Formal Proposal Letter by Adilah Ashburn https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24 Situational Writing Practice 1 en-us 2019-02-26 02:11:05 UTC 2026-02-26 08:35:55 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Beartoy.png Sea aquarium LJX Siewhui Kaelyn and Zekai https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335725538 2019-02-27 02:47:45 UTC https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335725538 Sea Aquarium; Group members: Evin, phoebe, Lee wen, Angeline nasrullahjenson445 https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335728105 Benefit 1: cultivate an interest in marine life and biology
              Can interest to take upper Sec science
Benefit 2: Discover rare species one might never encounter before 
              Boost general knowledge about the diverse range of marine life 
Benefit 3: Good bonding experience with friends
              which would create more memories; Can take more pictures and widen social circle
Fun factor: can see marine creatures come close to you and see them on top/below you ]]> 2019-02-27 03:02:03 UTC https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335728105 Sea Aquarium Group members : Shamina, Kelly, Jingying, Ruohan https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335728113 Benefit 1: Sea Aquarium offers a variety of species of marine life, more than 1000 different species. Also, they have 10 different zones in total which resemble some real ocean habitats for example, the Red Sea and the lakes of East Africa. From these 10 different habitats the class could get a closer look into the sea and learn more about the different species son they can apply it to their studies such as Geography. They will also develop a stronger sense of protecting the endangered species. 
Benefit 2: I found another way to get a closer experience with the animals. ]]> 2019-02-27 03:02:06 UTC https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335728113 Skyline and Luge Adventure Yu Shan Yi Qi Rens Jing Yan https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335728114 Benefit 1:Make you more courageous as it is quite high when we take the skyline so this will be a good opportunity for those who are scared of height to overcome their fear.
Benefit 2:Students can bond with one another as they compete in the friendly match and they can cheer for one another.One might even know their classmates better.
Benefit 3:]]> 2019-02-27 03:02:06 UTC https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335728114 Skyline & Luge Adventure liyuy27 https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335728151 Group Members: Shermaine Sa, Vivian, Elijah, Wayne
1.Benefit 1: Through this skyline and luge adventure, one can overcome their fear of heights as this ride has elements of heights and an open concept during the skyline segment. 

2.Benefit 2: You can challenge yourself during this skyline and luge adventure as there are 2 different trails available, the jungle trail and the dragon trail. The dragon trail is easier whilst the jungle trail is slightly more challenging thus, you may choose to challenge yourself by going for the jungle trail.]]> 2019-02-27 03:02:19 UTC https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335728151 Skyline&Luge Advemture - Wen Yi Charmaine You Yuan Seth https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335728171 Benefit 1: Relieves stress because it distracts the students from their exam stress as it is very exciting and fun 



]]> 2019-02-27 03:02:25 UTC https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335728171 SKYLINE LUGE : Priscilla , Sharlize , Zi You , Kaiyi https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335728183 Benefit 1 :overcome fear of heights. In Sec two camp, we realised that many of our classmates have fear of heights. So when they are suspended by the skyride without any walls unlike the cable car therefore they can overcome their fear of heights

]]> 2019-02-27 03:02:30 UTC https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335728183 Sea Aquarium ; Jonna, Caleb, Ludwig and Jing Yi https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335728256 Benefit 1: gives the students more general knowledge regarding the ocean and the different species of marine creatures that might be endangered, this could spark an idea in the students minds like starting a via project in spreading awareness about endangered marine creatures to the public and encourage the public to protect the marine creatures by (for example, not throwing rubbish into the sea.)
Benefit 2: could spark an interest of marine creatures in the students, opening up more job opportunities for the students in the future. For example, marine biologists, divers, etc*
Beenfit 3: when maybe one of the students encounter a dangerous sea creature for example, a box jellyfish, they would be able to differentiate it from harmless jellyfishes, thus keeping themselves safe and potentially saving their lives.]]> 2019-02-27 03:02:49 UTC https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335728256 SEA aquarium Jia Yi Xing Yu Qi Yin & Jun Zhe swnssoe https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335728272 Benefit 1: Learn about the largest collection of rays and 1000 species of fish and marine animals. 
Reason 1: Prior knowledge for upcoming ALP project.
Benefit 2: Learn about pollution, sustainable seafood and what you can do to protect our seas.
Reason 2: Help to play a part in protecting the sea and marine creatures.
Benefit 3: Learn about endangered and unique animals like Hammerhead Sharks, Giant Moray Eel, Reef Manta Ray, Groupers and Giant Crabs.
Reason 3: Not to consume or use products from these endangered species. 

