https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk 1. Choose a line(s) from either page 6, 35, or 49 that contains a poetic device (imagery, metaphor, simile, personification, hyperbole, alliteration, onomatopoeia) that stands out to you for any reason. Record /type the line(s) in AWE. 2. Then, underneath the line(s) in AWE, evaluate the line(s) you have chosen. What does this line(s) add to the poem/scene AND to the story overall? en-us 2018-04-19 00:32:48 UTC 2026-02-13 01:48:40 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Doubleheart.png https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk/wish/259926398 1.AWE (I was worried about my mom she started taking naps and stopped eating and threw up in the kitchen sink . )
2. This shows that she know that something was wrong with her mom her characteristics showed that something was wrong . Plus it shows that she cares and know whats going on.I used personification .

]]> 2018-05-11 13:04:36 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk/wish/259926398 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk/wish/259927549 1.page 6, (onomatopoeia) AWE
"thump-thump goes my heart"
2. I have chosen onomatopoeia to show how annie's heartbeat was, how the author did this was by showing the reader's how the sound and act of "thump-thump" was used to show annie's heart (noise). This line adds to the poem/scene overall because it adds more life to the story, other than just saying "her heart beated", the author expanded on it and used onomatopoeia.]]> 2018-05-11 13:07:49 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk/wish/259927549 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk/wish/259947381 1.(page 35) "Some fear: algebra and test. I am not good at these things but I do not fear them and I wonder if I was wrong. I wonder if I am supposed to fear them. Many of them Love: candy and television weekends and sleeping. I like these things but I do not love them and I wonder if I am supposed to love them".

2. I have chosen repetition,
because on page 35, the entire page is restating itself. The first section on the page it saying things that are fears, but now knowing if she should fear them. In the second section of it is talking about what are loves, but questioning if she should love them. I feel like the author is using this to make a point that the things she is questioning in school and her personal life, she will have to make those choices with her mom, grandpa or Max. Also the author is using this to repeat the point of the section so it sticks with you and you might need to think about it later in the book.]]> 2018-05-11 13:56:03 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk/wish/259947381 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk/wish/259947687 1. (AWE) page 6 (repitition)
"i'm pretty sure she had a deadly disease and she would shrivel up into nothing and she would die".
2. I have chosen this line of repitition because she is afraid she will be left all alone, and she will have nobody there for her, and she keeps thinking that and getting scared of that. This line adds to the poem/scene overall because it adds her fear to the story, because she does not want to be left alone, and not have anybody there for her, and because her mom is having a baby, and she doesn't want the "alien baby" to hurt her mom. ]]> 2018-05-11 13:56:15 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk/wish/259947687 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk/wish/260022661 1. "I tell him about the box of charcoal pencils soft and black as night and colored pencils with every pastel color and the paper thick and white on which you can draw whatever you want" (Creech 49).
2. I quoted a stanza with imagery in it. The way she describes the pencils shows how much she wants them. It adds to the poem/scene because it show that even though she loves running, she has other hobbies too. Her world doesn't revolve around running as much as readers are led to begin before this page. This imagery adds to the story because by showing how much she wants them, readers can truly understand a decision she has to make in the future. I predict that in the second half of the book, she has to decide whether she wants to get herself coloring pencils, help Max buy the running shoes he needs, or chose a different way to spend her money.]]> 2018-05-11 17:07:07 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk/wish/260022661 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk/wish/260022799 1. "but I would have to come back
thump-thump
thump-thump
sooner or later" (Creech 6)

2. I picked these lines because of the onomatopoeia. The onomatopoeia shows how she runs when afraid-runs alone. Then she states how she knows she would have to come back sooner or later, and then the thumping of her heart also means something else-fear. I think it shows how she is afraid, yet brave-because you can't be courageous without fear. It adds life to the poem and the book overall-it helps us relate to Annie, which if you can relate to the character, that always makes the book better. I also feel the onomatopoeia adds to the poem itself by showing her true feelings. How even though Annie may be scared, she knows she'll have to come back eventually.]]> 2018-05-11 17:07:29 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk/wish/260022799 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk/wish/260059412 1. "But I would have to come back
thump-thump
thump-thump
sooner or later"
(Creech 6).

2. I chose this because it has onomatopoeia. This is because when Annie was running afraid of if her mom would die because she was acting different, her heart made heart beats that were fast when she was running and when she was scared of her mom, but she knew she would have to come back sometime. The onomatopoeia makes the book more of Annie's feeling and why she did what she did.]]> 2018-05-11 18:54:05 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk/wish/260059412 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk/wish/260059472 1. "He wiggles his feet 
flexes his ankles
These are my tickets
out of here"(Creech 18).

2. I chose this because it's a metaphor. This metaphor shows how he think his feet are not just apart of his body but a way to leave this small place where he feels trapped ]]> 2018-05-11 18:54:15 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk/wish/260059472 volzcol69 https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk/wish/260059515 1. and i was pretty sure
she had a deadly disease.
and she would shrivel into nothing. 
and she would die. and i would be alone (creech 6)

2. this is an example of repetition because shes exaggerating what the situation is and doesn't want it to happen ans shows she loves her mother and wiss be sad if she dies]]> 2018-05-11 18:54:23 UTC https://padlet.com/wolfwen/3awb5r41fhyk/wish/260059515