https://padlet.com/hardmmeg000/37a8vv8w96zu Made with a stroke of good luck en-us 2018-04-25 15:06:59 UTC 2018-05-23 14:22:38 UTC hello@padlet.com hardmmeg000 https://padlet.com/hardmmeg000/37a8vv8w96zu/wish/255275994 2018-04-25 15:08:49 UTC https://padlet.com/hardmmeg000/37a8vv8w96zu/wish/255275994 hardmmeg000 https://padlet.com/hardmmeg000/37a8vv8w96zu/wish/257684877 Anders,M. "Backpack basics." Boys life. 

Mark Anders describes how we need to have the perfect backpack and it needs to fit you. 

You need a certain backpack for certain things and it needs to be able to fit you good.

Because it tells me that I need to have a backpack that fits me so I don't hurt my shoulders from a too big backpack.

]]> 2018-05-03 14:46:28 UTC https://padlet.com/hardmmeg000/37a8vv8w96zu/wish/257684877 hardmmeg000 https://padlet.com/hardmmeg000/37a8vv8w96zu/wish/258564539 Has to be able to have an easy way to access the packages 

The pack-a-pack is made for having an easy way to access and get to packages easily and quickly. We made the packs like a cube so the packages can fit into the backpack but also its big enough so the big packages haves some room and it's not going to get stuck.this backpack is the best backpack for a bike messenger. It has all the thinges you need. It's orange so cars can see you at night. It has a water bottle and tube for the biker to use. It also has a cold and hot pocket for the food. And it has wifi and a phone holder with a charger inside and gps so you don't get lost. This is the backpack you want.]]> 2018-05-07 15:04:00 UTC https://padlet.com/hardmmeg000/37a8vv8w96zu/wish/258564539 mstrock https://padlet.com/hardmmeg000/37a8vv8w96zu/wish/262361982 Revise your paragraph in the following ways:

If you haven't yet, you need to redesign the backpack, so it's not a cube. 

Word choice selection needs improvement (wider variety of general vocab)
 
More transitions, overall flow, and clarity ]]> 2018-05-21 13:52:16 UTC https://padlet.com/hardmmeg000/37a8vv8w96zu/wish/262361982