Year 2 Critique Board by Katie Brosnan

2nd page of the comic (beginning

2025-04-28 14:01:16 UTC

Does the dialogue make sense?

2025-04-28 14:01:42 UTC

I want the text to represent romantic cannibalism but not in a straight up obvious way, also im unsure of the layout

twi23235466 — 2025-04-28 14:02:43 UTC

I tried out cutting fonts of 2010s slang words any songs or words that relate to 2010s or fonts anyone knows of that could improve this? Fanks.

Character design page 1

ada23238038 — 2025-04-28 14:03:04 UTC

Lil Guy

2025-04-28 14:03:08 UTC

2025-04-28 14:03:13 UTC

Are the shadows too dark to make out any details?

Lil Guy Part 2

2025-04-28 14:03:29 UTC

4m5w8hz4hn — 2025-04-28 14:03:33 UTC

I want the text to represent romantic Cannibalism without being blunt, also I can’t decide on the actual layout

Pigeon inspired stickers

poh23236193 — 2025-04-28 14:03:33 UTC

Got like 3 pages but have to upload them separately

Any more design ideas or anything wrong with these?

Steven 😎

ada23238038 — 2025-04-28 14:03:40 UTC

Pigeon inspired stickers 2

poh23236193 — 2025-04-28 14:03:56 UTC

The second page

The guy (might be named gregg)

ada23238038 — 2025-04-28 14:04:20 UTC

Page ideas for my concept art book

sew23234496 — 2025-04-28 14:04:23 UTC

A series of pages featuring my characters and brief writing on them

Third page in progress

2025-04-28 14:04:40 UTC

Does anything need improving? I’m kinda blind with my own work or I’m just confused on what needs working on. (It’s not finished)

Pigeon stickers 3

poh23236193 — 2025-04-28 14:04:54 UTC

Last page (this one isn't sized to A4 yet)

punk outfit designs 1

wil22229514 — 2025-04-28 14:05:31 UTC

it is giving punk???

The paper bag book I made

sew23234496 — 2025-04-28 14:06:13 UTC

A random drawing I did with the character I’m using (The girl infront) but the actual drawing I wanted help on is “waiting for approval” and told me that help is available 😭🙏

4m5w8hz4hn — 2025-04-28 14:11:28 UTC

First page of comic

2025-04-28 14:12:48 UTC

IS IT TOO MUCH???

Spoiler alert???

2025-04-28 14:14:11 UTC

This is for the ending (idk why I’m working in different orders)

Desk.

twi23235466 — 2025-04-28 14:14:16 UTC

A small version of my desk from home. Anyway of making it neater or coloured in an easier way?

Bat in a glass.

ozo23238505 — 2025-04-28 14:16:14 UTC

Is this design good enough to keep and put on a shirt, or shall I change it?

(Background would be transparent, not coloured)

Material experiment tarot piece

ada23238038 — 2025-04-28 14:25:09 UTC

Drawing without the overlay so the text is somewhat more readable

4m5w8hz4hn — 2025-04-28 14:25:46 UTC

Lil Guy Final Form

2025-04-28 14:45:43 UTC

Trans gay bear character

ada23238038 — 2025-04-28 14:59:47 UTC

A rough animation of one of my character’s dog

2025-04-29 15:03:07 UTC

Ocean theme booklet narrative non fiction

2025-04-29 15:03:56 UTC

Working on a front cover composition, colouring and title font (tablet is very rough sketch i focused more on the font)

2nd page for Tudor inspired comic 🌹WIP

2025-04-29 15:05:33 UTC

mage cards for my board game

Axolotyl — 2025-04-29 15:07:25 UTC

The cover to my comic book

2025-04-29 15:08:01 UTC

I still need to add text

Final piece painting design

2025-04-29 15:08:15 UTC

Insect Dish design for Sci-fi story :D

2025-04-29 15:10:00 UTC

In the hypothetical scenario where mammals went extinct and humans have to eat insects in the future.

Museum sketch

2025-04-29 15:11:27 UTC

A sketch based on an image from a museum trip, for my final I’m created a detailed figure from a classical painting so wanted to try it with another drawing to see how it went

Item Cards for card game

col22226821 — 2025-04-29 15:25:42 UTC