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      <pubDate>2022-02-25 04:51:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Essay Outline - Yifan.Huang</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/32f0rlur9ynef2ea/wish/2065910998</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Thesis statement: This essay will discuss two reasons for why someone think it is better to break up with boyfriend/girlfriend in person. namely they will have more direct communication and more rational choices. It will also explain the reason why the other person who more likely to break up online is convenient.<br><br></div><div>&nbsp;<br><br></div><div>Body paragraph 1<br><br></div><div>Topic sentence: Breaking up in person allows both parties to communicate more directly<br><br></div><div>Supporting:<br><br></div><div><br></div><div>l&nbsp; Breaking up in person is the most dignified way to end a relationship, showing respect for the other person and minimizing the damage to the relationship</div><div>l&nbsp; This will also help the other person to start a new relationship sooner, and the relationship will be eased by communication<br><br></div><div>&nbsp;<br><br></div><div>Body paragraph 2<br><br></div><div>Topic sentence : Breaking up in person can help both parties make more sensible choices.<br><br></div><div>Supporting:<br><br></div><div>l&nbsp; According to psychology, when two people talk face to face, they can better understand each other's situation and feelings, and think more rationally<br><br></div><div>Body paragraph 3<br><br></div><div>Topic sentence: Breaking up on the Internet is not limited by time and place, more convenient<br><br></div><div>Supporting:<br><br></div><div>l&nbsp; In the current serious epidemic, travel has become very inconvenient, if it is a long-distance relationship, breaking up on the Internet will better protect the safety of both parties<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-02-25 06:41:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Essay outline-Shen huawen</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/32f0rlur9ynef2ea/wish/2065913859</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Thesis statement: this essay will emphasize on two points why breaking up with a mate should be in person, namely the grasp of others feeling and area to have further discussion, and one opposite point, namely avoiding conflicts.<br>Body paragraph1<br>topic sentence: Breaking up with a companion in person provides a chance to share each others emotions.&nbsp;<br>detail: Many young couples nowadays often have some small contradictions, they may have a sudden impulse to break up with each other instead of really want to do that. When they talk in person, they may feel they may both feel bad to break up.<br>2<br>t s:Breaking up with a companion in person also gives a space for discussion.&nbsp;<br>details： Texting messages in the phone is not suitable to break up, due to breaking up is a huge and complex thing. Both of them should calm down and talk about it, and make decisions after that.&nbsp;<br>3<br>t s: Conflicts are avoided if breaking up is carried out online.<br>detail: when it is time to break up. The two people must have some conflicts. Talking to each other in person will make the relationship worse.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-02-25 06:44:23 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Essay Outline - Shaobo.Yu</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/32f0rlur9ynef2ea/wish/2065915104</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Thesis statement: This essay will focus on two viewpoints: Should people break up with a boyfriend/girlfriend online or in person?&nbsp;</div><div>Both have advantages and disadvantages.</div><div>Body paragraph 1</div><div>Topic: Breaking up with a boyfriend/girlfriend online is better than another.</div><div>Supporting</div><div>Breaking up online doesn’t make people feel worse because two people don/t need to meet and it can make people more rational.</div><div>……</div><div>Body paragraph 2</div><div>Topic: Breaking up in person is better than another.</div><div>Supporting: Breaking up in person can let two people understand both sides( the reason to break up)</div><div>……</div><div>Body paragraph3</div><div>I think break up online is better.</div><div>Supporting: from personal experience……</div><div>Conclusion</div><div>The two ways both have advantages, but I prefer the first way……</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-02-25 06:45:40 UTC</pubDate>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/32f0rlur9ynef2ea/wish/2065916635</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><br>Essay outline<br>Thesis satement:two reason it's better to break up offline than online.<br>Body paragraph1:Offline breakups are a better indicator of how much the couple values.<br><br>supporting detail1:Offline breakups take more time to meet in person than online ones, so they can better narrate their reasons and express their emotions.<br><br>supporting detail2:Online break up both sides can only communicate through text, the way is single, for some can recover the situation is unfavorable.<br><br>Body paragraph2:Offline breakups can make the whole thing more complete.<br><br>supporting detail1:Offline breakups can help explain the reasons, make decisions and move on faster.<br><br>supporting detail2:A mutually satisfactory breakup result can lead to a better and more enjoyable life for both parties, with less psychological burden on both parties.<br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-02-25 06:47:16 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Essay Outline - Yuxin Fan</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/32f0rlur9ynef2ea/wish/2065918154</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Thesis statement: This essay will discuss two reasons for why some people think it is better to break up with a boyfriend/girlfriend online.