Writers use transitions to include evidence by Lauren Reade-Dias https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c Framing How You Introduce Text Evidence and Link that Evidence Back to Your Idea en-us 2021-04-07 01:56:37 UTC 2025-10-18 17:08:31 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4dd.png “Did you see the woman playing the piano? I didn’t know girls could have such a job.” ldias5 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689270 2021-04-07 01:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689270 Type your response here: ldias5 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689271 Sentence 1 : Theme
Sentence 2: Transition plus the detail
Sentence 3; Transition that connects your idea.]]> 2021-04-07 01:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689271 Transition Phrases ldias5 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689272 2021-04-07 01:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689272 Learning Objective: ldias5 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689278 Writers use transitions when including evidence in their response. To do this, they…
  • Introduce their evidence
  • Link their evidence back to their idea
]]> 2021-04-07 01:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689278 Directions: ldias5 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689279 With your partner…
  1. Read the detail we will add to our class extended response
  2. Set up the evidence
    - Introduce the evidence (state the passage it came from)
    - Link the evidence back to the your idea
  3. Tell your group members which transition words you are going to be using.
  4. Using transition words/phrases, draft your sentences!

Keep in mind: “HOW does this bit about Nellie beating her 80 day goal fit with the theme?”

]]> 2021-04-07 01:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689279 "Wheels of Change" ldias5 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689280 “Did you see the woman playing the piano? I didn’t know girls could have such a job.”]]> 2021-04-07 01:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689280 “Did you see the woman playing the piano? I didn’t know girls could have such a job.” ldias5 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689283 2021-04-07 01:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689283 Type your response here: ldias5 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689284 2021-04-07 01:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689284 “Did you see the woman playing the piano? I didn’t know girls could have such a job.” ldias5 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689288 2021-04-07 01:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689288 Type your response here: ldias5 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689289 2021-04-07 01:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689289 “Did you see the woman playing the piano? I didn’t know girls could have such a job.” ldias5 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689290 2021-04-07 01:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689290 Type your response here: ldias5 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689291 2021-04-07 01:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389689291 Mrs. Dias' Sample ldias5 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389718053 Click the image below to see 
Mrs. Dias' sample. ]]> 2021-04-07 02:09:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1389718053 Sofia: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391938184 In "Excerpt From Wheels Of Change" One theme in the story is that people underestimate woman. One part that shows this is when Emily is very surprised to see a woman playing the piano in a movie. This is shown in the piece of text that is "Did you see the woman playing the piano? I didn't know girls could have such a job." This clearly shows people underestimated girls and women at the time.]]> 2021-04-07 15:21:05 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391938184 Isaac: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391949407 In Wheels of Change, the time effects the story. For example, one part that shows this is,“Did you see the woman playing the piano? I didn’t know girls could have such a job.” This is important because the story takes place in 1908, when it was unusual for women to have important jobs like being a musician.]]> 2021-04-07 15:23:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391949407 Carlota https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391951122 in 'wheels of change' One detail is "Did you see the woman playing the piano? I didn't know women could have such a job" fits with the theme because the theme is that women can do anything because in this story it shows that women didn't get treated fair but then there was one woman who decided to be the piano player and Emily was surprised. that proves that this detail matches with the theme.]]> 2021-04-07 15:23:29 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391951122 Grace: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391951875   “Did you see the woman playing the piano?” “I never knew girls could have such a job!”Fits into the theme woman can do anything is because back then, woman could not really have jobs but, the piano player was a woman and that was not very common back then.Men would usually have the job of playing the piano, and anything else girls weren’t supposed to do!But the piano player was a girl, and she broke the mold.]]> 2021-04-07 15:23:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391951875 Type your response here: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391957956 Eliot: In "Wheels of Change", one theme is that Woman can do anything. One example is "Did you see the woman playing the piano? I didn't know the girls could have such a job." In this scene Emily realizes that woman CAN have those jobs and they CAN do anything and they CAN accomplish goals or do fun things JUST like men.]]