https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk Made with a curious mind en-us 2018-11-07 16:14:17 UTC 2025-11-23 19:07:06 UTC hello@padlet.com roczac8942 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302701195 2018-11-09 18:15:23 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302701195 davash1258 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302702725 2018-11-09 18:18:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302702725 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302705031 2018-11-09 18:23:32 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302705031 piljos5439 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302705049 make sure to state the argument in the thesis slide]]> 2018-11-09 18:23:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302705049 engale1256 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302705580 Use a highlight for the text on certain slides, only use where you can't really read the text]]> 2018-11-09 18:24:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302705580 flaaus6031 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302705594 contrast background pictures and text ]]> 2018-11-09 18:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302705594 redben4850 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302706604 2018-11-09 18:26:48 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302706604 roczac8942 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302706889 2018-11-09 18:27:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302706889 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302706933 Use bullet points to list your ideas, then explain to the audience by talking to them. ]]> 2018-11-09 18:27:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302706933 davash1258 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302707185

]]> 2018-11-09 18:28:13 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302707185 roczac8942 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302707996 2018-11-09 18:29:58 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302707996 engale1256 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302708419 None.

]]> 2018-11-09 18:30:58 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302708419 engale1256 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302709677 Amazing color, very knowledgeable. Could add a few words to the slides. ]]> 2018-11-09 18:33:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302709677 roczac8942 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302709695 2018-11-09 18:33:35 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302709695 redben4850 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302710464 2018-11-09 18:35:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302710464 flaaus6031 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302711174 beamed]]> 2018-11-09 18:36:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302711174 snypar2365 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302711300 2018-11-09 18:36:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302711300 roczac8942 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302713360 2018-11-09 18:40:48 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302713360 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302716274 Put the sub point 2 pic on a slide by itself ]]> 2018-11-09 18:46:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302716274 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302716773 Works cited: Remember to put the MLA citation.]]> 2018-11-09 18:47:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302716773 roczac8942 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302719606 2018-11-09 18:52:32 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302719606 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302720369 1. Hook: okay, but could be more interesting 
2. Choose a different way to say "pull the plug." Maybe add a pic of your aunt.
3. Add bullet points for ideas so you can talk to the judges instead of reading from the slides.
4. You have great info! :)
5. Add pics
6. Job shadow! Yayyyy!!! Very interesting! ]]> 2018-11-09 18:54:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/302720369 benkes0821 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/303943525 2018-11-13 18:32:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/303943525 engale1256 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/303945240 You should talk about how google and other forms of media all look through your search history and can show you what you would most be intersested in.]]> 2018-11-13 18:35:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/303945240 benkes0821 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/303949784 Drew had good good slides and a good presentation the only thing I would change is the contrast on his slide. 

]]> 2018-11-13 18:40:29 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/303949784 benkes0821 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/303956765 2018-11-13 18:49:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/303956765 benkes0821 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/304447058 2018-11-14 17:58:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/304447058 engale1256 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/304448286 Great pictures, give less bullet points on each slide. Sum up your point with only a few point, and your video is a little bit too long]]> 2018-11-14 18:00:31 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/304448286 engale1256 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/304457661 Your power point needs some more color to it. Fill up each slide just a little bit more. ]]> 2018-11-14 18:16:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/304457661 engale1256 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/304465743 Pictures might not be appropriate for the first 2 slides. Add more pictures, can't fully understand presentation with information given. Explain thesis better than you did.]]> 2018-11-14 18:29:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/304465743 engale1256 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/304470629 2018-11-14 18:36:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/304470629 engale1256 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/304472755 NICE HANDSHAKE! Strong hook to start off your presentation. Use more pictures for each slide. Still needs more information on the sub points for me to get a full understanding of the topic.]]> 2018-11-14 18:39:41 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/304472755 engale1256 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/304482060 Shorten the hook and try to make it draw the judges attention in. Looks good so far and would like to see the presentation when there is more information to be given.]]> 2018-11-14 18:53:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/304482060 balwil1054 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311048595 2018-12-04 18:07:44 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311048595 piljos5439 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311049361 Make sure to make the text a little bigger so the judges and you don't have to squint to look at what your slides are saying.