<br>Body paragraph 1:<br>Topic sentence: Some people think break up online could make up his/her mind.<br>Supporting:&nbsp;<br>[1]Break up online we could avoid change our mind because look his/her face language or voice.<br>[2]We can think deeply our words when we break up online.<br>Body paragraph 2:&nbsp;<br>Topic sentence: Some people think break up online will more complete.<br>Supporting:&nbsp;<br>[1]Break up online maybe heartless in other eyes, so that decrease possible of compound.<br>[2]Break up online could break all the connection.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-02-25 06:48:59 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Essay outline -Yongwei  Wang</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/32f0rlur9ynef2ea/wish/2065919421</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Thesis statement</strong>: this essay will discuss two reasons for why a break up is good for in person and two reasons for why it is good for online.&nbsp;</div><div>Body paragraph 1&nbsp;</div><div>Topic sentence: breaking up in person can lead to better communication.&nbsp;</div><div>supporting details &nbsp;</div><div>· When people communicate face to face, they can better understand the reasons for breaking up and communicate with each other better&nbsp;</div><div>Body paragraph 2 &nbsp;</div><div>Topic sentence: Breaking up in person can also show that you value the relationship&nbsp;</div><div>supporting details&nbsp;</div><div>· By meeting, they can show how much they value the relationship and the other person, which can prevent them from feeling regret later on.&nbsp;</div><div>Body paragraph 3&nbsp;</div><div>Topic sentence: Breaking up online can avoid the embarrassment of breaking up in person&nbsp;</div><div>supporting details &nbsp;</div><div>· Some couples feel awkward after breaking up and don't know how to do it, but breaking up online can just avoid the awkward situation.&nbsp;</div><div>Body paragraph 4&nbsp;</div><div>Topic sentence: Breaking up online can also strengthen your mind&nbsp;</div><div>supporting sentence &nbsp;</div><div>·They see the other person remembering a story about a couple that causes them to change their mind.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-02-25 06:50:13 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Essay Outline-Shuhan.Chen</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/32f0rlur9ynef2ea/wish/2065945787</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Thesis statement: This essay will discuss two reasons why&nbsp; breaking up face to face is advocated. When people are facing the visual world, their ways of thinking will be more one-side and extreme, which always leads people lose temper and make some irrational decisions. While in reality, people used to control their temper better, which greatly reduces the possibility of conflict and breaking up. What's more,&nbsp; chatting online makes words seem loveless, and the real root cause is couple can't feel love from each other.<br><br>Body paragraph 1:<br>Topic sentence: People may be more rational in reality which helps they make decision calmly and correctly.<br>Supporting：<br>·Uncontrolled emotion will lead to more intense arguement. It's entirely possible that a very little thing originally can become a pretty serious problem because of bad temper.<br>·People seem to be more selfish when chatting online, what they may pay more attention to is their own feeling rather than both of them. This way of think may lead people astray, that is people might exaggerate the hurt his/her boyfriend/girlfriend has made and neglect what bad words he/she had spoken to the other people unintentionally.<br><br>Body paragraph 2:<br>Topic sentence: Typing can't express one's emotion compeletely, chatting online is much loveless than talking face-to-face.<br>·Maybe some people aren't good at express himself online, in this condition, It's likely lead to a misunderstanding.<br>·Sometimes words are loveless, It's hard for couple to share their love. Face-to-face can remind couple of their sweet time in the past and feel love between each other better. Also it's a good way to get off on the wrong foot.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-02-25 07:14:26 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Essay Outline - Yishan.Zhang</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/32f0rlur9ynef2ea/wish/2066063976</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Thesis statement: This essay will discuss two reasons for why is better to break with a boyfriend/girlfriend online, including using text message, video chat, etc, which can avoid embarrassment and have enough time to organization of words; it will also explain the advantages of breaking with a boyfriend/girlfriend in person, which make the breaking up more carefully and avoid impulsion.</div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>Body paragraph 1:</div><div>Topic sentence: Breaking with a boyfriend/girlfriend online is better to avoid embarrassment.</div><div>Supporting&nbsp;</div><div>1.There is no need worrying about our expression on the face. (e.g. If we break up online, we don’t worry about how we look at each other.)</div><div>2.We can think of less about our body language if we just break up online. (e.g. If we just talk by message we can think less about our behavior losing control.)</div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>Body paragraph 2：</div><div>Topic sentence: Breaking with a boyfriend/girlfriend online is better to organization of our words.&nbsp;</div><div>Supporting</div><div>1.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; We don’t have to respond right away when we break up online. (e.g. When we talk online we can’t respond right away all the time, so we have enough time to organize our words.)</div><div>2.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; We can just send a message after editing when we break up, so we have enough time to do it.</div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>Body paragraph 3：</div><div>Topic sentence: When we break up in person we can more carefully to avoid impulsion.</div><div>Supporting</div><div>1.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; If we break up in person we will think it more carefully. （e.g. Breaking up in person make us think the thing more carefully, including the reason and result. ）</div><div>2.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Breaking up in person avoid our impulsion. (e.g. Breaking up in person make us must think of the whole thing.)</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-02-25 09:00:25 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Essay Outline - Jiang.Zhan</title>
