7th Grade Writing by Carly Chichester https://padlet.com/27cchichester/329mrib3136xgp5c Leave me some feedback on my writing pieces! en-us 2022-02-01 13:25:19 UTC 2022-03-10 17:26:56 UTC hello@padlet.com Sloan G. https://padlet.com/27cchichester/329mrib3136xgp5c/wish/2023554531 Your writing piece was just remarkable. Star #1: your data and your warrants were very strong and well connect to your thesis. It made your piece more intriguing and professional. Star #2: you also had strong word choice. Word choice really hooks the readers in, so it was effective in your piece. Wish: I dont have a wish, perfect piece.]]> 2022-02-01 15:18:55 UTC https://padlet.com/27cchichester/329mrib3136xgp5c/wish/2023554531 Sloan G - Buy my Product 27sgulas https://padlet.com/27cchichester/329mrib3136xgp5c/wish/2088548343 Star: I really liked how the slide show was set up. It was very colorful and flashy but organized and minimal. I think that really helped capture the audiences attention.
Star: I liked the was you compared yourself to another lap desk. It’s important to have enough space for all the things you need when working .
Wish: I don’t jave a wish for you.

(This was written on both yours and Mias, Loved your slideshow and product overall great job)]]> 2022-03-10 15:15:41 UTC https://padlet.com/27cchichester/329mrib3136xgp5c/wish/2088548343 Zofia: Buy My Product 27zcintron https://padlet.com/27cchichester/329mrib3136xgp5c/wish/2088814762 To start, I really liked your presentation and idea! One star definitely had to be the decorations you had on your slides. I think the sprinkles really made your slides visually interesting. A second star I would say is your prototype. I thought it was very easy to understand with the labeling and was informative towards your product. However, one wish I had was that I wish you included a little bit more information on how your product works and functions. This way I, as the viewer, could comprehend a little bit more of how your lap desk functions. Overall, I really enjoyed your presentation and would definitely buy this lap desk.]]> 2022-03-10 17:26:56 UTC https://padlet.com/27cchichester/329mrib3136xgp5c/wish/2088814762