Revising the First Draft by Dr. Marnie Sullivan https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see Sharing the pain and the glory en-us 2017-09-25 14:22:55 UTC 2017-09-25 19:39:56 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Hotsun.png Emily Snyder https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001215 My draft isn't as developed as I would like. The main idea/thesis of my paper is how society's perspective of the news has changed over the generations. I haven't used many sources yet, I am mainly focusing on my argument then I will back it up with evidence. I think I'm average compared to my peers when it comes to my first draft, so if I were to give myself a letter grade, it would be a C.]]> 2017-09-25 19:11:59 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001215 Q Ismail https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001251 I am about half way done. I have 2 pages and a works cited with 3 sources.

Thesis: The toll of negative news on all social platforms causes people to in turn be negative over time.]]> 2017-09-25 19:12:04 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001251 maggie russell https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001276 I have 2 pages, but no clear sources. I am a little confused on that part. With more sources or examples, I will be able to develop my paper to where I would like it to be. My topic is the importance/advantages of news in social media. What I have written feels well written, but as an overall paper, it needs some work. 

]]> 2017-09-25 19:12:09 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001276 Karoline Kienholz First Draft https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001319 My draft consists of 2 pages with 4 news stations as my sources. The topic/thesis of my paper is the relevance of news media. I feel as if I am putting useless information in my essay because I am running out of things to say. ]]> 2017-09-25 19:12:15 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001319 First Draft Xianli https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001371 In my draft, I have 4 pages with 5 sources.
My thesis is about the news in our daily life in both positive sides and negative sides.
It did not finish as the way as I was looking for. Probably my grades about this draft is B+]]> 2017-09-25 19:12:22 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001371 First Draft (Sam Spencer) https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001418 I have one page.
I have zero sources.
Thesis statement: News Media has a negative influence on individuals.
I have no idea what I'm doing.]]> 2017-09-25 19:12:28 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001418 Emily Levine https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001472 As of right now I only have a paragraph and no sources. This essay is very hard to understand where we are to get our information from and why the television news and the threads are useful and how to source them. My evaluation would be that I am behind and that I don't have the understanding or how to make a thesis statement on this topic. ]]> 2017-09-25 19:12:34 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001472 Abbey Shoaff https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001570 2 pages
no sources but I know what examples I need.
I have an in depth outline with an intro and conclusion
Thesis:  
Today’s society has altered media networks to focus on getting more viewers and better ratings which cause them to focus on negative topics, biased conversations, and creating a rapport with their audience. 



]]> 2017-09-25 19:12:50 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001570 Kiley Davis https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001610 I have one page with a clear introduction but still a developing thesis. No sources yet. I don't know what I exactly want my paragraphs to be about so I feel somewhat lost with what direction to take my paper in. ]]> 2017-09-25 19:12:55 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001610 olive https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001657 I have 2 1/2 pages consisting of a strong outline with sources and a thesis. 
Not sure if I should be writing about my own opinion or others]]> 2017-09-25 19:13:01 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001657 Savannah Lawrence https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001781 Currently, I have 3 pages. I don't feel the work I have with me in class is of the best quality. I'm suffering from writer's block. I definitely need to find more references to cite for my paper. ]]> 2017-09-25 19:13:16 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001781 Tashi C. https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001797 I have 2 pages and 2 sources. I have 2 examples but I'm not so sure about it.]]> 2017-09-25 19:13:18 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191001797 Shaina moyer https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191002055 Haven't started but I have somewhat a thesis statement. I have one source. Topic: Police authority]]> 2017-09-25 19:13:50 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191002055 over use of political correctness in modern society https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191002103 our generation
college students


]]> 2017-09-25 19:13:57 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191002103 Brad https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191002111 I have 3 and a half pages. Currently I have 3 sources. I am currently a little lost with the conclusion, but I am working on my body paragraphs at the moment. My thesis is about how different news channels are covering President Trump specifically.]]> 2017-09-25 19:13:58 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191002111 https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191007824 The Media Network
Viewers
Society
Police
Elderly 

]]> 2017-09-25 19:27:45 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191007824 https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191007939 our generation]]> 2017-09-25 19:28:01 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191007939 Negativity in the news https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191007943 Teens
Those a part of the tragedies
Broadcasters who have to constantly research negativity


]]> 2017-09-25 19:28:02 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191007943 The Varied Views of Donald Trump From Multiple News Networks and How, In a Way, They Are Impartial: https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008000  ~ Predominantly Democratic news networks viewers versus the views of more republican viewer based news networks ~

As a republican, I believe Donald Trump has upheld the credibility of America, and has represented our morality generously as our president. I, unlike most American citizens, believe that Trump has made positive contributive decisions in regards to America's future.

]]> 2017-09-25 19:28:12 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008000 https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008063 students
low income citizens

]]> 2017-09-25 19:28:20 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008063 https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008072 the middle class and the working class]]> 2017-09-25 19:28:21 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008072 https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008089 unregistered voters]]> 2017-09-25 19:28:24 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008089 News media has a negative influence on individuals https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008112 Everyone and anyone
Students
Parents
Elderly people
Working class ]]> 2017-09-25 19:28:27 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008112 Negative News https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008122 People heavy involved with phones and TV]]> 2017-09-25 19:28:28 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008122 Police thinking they have a higher authority https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008175 2017-09-25 19:28:34 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008175 https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008222 people getting misguided answers]]> 2017-09-25 19:28:42 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008222 https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008255 people that get their information from the corporate news stations. Younger generation.


]]> 2017-09-25 19:28:46 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008255 the advantages of news in social media https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008281 people not interested in the news
young people on social media]]> 2017-09-25 19:28:50 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008281 Social Media affecting people's perspective on the news https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008332 2017-09-25 19:28:57 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008332 The purpose and influence of American news negative and positve https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008545 2017-09-25 19:29:23 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008545 https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008598 people who have not been exposed to the news]]> 2017-09-25 19:29:32 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008598 https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008697 the elderly ]]> 2017-09-25 19:29:47 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008697 https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008804 immigrants ]]> 2017-09-25 19:30:07 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008804 https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008882 government officials]]> 2017-09-25 19:30:18 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008882 https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008961 teenagers]]> 2017-09-25 19:30:29 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191008961 https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191009133 2017-09-25 19:30:58 UTC https://padlet.com/msullivan26/34g2yyl48see/wish/191009133