3、… as Caballero (2005) reveals, women in Brazil with lowest income have a higher underweight and overweight than do women with top income.

4、A large number of countries started to be aware of gender issues in their HIV arrangement processes, however, an enormous quantity lack economic and policy support for such issues (UNAIDS, 2008).

5、… and, as demonstrated by data from the WHO (2003), the tendency of tobacco use follows a gradient that poorer individuals are likely to use them more than the wealthier. This data also shows that similar phenomena occur with respect to education levels …

According to Bell, Devarajan and Gersbach (2003), the gross domestic products of the most affected countries have decreased due to the lack of human capital, and without proper nutrition, healthcare and medicine, large number of people died because of AIDS- related complications.

… as Caballero (2005) reveals, in Brazil women with lowest income have a higher underweight as well as a higher prevalence of overweight than women with top income.

A large number of countries started to be aware of gender issues in their HIV arrangement processes, however, an enormous quantity lack economic and policy support for such issues (UNAIDS, 2008).

… and, as demonstrated by data from the WHO (2003), the tendency of tobacco use follows a gradient that poorer individuals are likely to use them more than the wealthier. This data also shows that similar phenomena occur with respect to education levels …

According to Bell, Devarajan and Gersbach (2003), the gross domestic products of the most affected countries have decreased due to the lack of human capital. And without proper nutrition, healthcare and medicine, large number of people died because of AIDS-related complications.

… as Caballero (2005) reveals, in Brazil women with lowest income have a higher prevalence of underweight and overweight than do women with top income.

A large number of countries started to be aware of gender issues in their HIV arrangement processes, but an enormous quantity lack economic and policy support for such issues (UNAIDS, 2008).

… and, as demonstrated by data from the WHO (2003), the tendency of tobacco use follows a gradient that poorer individuals are likely to use tobacco products more than the wealthier. This data also shows that similar phenomena occur with respect to education levels … 

2.According to Bell, Devarajan and Gersbach (2003), because of the lack of human capital the gross domestic products of the most affected countries have decreased. And without proper nutrition, healthcare and medicine, large number of people died for AIDS-related complications.

3.In Brazil women with lowest income have a higher underweight and overweight than do women with top income(Caballero,2005).

4.A large number of countries started to be aware of gender issues in their HIV arrangement processes, but there is still a little budget and policy to support it. (UNAIDS, 2008).

5. Education and wealth levels will have affect on the usage of tobacco products, and higher levels’ group people tend to use less WHO(2003)

 

2.According to Bell, Devarajan and Gersbach (2003), the gross domestic products of the most affected countries have decreased due to the lack of human capital. They also state that, without proper nutrition, healthcare and medicine, large number of people died because of AIDS-related complications.--outright copying

 

3.… as Caballero (2005) reveals, in Brazil women with lowest income have a higher underweight as well as a higher overweight than do women with top income.--patchwork plagiarism

 

4.A large number of countries started to be aware of gender issues in their HIV arrangement processes, an enormous quantity lack economic and policy support for such issues (UNAIDS, 2008).--paraphrase plagiarism

 

5.… and, as demonstrated by data from the WHO (2003), the tendency of tobacco use follows a gradient that poorer individuals are likely to use tobacco products more than the wealthier. This data also shows that similar phenomena occur with respect to education levels …--outright copying

 

1、As the deadly disease  continues to cover through much of the continent, the disease continues to wipe out the poor and the wealthy (Peabody, 2000).

It is not appropriate to use “disease”,”continent” to take the place of “AIDS”,”Africa”

 

2、According to Bell, Devarajan and Gersbach (2003), the gross domestic products of the most affected countries have decreased due to the lack of human capital. They also state that, without proper nutrition, healthcare and medicine, large number of people died because of AIDS-related complications.

The authors’name are not in correct format

My answer: AIDS as one of the deadly disease is widespread in almost the whole African continent. In the presence of disease,the poor and rich are all the same(Peabody,2000).

 

2. My comment: The sentence is outright copied from the original sentence.

My answer: According to Bell, Devarajan and Gersbach (2003),lacking of human capital,gross domestic products have dropped in most of the affected countries.The death of huge amount of people in AIDS-related complications due to unreasonable nutrition, healthcare and medicine.

3. My comment: The sentence does not include the page number and the name of journal.

My answer: ...as Caballero (2005) reveals, Brazilian women who living with lowest incomes have a higher proportion of underweight and overweight than those who with top income(New England Journal of Medicine,p.1514-1516).

 

4. My comment: The sentence is similar to the original in structure.

My answer: In the processes of HIV arrangement,gender issues have started to be recognized by many particular countries and an enormous quantity lack economic and policy are supported for such issues (UNAIDS, 2008). 

 

5. My comment: The sentence is exactly correct, Because the words and sentence structure has been changed.

Reason : In the student paraphrase , the sentence‘ the disease continues to wipe out the poor and the wealthy ’is the same as the extract .

Reason : The sentence‘the gross domestic products of the most affected countries have decreased due to the lack of human capital ’is the same as the extract .

Reason : If using a direct quotation it need to include a page number

Reason : The student just paraphrase certain words and phrases such as‘ a large majority of ’、‘begun ’, and meanwhile , keeping others in the text the same as the original .

Reason : The student paraphrases certain words and phrases whilst keeping others in the text the same as the original .

1. As the deadly disease， for example， AIDS， continues to cover through much of Africa, the disease continues to wipe out the poor and the wealthy (Peabody, 2000).

 

2. According to Bell, Devarajan and Gersbach (2003), the gross domestic products of the most affected countries have decreased due to the lack of human capital. They also state that, without proper nutrition, healthcare and medicine, large number of people died from AIDS-related complications.

 

3. … as Caballero (2005) reveals in ‘A nutrition paradox - underweight and obesity in developing countries’ , in Brazil women with lowest income have a higher underweight as well as a higher overweight than do women with top income.

 

4. UNAIDS (2008) stated on the global AIDS epidemic that a large number of countries started to be aware of gender issues in their HIV arrangement processes, but that still lack an enormous quantity of economic and policy to support them.

 

5. … and, as demonstrated by data from the WHO (2003), the tendency of tobacco use follows a gradient that poorer individuals are likely to use tobacco products more than the wealthier. This data also shows that similar phenomena occur with respect to education levels …

3.Bracket is not including Caballero
4.Bracket is not including WHO
5.Patchwork

2. Outright copying

3. patchwork plagiarism

4. paraphrase plagiarism

5. patchwork plagiarism

 As the deadly disease， for example， AIDS， continues to cover through much of Africa, the disease continues to wipe out the poor and the wealthy (Peabody, 2000).

2. Outright copying

According to Bell, Devarajan and Gersbach (2003), the gross domestic products of the most affected countries have decreased due to the lack of human capital. They also state that, without proper nutrition, healthcare and medicine, large number of people died from AIDS-related complications.

3. patchwork plagiarism

… as Caballero (2005) reveals in ‘A nutrition paradox - underweight and obesity in developing countries’ , in Brazil women with lowest income have a higher underweight as well as a higher overweight than do women with top income.

4. paraphrase plagiarism

UNAIDS (2008) stated on the global AIDS epidemic that a large number of countries started to be aware of gender issues in their HIV arrangement processes, but that still lack an enormous quantity of economic and policy to support them.

5. patchwork plagiarism

… and, as demonstrated by data from the WHO (2003), the tendency of tobacco use follows a gradient that poorer individuals are likely to use tobacco products more than the wealthier. This data also shows that similar phenomena occur with respect to education levels …