         <author>jiangzhan21</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/32f0rlur9ynef2ea/wish/2067307297</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Thesis statement: Some people insist that breaking up with a boyfriend/girlfriend online is better, but others think it is better to do it in person. This paper will discuss why it is better doing the breaking in person.</div><div>Body paragraph 1:&nbsp;</div><div>Topic sentence: It is better to break up with a boyfriend/girlfriend in person, because you can end the relationship rightfully</div><div>Supporting: You can face up to this relationship.</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;You may not be sad greatly because you do not do the wrong thing in your life.</div><div>Body paragraph 2:</div><div>You can talk about the reasons for breaking more clearly</div><div>Supporting: The other side and you can make yourselves realize your personality.</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;You can know why not to be with each other more clearly, such as style and personality.</div><div>Body paragraph 3:</div><div>Making the other side feel you are a sincere person, not to toy with his/her emotion</div><div>Supporting: You can talk face to face.</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;You can make the other side think you are a good person though you are not together at all.</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;If you break up with the other side online, he/she may feel you do not attach great importance to the relationship.</div><div>Conclusion: It is better to break up with a boyfriend/girlfriend in person than do it online, since it is not only beneficial to the other side, but to yourself.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-02-26 05:58:18 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Essay outline-Houyu.Zhou</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/32f0rlur9ynef2ea/wish/2068996359</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Thesis statement: This essay will discuss from several angles that online breakups which including using WeChat or having a call are more reasonable and better than breaking with a boyfriend/girl friend face-to-face&nbsp;<br>&nbsp;<br>Body paragraph 1:<br>Topic sentence:An online breakup can avoid a lot of embarrassment and politeness, and both parties can express their views more clearly.<br>Supporting:<br>1.Offline breakups, the two parties may not be able to open their mouths due to past feelings, resulting in confusion in the logic of speaking.If both parties break up online, they will be more sane and calm。<br>2.Online breakups are more conducive to the organizational language of both parties, express clear logic, and are more acceptable to each other.<br>Body paragraph 2：<br>Topic sentence: Breaking with a boyfriend/girlfriend online can better avoid a lot of energy and money consumption.<br>Supporting<br>1.Offline breakup, will definitely need to meet for dinner or try to make the other party change their minds is very draining of energy and financial resources of both parties.Body paragraph.<br>2.Online breakups will also make both parties look at the issue of breakup more rationally. Energy can also be more focused on thinking about whether should break up or not.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-02-28 07:21:20 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Essay outline-Zhengyu Duan</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/32f0rlur9ynef2ea/wish/2070728924</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Thesis statement: this essay will discuss two reasons for why it is better to break up with a boyfriend/girlfriend in person . Because face to face break up can better express ours emotions show ours attitude , Breaking up in person is a way of valuing the relationship&nbsp; I will also explain the disadvantage of breaking up online, which break up online can not express our emotion and it is not the behavor of respecting others .</div><div>Body pragraph1:</div><div>Topic sentence: Break up in person can better express ours emotions</div><div>Supporting:</div><div>1. Face to face breakup can better express emotions than online breakup. As we all know, we can't let the other party know our tone or expression when chatting online. Only the seemingly cold language can not express our true feelings without knowing the other party's attitude</div><div>2. When we break up face to face, we can see each other, learn what they are thinking by words and emotions, and make the breakup more smooth and effective.</div><div>Body pragraph2:</div><div>Topic sentence: Breaking up in person is a way of honoring the relationship</div><div>Supporting:</div><div>1. Breaking up on the Internet will show that you don't pay enough attention to the relationship. It is not a good choice to end a relationship in a few words. Besides, people always say some harsh words on the Internet, which will damage the relationship between two people</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-03-01 03:46:18 UTC</pubDate>
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