]]> 2018-12-04 18:08:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311049361 piljos5439 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311062053 The hook sounds more like a preference question than a question with a specific answer, so rephrase your hook question to something like "Which is better to give to a kid, an iPad or Building blocks?" ]]> 2018-12-04 18:30:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311062053 rosrob3358 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311066676 Has good Sub-points]]> 2018-12-04 18:37:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311066676 netric8452 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311074759 Try to keep the words and content on the slide to a minimum and focus on speaking/interacting with the audience.
Here are some good ways to work on that:
1. Create speaker notes (in the box below the slide you're editing) and glance at that as you speak.

2. Try and memorize the key parts on your slides by reading over them. It'll be mostly internalized by the time you're ready to present and you won't have to rely on reading off the board as much.

Otherwise, everything else looks great and your topic is really interesting! Good luck on your final presentation.]]> 2018-12-04 18:49:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311074759 netric8452 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311498779 Excellent hook and balance of info, graphics, and audience interaction.
Could use some work in fitting text evenly on each slide. Otherwise everything looks great, good luck on your final presentation.]]> 2018-12-05 17:54:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311498779 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311508143 interesting

]]> 2018-12-05 18:09:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311508143 diland0652 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311520298 Try and practice to speak with your own words on some slides. ]]> 2018-12-05 18:29:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311520298 engale1256 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311529497 - Great Hook, very intense
- Finish TOC
- Add more pictures
- Well knowledged in your topic ]]> 2018-12-05 18:45:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311529497 netric8452 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311531113 Everything looks pretty good (especially the hook), just work on improving the verbal aspect of your presentation. ]]> 2018-12-05 18:48:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311531113 seecha8122 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311916508 Try to make more eye contact.

]]> 2018-12-06 17:07:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311916508 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311916875 this was good bro]]> 2018-12-06 17:08:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311916875 balwil1054 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311918604 2018-12-06 17:11:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311918604 seecha8122 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311925652 Great photos. ]]> 2018-12-06 17:22:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311925652 netric8452 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311944839 Greatly improved from your first practice presentation. You could work on eye contact with the audience and relying less on reading directly from the board. Your information was great though, and you've supported your argument pretty well. Good luck on your final presentation!]]> 2018-12-06 17:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311944839 redben4850 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311946964 Great pics, good and rela]]> 2018-12-06 17:59:31 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311946964 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311947068 can see the words ]]> 2018-12-06 17:59:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311947068 netric8452 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311954660 Info is decent but the overall presentation could be shortened to fit into time requirements. (Also I would not recommend announcing that you don't have an interview.)]]> 2018-12-06 18:13:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311954660 balwil1054 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311956035 *gives feedback
"moultrie shut yo dumbass up"

]]> 2018-12-06 18:15:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311956035 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311956544 your words to small

]]> 2018-12-06 18:16:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311956544 roczac8942 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311966816 The pros of videogames

]]> 2018-12-06 18:32:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311966816 flaaus6031 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311969868 Well spoken very clear points ]]> 2018-12-06 18:38:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/311969868 marand6253 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/312319763 2018-12-07 17:06:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/312319763 flaaus6031 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/312325290 Be specific in the opening question ]]> 2018-12-07 17:18:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/312325290 marand6253 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/312350096 2018-12-07 18:09:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/312350096 piljos5439 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/312353395 Great info being showed through graphics. Great job at remembering what to say for each slides so you don't have to look back at slides as often.]]> 2018-12-07 18:17:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/312353395 piljos5439 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/312362027 Great information and use of flashcards to limit turn back to look at you slides.

]]> 2018-12-07 18:35:22 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/312362027 netric8452 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/312362822 I like the aesthetic of your slides, fits very well with your presentation. ]]> 2018-12-07 18:36:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/312362822 piljos5439 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/312370876 Good information on slides and good job at keeping eye contact with crowd.

]]> 2018-12-07 18:52:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/312370876 flaaus6031 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/313073085 Remove counter argument slide if you are going to follow your sub points with refutes. It becomes very repetitive. Good info just condense it and focus your narrative on each slide. Use bullet points make it easy.]]> 2018-12-10 17:59:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/313073085 roczac8942 https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/313086327 2018-12-10 18:20:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ciara_parker/357woj4afkgk/wish/313086327