https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg Reflect on drafting the conclusion paragraph for your persuasive essay. What did you find most challenging about this activity? What did you find least challenging? Explain your reasoning. en-us 2018-03-09 13:22:28 UTC 2018-03-14 13:32:41 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241853909 I thoughtt my conclusion went well. The most challenging part of the conclusion was the reminder of controversy, this was the most challenging because i did not want to repeat my intro. The least challenging part of the conclusion was the hook, this was the least challenging because I already had many different interesting facts.]]> 2018-03-14 13:19:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241853909 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241854055 Reflecting on drafting the conclusion for my persuasive essay the thing that was most challenging about this activity was relating my claim so it would not be exactly like my beginning claim. I want to change the words around but still have the same meaning as my beginning claim. I wanted to make sure that i was still able to get my point across. What I found least challenging was writing my call to action. I found this pretty easy because i knew what my point was so basically all that i had to do was say what i want the people reading my article to do. ]]> 2018-03-14 13:19:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241854055 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241854173 What I found most challenging about drafting my conclusion was finding a hook. I didn’t know how exactly to write my hook. So I ended up getting a quote. What I found least challenging was writing my reminder of the controversy, becuase I knew all that.]]> 2018-03-14 13:19:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241854173 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241854175 I thought drafting my conclusion was pretty easy, in fact, I could say it was the easiest paragraph out of all of them. I think it was most challenging to restate my claim and everything else was pretty straight forward.]]> 2018-03-14 13:19:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241854175 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241854334 The least challenging part of drafting the conclusion paragraph was restating the claim. I had the claim laid out for me already, so it was easy to restate it.]]> 2018-03-14 13:20:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241854334 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241854387 2018-03-14 13:20:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241854387 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241854490 What I found most challenging about the conclusion paragraph was the reminder of the controversy because it practically copied your claim and you had to swap words so it did not sound repetitive. The easiest part for me was the hook because I like trying to grab the reader.

]]> 2018-03-14 13:20:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241854490 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241854672 Reflecting on drafting the conclusion, the most challenging part for me was summing up the ideas. This was challenging for me because it was hard to sum up all of the ideas that I have already explained. The least challenging thing for me was restating my claim. Since I had already made my claim, all I had to do was restate it with different words. That is what I found most challenging and least challenging about drafting the conclusion paragraph.]]> 2018-03-14 13:20:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241854672 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241854752 I found that the conclusion was easy but we had to really stop and think about what we wanted to say. The hardest part was the hook because I didn’t know what to say. That is how i felt about yesterdays activity.]]> 2018-03-14 13:20:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241854752 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241854924 The conclusion wasn’t very difficult for me to complete. I found a hook easily and was done with it pretty quickly. As you can see the conclusion was pretty easy and I didn’t have difficulty completing it]]> 2018-03-14 13:20:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241854924 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855042 i found that the most challenging part of creating my conclusion paragraph was coming up with a call to action, since i have not really told my readers a suggestion of how to carry my opinion farther.]]> 2018-03-14 13:21:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855042 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855126 The hardest thing about drafting my conclusion was trying to come up with a hook]]> 2018-03-14 13:21:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855126 mattkingoflolz12345 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855149 Drafting the conclusion was the least hardest. It was pretty simple. All i had to do was restate my claim, give a quote, tell people what to do, and explain the purpose of the text all over again. So it was pretty simple. The most challenging was the 3rd paragraph, since i had to restate the claim and i had to find evidence to how GMO’s are good (I’m neutral, if you want to know). And i had to state how it goes opposed of the counterclaim.]]> 2018-03-14 13:21:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855149 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855402 What i found most challenging about this was writing my evidence. Most of the articles were very dry and didn’t have a lot of reasons. What I found least challenging was writing my commentary as it was pretty straight forward.]]> 2018-03-14 13:21:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855402 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855420 Yesterday’s closing paragraph went pretty well. I found some things challenging and some things easy. One thing I found challenging was making my call to action. This was because I had to go onto the internet and research a bunch of websites to donate to stop global warming, I also had to make sure these websites were legit or not. One thing I found easy was restating my claim. I already had a claim in my introductory paragraph, so all I had to do to restate my claim was paraphrase my claim from the introductory paragraph a little bit.]]> 2018-03-14 13:21:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855420 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855599 I found most challenging for the call of action because there is nothing you could really do for No-kill shelters unless you are in the government of the United States. For the Bibliography I found most challenging to write the URL address because it took a long time. I found least challenging to restate my claim for my conclusion. ]]> 2018-03-14 13:21:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855599 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855905 I found it challenging to get out an important point that made the reader think in my conclusion because I wanted something they could do, question, or even think on just by reading it so I had trouble finding how to make it so that they did these things. What I found least challenging was rewriting my claim because I had already done it in my introduction so all I needed to do was change some of the wording.]]> 2018-03-14 13:22:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855905 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855943 What i found most challenging about writing the conclusion paragraph was writing another hook, as I had a lesson during class, and was not sure exactly what I had to do until I asked a friend]]> 2018-03-14 13:22:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855943 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855986 I didn’t find anything  too challenging other than the call to action because who would I tell my readers- If I even get any- to talk to about removingmy  pennies. I noticed how many people can and will disagree with me, including my sister. 
The rest was really easy. I restated my topics and claim and chose and different hook. I used a question for the first hook and then for my second hook, i used a question.