Fun factor:Able to feel the intense thrill of being circled by hammerhead, silvertip and sandbar sharks,  put yourself inches away from these stealthy marine predators, as you watch in awe from the safety of a customised acrylic enclosure.]]> 2019-02-27 03:02:53 UTC https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335728272 Skyline luge adventure time ;)🙈😇😎 Skyline luge. Stephen Sheemaine C. Chloe & Ethan vikileong16 https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335728326
B1, It teaches children how to control their speed and teaches them to be safe “on the roads” 💁
B2,  it may help the children to spark their interest in driving and teach them to b a better driver ✌️]]> 2019-02-27 03:03:16 UTC https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/335728326 JIAYI AND TEAM nasrullahjenson445 https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/336219603 Proposed activity: Treasure hunt- scan QR code then show a pic of an organism that’s in the aquarium. Will show Mac answers then write the answer on a paper. Which ever team got the highest vote WINS!]]> 2019-02-28 01:22:07 UTC https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/336219603 Luge. Stephen Ethan Chloe shermaine. https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/336221784  Fun factor. It gives the children a thrilling experience as the fast speed gives them the rush of adrenaline they need to feel excited and happy. This kind of emotions excites the children, and not bore them to death.]]> 2019-02-28 01:31:00 UTC https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/336221784 Ocean man(Sea) Aqarium Ljx Siew hui Kaelyn and the best Zekai liyuy27 https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/336223142 Benefit 1: The students get to bond with each other.

Benefit 2: Students gets to see rare species like the archer fish and the silver batfish as it would be their only chance in life to see them in real life since they are rare.

Benefit 3: Gets to learn how ocean creatures adapts to the sea , hunt , what they consume and where that species originated from which would help them in their career choice in the future if they are interested.

Fun fact: The aquarium holds more then 42.8 litres of salt and fresh water , enough to fill more than 17 Olympic Swimming pools

Proposed activities: Students work in pairs , choose a creature that they seen at the aquarium , look up information about that species. Like which part of the world they originated from , what they consume , and find fun facts. Summaries the points and do a power point presentation. This will benefit them when they do future presentations and public speaking by boosting their confidence and improving their language skills.

 
 



]]> 2019-02-28 01:36:17 UTC https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/336223142 Skyline and Luge Yu Shan Yi Qi Rens Jing Yan https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/336224075 Benefit 1:Make you more courageous as it is quite high when we take the skyline so this will be a good opportunity for those who are scared of height to overcome their fear.
Benefit 2:Students can bond with one another as they compete in the friendly match and they can cheer for one another.One might even know their classmates better.
Benefit 3:Exposure to forests and trees:

  • boosts the immune system
  • lowers blood pressure
  • reduces stress
  • improves mood
  • increases ability to focus, even in children with ADHD
  • accelerates recovery from surgery or illness
  • increases energy level
  • improves sleep

Fun Factor: 
Activity:
]]> 2019-02-28 01:40:28 UTC https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/336224075 COMBINED IDEAS adilahab https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/336224298
 
SEA Aquarium
sea aquarium also they have ten diff zones in total which resembles some ocean habitats. such as the red sea and the lakes of east africa, so people wil know how to appreciate these habitats and protect these endangered animals --> elaborate

so going to a sea aquarium can spark an interest in the students to study about marine creatures and they can aspire to be marine biologists, divers, etc* thus opening job opportunities --> have a better idea of potential polytechnic courses

(Not a benefit): they also get to bond together with their friends, hence being able to discuss with each other over these certain marine creatures...?

Fun Factors: 
theres shark encounter, there will be sharks swimming around you and its very thrilling and its safe since the sharks are in an enclosure, it is fun and thrilling as it is dangerous however the idea of getting close to dangerous creatures. --> makes for a unique experience.

Skyline & Luge Adventure
people just finished their mid year exams and they might not have the motivation or energy to study, everyone also gets very competitive --> helps in mental and physical health

they can get over their fear of heights --> give background information

Limited scope/target audience: they can teach the students not to speed too much in the future for example, when they're riding e-scooters (teach them not to speed in the future)

fun factors: our class enjoys fun, the sea aquarium is just another class and its boring. our class is very competitive as well can tell from sec 2 camp, this luge can help us relieve our stress since the mid years just ended and this race would really suit our class --> friendly competition
 
next time talk slower you need to know how i feel :( 



]]> 2019-02-28 01:41:29 UTC https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/336224298 Skyline and luge adventure - Wen Yi Charmaine and You yuan https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/336224827 Benefit 1 : Students are very stressed out about their mid year exams so this adventure could relieve their stress as it is cooling when the wind brushes their faces as if the wind took away their negative thoughts and feelings . And also the luge requires the students to exercise and exercising causes the body release endorphins which acts as a painkiller and it also improve mood.
Benefit 2 : having boosted energy. As most students have a lot of homework as stated earlier, they are probably tired all the time. Having fun and enjoying leisure activities can also help boost your energy levels. Stress and pain are both mentally and physically draining. Taking the time to relax, enjoy yourself, and spend tigme with others doing activities that make you feel like yourself can help you feel less tired, more mentally refreshed/rejuvenated, and more capable. Hence, they can be more focussed in class too.

Benefit 3. The students can bond together and it spreads love and happiness .

Fun fcator : having improved memory concentration. The reduced cortisol levels and increased serotonin levels that come with having fun mean you’ll enjoy a clearer mind and better memory. We all know the feeling of running on autopilot or becoming forgetful when a particularly stressful situation is troubling us. The same phenomenon occurs on a lower-level when it comes to stress. Regularly taking the time to relax and play reduces low-grade stress levels and frees up mental energy.
Activity : students get to ride the luge and there will be 2 different trails they can choose from .
The skyline allows ]]> 2019-02-28 01:44:15 UTC https://padlet.com/adilahab/sitwriting24/wish/336224827