Paraphrasing for PAE Writing Part 1 Group Work by

Pro-Marriage Quotes

kaylaetherton1 — 2025-10-07 18:48:27 UTC

1. Original: Viewing marriage as outdated ignores the changes that we have seen in marriage traditions in recent years.

kaylaetherton1 — 2025-10-07 18:49:42 UTC

Step 1: Paraphrase: The alterations made in marriages the last couple of years are being overlooked when marriage is viewed as old fashioned.

2. Original: The decision to get married should be viewed as an opportunity to discuss the future with one’s partner.

kaylaetherton1 — 2025-10-07 18:53:04 UTC

Step 1: Paraphrase: Partners should take advantage of the opportunity to get married to discuss the future

3. Original: Marriage is no longer a financial arrangement between two families. Instead, it is a sacred promise of love shared by two people.

kaylaetherton1 — 2025-10-07 18:55:14 UTC

Step 1: Paraphrase:

Two people share a sacred promise of love, even though marriage is believed to be a financial arrangement between two families.

4. Original: Marriage and weddings should be seen not as a legal ceremony but as a symbolic union of the couple’s families and traditions.

kaylaetherton1 — 2025-10-07 18:57:34 UTC

Step 1:

Marriage and weddings can connect the couple’s families and traditions.Therefore people shouldn’t see them as a legal ceremony

Anti-Marriage Quotes

kaylaetherton1 — 2025-10-08 05:37:25 UTC

5. Original: Many couples only get married because of practical reasons such as acceptance from their families and society.

kaylaetherton1 — 2025-10-08 05:38:21 UTC

Step 1: Paraphrase: People are getting married due to not being excluded from their families

6. Original: Women’s disadvantage in marriage can be seen in men asking the woman’s parents’ permission before the proposal and the woman taking the man’s name.

kaylaetherton1 — 2025-10-08 05:39:51 UTC

Step 1: Paraphrase: Because the men are giving their names to women and men get allowance from women's families before the engagement, we can see the drawbacks of marriage for females

7. Original: Marriage is based on sexist traditions that force women and men both to operate in specific roles.

kaylaetherton1 — 2025-10-08 05:46:33 UTC

Step 1: Paraphrase: marriage is dependent on old sexiest ideas that push men and women

to act in certain ways.

Instructions

kaylaetherton1 — 2025-10-08 05:50:55 UTC

8. If couples could live together and strengthen their relationships without societal judgment, marriage wouldn’t be necessary at all

kaylaetherton1 — 2025-10-08 05:55:40 UTC

Step 1: Paraphrase: marriage doesn't have to be essantial in all ways such as when partners live together and enhance their relationships with no judgement from society.

Example: Original: If the relationship is strong and built on a foundation of love and respect, is there really a need for a contract to be involved?

kaylaetherton1 — 2025-10-08 05:57:53 UTC

Paraphrase: When a partnership is strengthened by love and admiration, there is no need for a legal document.

Example: Original: Every part of a traditional marriage puts men in a place of power over women.

kaylaetherton1 — 2025-10-08 05:59:35 UTC

Paraphrase: Women are put at a disadvantage in all aspects of a traditional marriage.

Example: Original: The ceremony can be a beautiful expression and celebration of the couple’s love that is shared with everyone.

kaylaetherton1 — 2025-10-08 07:39:38 UTC

Paraphrase: Partners’ loving feelings towards each other can be shown during the wedding event.

Example: Original: When issues arise during a marriage, they can be solved more easily because of the conversations that are had before

kaylaetherton1 — 2025-10-08 07:47:16 UTC

Paraphrase: Married people can handle their problems better because they discussed serious issues before they got married.