> 2021-04-07 15:24:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391957956 Type your response here: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391958240 Henry: In "wheels of change." One theme is that women can do anything. One example is "Did you see the woman playing the piano? I didn't know the girls could have such a job." This is important because Emily realizes that women can accomplish goals and that they can do anything.]]> 2021-04-07 15:24:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391958240 Type your response here: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391959465 Zak: In "wheels of change" one theme is woman should do anything they want. One example is  "Did you see the woman playing the piano? I didn’t know girls could have such a job.” This is important because, now Emily knows that a woman can do anything she wants.]]> 2021-04-07 15:25:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391959465 Noam: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391963926 in "Wheels Of Change", A theme is that you can do anything you put your mind to because in the time that wheels of change was taking place girls only worked in the house but emily was so suprised that she saw a woman playing the piano]]> 2021-04-07 15:26:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391963926 Emili: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391965189 In the story "Excerpt From Wheel Of Change" One theme that the story has is that women can do anything. One detail from the text that shows women can do anything and that Emily was surprised to see a woman playing the is that it says "Did you see the woman playing the piano? I didn't know girls could have such a job." This is important because this detail shows that women can do anything and Emily was surprised to see a woman playing the piano. ]]> 2021-04-07 15:26:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391965189 Yana: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391967042 In "Expert from Wheels of Change" one theme is that woman can do as well as men can. One part that shows this is when Emily was surprised to see a woman playing the piano like when the text states "Did you see the woman playing the piano?i didn't know girls could have such a job." this makes it clear that back then woman didn't really have jobs. ]]> 2021-04-07 15:26:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391967042 Annabelle https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391968499 In Excerpt from "Wheels of Change" the theme is that women can do anything.One detail from the text is "She made the action!" and "Do you think it would have been anything near as exciting to watch with no sound?" This proves that women can do anything because she was a big part of the film and that's really rare at that time setting and people wouldn't really think that a women could play such a important job.]]> 2021-04-07 15:26:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391968499 Asad: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391972955 The theme of wheels of change is that women can do anything because back then women weren't allowed to have jobs like the text says "Emily could not stop staring at what she saw. A women playing the piano".]]> 2021-04-07 15:27:45 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391972955 Levi: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391981882 In "Wheels of Change", A theme in the story is that you can do stuff that you believe in to because in "Wheels of Change" people sometimes underestimate women. One example is that Emily was surprised of who was the piano player, she expected a boy playing the piano.]]> 2021-04-07 15:29:32 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391981882 Logan: The theme of wheels of change is woman can do more stuff than they are thought to be able to do. https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391988663 2021-04-07 15:30:44 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1391988663 "Around the World" ldias5 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1393974168  “Nellie Bly beat the 80-day goal. She also invented a new style of journalism.” ]]> 2021-04-08 01:48:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1393974168 "Around the World" ldias5 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1393978943  “Nellie Bly beat the 80-day goal. She also invented a new style of journalism.” ]]> 2021-04-08 01:50:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1393978943 "Around the World" ldias5 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1393979774  “Nellie Bly beat the 80-day goal. She also invented a new style of journalism.” ]]> 2021-04-08 01:50:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1393979774 "Around the World" ldias5 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1393981331  “Nellie Bly beat the 80-day goal. She also invented a new style of journalism.” ]]> 2021-04-08 01:50:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1393981331 "Around the World" ldias5 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1393993177  “Nellie Bly beat the 80-day goal. She also invented a new style of journalism.” ]]> 2021-04-08 01:55:45 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1393993177 Sofia: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400365222 In "Around the World" the theme is that woman can do anything they set their mind to. One example of this from the text "Around the World" is "Nellie Bly beat the 80-day goal. She also invented a new style of journalism".  This makes it clear that there are no girls things and boys things there is only things and woman can do the same things.]]