have many shapes overlapping ]]> 2017-03-28 13:39:16 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163121801 10032705 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163122036 I know Icould have did my lines better and I plan on adding color tomrow ,

]]> 2017-03-28 13:39:48 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163122036 10013086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163122570 I can tell your planned out your drawing. The only things you need to do is shade.]]> 2017-03-28 13:41:06 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163122570 00028575 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163122581 I should limit myself to two hues. But besides that I have alot of design and overlapping in my drawing.]]> 2017-03-28 13:41:08 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163122581 00016710 https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163122910 I like the movement of your collage. I think you had lots of color, but they are supposed to be watery colors. Overall, good job!

]]> 2017-03-28 13:42:00 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/3awt41f7buum/wish/163122910