https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br What aspect did you really like in your peer's diary entry? en-us 2019-02-26 15:21:09 UTC 2019-03-02 09:05:32 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336308223 To prerna 
You have managed to write your diary entry in chronological order and you have used also used amazing emotive words such as devastated and contented]]> 2019-02-28 09:27:11 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336308223 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336308818 Liked how u thought use of ur imagination 
Also u put it in very good chronological order
Work on handwriting I can barely see it 
But good work


By anonymous ]]> 2019-02-28 09:29:04 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336308818 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336309677 To Mishal 
You have managed to use connectives 
You have written it in chronological order

]]> 2019-02-28 09:31:48 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336309677 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336309823 Pratmesh used abit of connectives such as:however,and,I.And you had sticky glue words such as:and.But he didint use alot of emotive words.


From anonymus]]> 2019-02-28 09:32:17 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336309823 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336309833 To Angelina  

You used colon and semi colon.
I liked your wild imagination emotive words. 

]]> 2019-02-28 09:32:19 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336309833 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336309836 To Taha 
You have managed to put the dear diary in chonological order.
You have managed to put the date(27-2-18).]]> 2019-02-28 09:32:20 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336309836 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336310096 To Maheen 
You have managed to write your diary entry in chronological order and you have used emotive words such as contented and devastate ]]> 2019-02-28 09:33:11 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336310096 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336310212 YOU HAVE USED PUNCTUATION AND YOU HAVE USED AFFITION EMOTIVE WORDS LIKE TORTUROUS AND HAVE VERY DETAILED INFORMATION ABOUT THE EMOTION OF THE BOY]]> 2019-02-28 09:33:34 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336310212 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336310229 Veil ire u used good vocabulary and u used alot  of brackets]]> 2019-02-28 09:33:35 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336310229 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336310407 To Omar
You have managed to use some time adverbials like After a few days]]> 2019-02-28 09:34:13 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336310407 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336310629 To Haris,

You have done a great use of emotive language and you have dear diary and you used first person and you did it in chronologoical order]]> 2019-02-28 09:35:03 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336310629 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336310991 To Micheal
You were able to use a good range of informal language and you were about to put in a little twist with the grandpa and that's what hooked to continue reading good job ]]> 2019-02-28 09:36:14 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336310991 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336311366 Dear Nara,
            You have used a range of emotive words  in your diary entry.you have also included all the features of a diary         entry. And your diary entry is really interesting to read.]]> 2019-02-28 09:37:29 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336311366 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336311402 You have used excellent chronological order and rhetorical questions such as: Why am I tied up?
Good use of speech and informal language, such as: “Blow the candle and make a wish”.]]> 2019-02-28 09:37:36 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336311402 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336311716 You have used alot  of emotive language and have used cohesive devices.]]> 2019-02-28 09:38:38 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336311716 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336311949 To mikhail 
You. Used alot  of emotive words and you did it in first person]]> 2019-02-28 09:39:27 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336311949 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336312032 To raya
You have managed to write in a first person 
You have used MANY of  time adverbial ]]> 2019-02-28 09:39:41 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336312032 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336312138 To:anesu
You were very creative
You used a lot of cohesion 
You could improve your handwriting


]]> 2019-02-28 09:40:04 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336312138 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336312226 You have used lots of high level vocabulary 
You have used semi colons

]]> 2019-02-28 09:40:24 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336312226 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336312342 To Mariam 

You have included a lot of emotive language and added in chronological order ]]> 2019-02-28 09:40:49 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336312342 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336312427
You have used a lot of suspense in your writing and you have used high level vocabulary like,hesitation,abnormal]]> 2019-02-28 09:41:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336312427 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336312516 To sanad

You have used a range of emotive words and you used the diary features
From........]]> 2019-02-28 09:41:25 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336312516 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336312750 You have used a lot of great emotive words.You have also used conjunctions.]]> 2019-02-28 09:42:18 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336312750 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336313023 Ur storYYYY was intTTTErESSStinng
U Used gooOOOOddd tiM AdVIRBIA}AALS  mA doood ]]> 2019-02-28 09:43:12 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336313023 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336313331 You have managed to use a lot of emotive words and you have also managed to keep your story in chronological order the whole diary entry]]> 2019-02-28 09:44:25 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336313331 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336313489 To faiyaz,
You have used great high level vocabulary such as barbaric and depresion and you.  Used chronological order ]]> 2019-02-28 09:44:58 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336313489 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336313501 You have followed the structure of a diary entry you have also written you diary entry in chronological order . You have also used various writing tools such as  : parenthesis  and rethorical questions . ]]> 2019-02-28 09:45:00 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336313501 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336313831 You have used good cohesive devices and good adjectives ]]> 2019-02-28 09:46:19 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336313831 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336313986 You have used high level vocabulary such as depression and babaric and you used  chronological order]]> 2019-02-28 09:46:54 UTC https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336313986 https://padlet.com/nags_8/37e8aom373br/wish/336315355 To Dishi,
          You have used  dialogue really well in your work.you have also used emotive words effectively,such as:         horrible,miserable,melancholy.

From: anonymous 

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