> 2021-04-09 15:24:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400365222 Grace: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400373364 The theme for Around the World is that Woman can do anything.One detail from the text is that:Nellie  Bly beat the 80-day goal.She also invented a new style of journalism.”This shows that the theme for Around the World is that woman can do anything.]]> 2021-04-09 15:26:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400373364 Carlota: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400374079 In 'Around the world' one detail is "Nellie Bly beat the 80-day goal. she also invented a new style of journalism" this fits with the theme because the theme is women can do anything. the theme fits with the detail because the theme is women can do anything and the detail proves that Nellie proved everyone who said she cant because shes a woman. ]]> 2021-04-09 15:26:46 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400374079 Noam: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400376149 in "around the world" the theme is you can do anything if you put your mind to it. in the begining  Nellie Bly started her 80 day goal. the text says "Nellie Bly beat the 80-day goal. She also invented a new style of journalism.” this is important because it shows that she beat the 80 day goal]]> 2021-04-09 15:27:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400376149 Type your response here https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400376892 Henry: In "Around the World" One theme shown in the text is women can do anything. Later in the text it says “Nellie Bly beat the 80-day goal. She also invented a new style of journalism.” This makes it clear that Women can accomplish goals very big.]]> 2021-04-09 15:27:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400376892 Isaac: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400380074 The time Around the World took place in effects the story. For example, the text states,"Nellie Bly beat the 80-day goal. She also invented a new style of journalism.” This is important because the 80 day goal was in about 1890, when it was hard to go around the world in 80 days, and the new style of journalism was of telling about what you see, now thats how almost everybody does it! So it would matter less if it happened in 2021!]]> 2021-04-09 15:28:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400380074 Type your response here: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400381464 Eliot: In "Around the world" one theme shown in the article is that woman can do anything they set there mind to do.Towards the end of the text the author talks about how Nellie Bly completes beat her 80-day goal, and that she created a new type of journalism. This shows that she set her mind to a goal (to do the trip in 80-days) and accomplished it.]]> 2021-04-09 15:28:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400381464 Yana: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400381718 In "Around the World" one theme is that woman can do as well as men can. One example of this is when Nellie Bly beat her goal for example the text states "Nellie Bly beat the 80-day goal. She also invented a new style of journalism.” In other words this proves that Nellie Bly wanted to do something that only men were supposed to do but she still completed it.]]> 2021-04-09 15:28:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400381718 Type your response here https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400382332 Zak: In "Around the world,"  one theme shown is that people can do anything they want if they put their mind to it. Towards the end of the text, they talk about how Nellie Bay finishes and beats her 80 day goal.]]> 2021-04-09 15:28:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400382332 Annabelle: alane68 https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400383577 One theme in "Around the World" is women can do anything men can do. One detail from the text to support this is "Nellie Bly beat the 80 day goal.She also invented a new style of journalism!" In other words, this proves women can do anything men can do.]]> 2021-04-09 15:28:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400383577 Emili https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400384417 In "Around the World" One theme is that women can do everything men can do. One detail that shows that women can do everything men can do is that it says “Nellie Bly beat the 80-day goal. She also invented a new style of journalism.”  In other words this shows that women can do everything men can do.]]> 2021-04-09 15:29:05 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400384417 Levi: https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400384983 In " Around the World" the theme is that you can do anything if you put your mind to it. In the beginning Nellie Bly wanted to start her 80 day goal around the world, but the workers think she could do it except the owner. The text says that Nellie Bly beat the 80 day goal. "Also she made a new way of doing journalism" this is important because it shows women can do anything with confident. ]]> 2021-04-09 15:29:13 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400384983 Asad https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400411418 Later on in the text Nelly Bly wanted to travel around the world but nobody thought a woman could. Later in the text everyone thought she was a man because women weren't allowed to have jobs as writers back then.]]> 2021-04-09 15:35:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400411418 logan https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400432394 nelly bly wanted to go around the world like in the book so she went around the world and she went to alot of places]]> 2021-04-09 15:39:58 UTC https://padlet.com/ldias5/30mpn5ki44vm238c/wish/1400432394