Happy Pi day!!!!! ]]> 2018-03-14 13:22:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855986 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855999 Something that I found most challenging when writing my conclusion was the reminder of the controversy. I thought that this was difficult because i didnt know how to make it sound write and what vocabulary words i should use. Something that i found least challenging when writing my conclusion was writing my claim. This was the easiest part of my conclusion because all i needed to do was simply change a couple of words around and then i had it restated. That is what i found least challenging and most challenging when writing my conclusion in the evidence organizer.]]> 2018-03-14 13:22:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241855999 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241856032 I think the most challenging part was Remind them of the controversy because it was wired to do that for the first time, and I didn’t know what to say, so i think I did bad on that because not knowing what to say and doing that for the first time was pretty hard, another challenging part was the call to action, i have never done that before either, and there was a big chance, i screwed that up too. That is what i found most challenging in the conclusion]]> 2018-03-14 13:22:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241856032 sg502100 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241856155 I found that the conclusion paragraph was not difficult, but i did have some problems creating a call-to-action. Overall the conclusion paragraph was simple.

]]> 2018-03-14 13:22:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241856155 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241856168 What i found most challenging about this activity was restating my claim,i found this challenging because I trying not to sound repetitive.What I found least challenging was using a different hook,this was least challenging because I alreedy had something in mind for my hook.]]> 2018-03-14 13:22:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241856168 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241856332 The thing I found most challenging was finding a good quote to put in my intro. There’s not may good quotes about fossil fuels,so it was challenging. The thing I found least challenging was restating what my essay was about.]]> 2018-03-14 13:22:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241856332 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241856726 foundReflecting on drafting my conclusion paragraph what I found most challenging is summarizing my most important points because I want to leave what reader with them thinking that they should adopt animals. What I found least challenging was the hook because i already had in mind what I was going to do.]]> 2018-03-14 13:23:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241856726 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241856899 2018-03-14 13:23:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241856899 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241857432 I thought that the conclusion went well.]]> 2018-03-14 13:24:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241857432 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241857489 What I found most challenging was the reminder of the controversy. I found it hard to sum up my most important points because i had so many I wanted to convey.
Also I found it easy to organize that explains itself.]]> 2018-03-14 13:24:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241857489 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241858090 2018-03-14 13:25:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241858090 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241858231 I found the conclusion most challenging because of all i had to do. Citing was easy so. That was the last challenge.]]> 2018-03-14 13:25:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241858231 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241858715 2018-03-14 13:26:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241858715 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241859945 2018-03-14 13:28:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241859945 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241860810 2018-03-14 13:29:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241860810 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241861176 2018-03-14 13:30:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241861176 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241861556 2018-03-14 13:30:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241861556 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241861871 2018-03-14 13:31:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/39u3h97wfrvg/wish/241861871