https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo Take the sentence "I'm scared" and use dialogue and/or sensory language to SHOW the emotion instead of just saying it. en-us 2022-04-29 13:21:32 UTC 2025-12-18 17:16:43 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f3ad.png 2709196 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164350353 That low growling sound as me and my friends walked through the woods had my bladder ready to explode.]]> 2022-04-29 14:00:56 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164350353 2745724 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164355425 The pit in my stomach threw itself upside down, as my eyes widened. My legs backed away from the sight, I held my hands against my chest. My lip started to shake and tears rise in the corner of my eyes. "Get away from me!"]]> 2022-04-29 14:03:57 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164355425 2709196 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164355946 Kriana and I tried to show our bravery as we waddled to the huge rollercoaster. I was positive that the huge slushy I chugged and the butterflies in my stomach were having a party.]]> 2022-04-29 14:04:16 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164355946 2745272 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164356176 I could feel my legs shaking ,as if I could run a mile and a thousand more but I couldn't move a muscle. My eyes were glued to them as they moved closer ,and closer each step they took felt heavy, as if there was a giant right next to me.]]> 2022-04-29 14:04:23 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164356176 2894431 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164356471 2022-04-29 14:04:34 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164356471 276495 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164358284 It is dark at 10 O'clock at night. I hear walking noises but everyone is asleep. I felt my body awaken and tighten up, mouth quivering, legs shivering. My head telling me "calm down, calm down." ]]> 2022-04-29 14:05:41 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164358284 2767471 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164359193 As I was walking past the dark abandoned house I felt a cool heavy wind go by. I felt myself trying but in a struggle to move. Realizing my struggle I stared blankly at the house hoping someone would wake me from this nightmare. I remember yelling "Help! Help me, I can't move please someone help!" But it was as if I was the last person alive, all alone. ]]> 2022-04-29 14:06:11 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164359193 2767921 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164362087 The storm rumbles as I shudder. I cuddle up with myself and try to calm down. The darkness overcomes me and I feel all alone. The pit in my stomach never leaves as I try to make myself fall asleep. I felt the huge strike of lightning that bolts me up again as I shake. My house lonely and quite as I want someone more and more. ]]> 2022-04-29 14:07:56 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164362087 2767501 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164362562 I was in the basement alone when my body was shaking, eyes looking around to see if someone would make a sound. I can feel my goosebumps all around my arms when it starts to get so cold. ]]> 2022-04-29 14:08:14 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164362562 2709196 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164363356 Kids all in the hiking group screamed as we saw a bundle of snakes heading towards us. I heard kids screaming counselor's names. "Holly!" "Mike!" "Nina help there's a snake!" Ben instructed the kids "Up the tree right now!"]]> 2022-04-29 14:08:44 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164363356 2749221 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164363562  I got lost trying to find my mom in the mall. My legs were shaking of fear.I was nervous when I was alone. I saw lots of people walking around me, and talking around me. I smelt the food at the food court. I called my mom's name. "MA" I said really loud. I got stares. I can feel my stomach being empty. I walked past Forever 21. "George" My sister said. "Huh." Then I found my sister and my mom. ]]> 2022-04-29 14:08:52 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164363562 2802229 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164364288 My heart was racing, I felt like I couldn't move. The air in the room started to thicken. My legs started to shake and different thoughts rushed through my head. It was lonely and cold. I felt like I was drowning. ]]> 2022-04-29 14:09:21 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164364288 2744582 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164364817 As I stand staring nervously, I can feel the fear building up in me as I sit in my seat. The room is getting more tense. My stomach is aching and my legs are shaking. The lower part of the room's air is getting cold. All eyes were on me as I stood and walked to the bright screen of the TV. My fingers were shaking and my words were ziggzaggy. The O's would look like C's and my P's would look like B's. ]]> 2022-04-29 14:09:42 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164364817 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164364874 the feeling i felt when i had to walked in the dim cold breezy basement to grab a wire for the disassembled tv that my uncle was building. as i was walking i could feel my stomach sink to the floor my breathing going heaver in each step i took. my body start to shiver due to the cold walls.]]> 2022-04-29 14:09:45 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164364874 2745704 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164365871 The chills crawled down my back, all I could hear was silence from my mom as her eyes got wider the more she went down my report card.]]> 2022-04-29 14:10:21 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164365871 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164366419 I was sitting on my couch watching a movie with my dad and mom. we were just watching quietly until my dad screamed so loud that I jumped out of my set with my body trembling that I could hear my own heart beat pumping. ]]> 2022-04-29 14:10:39 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164366419 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164366934 My fingers were shaking, my legs were quivering, sweat starts rushing down my face, I fight the tears trying to fall down on my cheeks. "What do we do?" Kaz says crying to me with his eyes so widened they look like they're gonna pop off his face, his face is as white as a ghost ]]> 2022-04-29 14:11:00 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164366934 2799561 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164367266 As I was walking along the torn broken bridge above the fast flowing water, my mind was telling me to turn back but as I was turning around a huge dragon appeared and I started to fill up tremendously with fear. I started walking slowly then I heard a "CRACK!" the bridge was starting to fall!. I started dashing to the end, but I was to late. I felt the air all around me...]]> 2022-04-29 14:11:11 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164367266 2709196 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164367911 I felt like I was about to enter a lion's den knocking on Callie's door asking for a ride to school. I heard her roar "WHAT IS IT!?" It felt like I was a mouse and Callie was about to eat me.]]> 2022-04-29 14:11:37 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164367911 2830582 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164368482 I was about to board the plane. I was shaking and sweating as if I was being chased. I didn't want to go on the airplane. I tried running away from the entrance of the plane but my mom grabbed me and said " it's okay don't be afraid", I said " I'm scared!" I wanted to be anywhere in the world but this airport. My mom brought me toward the  plane, I started trembling with fear. As I sat down, my heart was racing. When the plane took off, I grabbed tight to the seat. After all, I realized it wasn't too bad.


]]> 2022-04-29 14:11:58 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164368482 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164368502 As i was in my moms room getting something without asking i can feel my legs shake and my heart beating as i hear footsteps coming up the stairs.]]> 2022-04-29 14:11:59 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164368502 286663 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164369730 The sky was no longer beautiful, blue, and sunny. It was pitched black, and the sky was now growling. I was cradled up under my blanket and my legs were shaking. I thought that I would be eaten up by the growling sky.]]> 2022-04-29 14:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164369730 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164373408 I felt as if the walls were closing in and everything was getting dark; yet having a feeling of being centered. I couldn't help my body that trembled in fear with the cold sweat rolling down my back, that came with it.]]> 2022-04-29 14:14:28 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164373408 296089 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164374282 A hundred thoughts zoomed through my head as my body shook and my chest tightened. ]]> 2022-04-29 14:15:03 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/2ys49wmjzjlrisfo/wish/2164374282