https://padlet.com/carltonmbro2015/2xypes43hjms en-us 2016-03-22 09:43:14 UTC 2016-04-12 09:21:53 UTC hello@padlet.com carltonmbro2015 https://padlet.com/carltonmbro2015/2xypes43hjms/wish/105257471 2016-04-12 08:49:53 UTC https://padlet.com/carltonmbro2015/2xypes43hjms/wish/105257471 perrypaul114 https://padlet.com/carltonmbro2015/2xypes43hjms/wish/105259989 good edit could improve the sound effects ]]> 2016-04-12 09:04:40 UTC https://padlet.com/carltonmbro2015/2xypes43hjms/wish/105259989 https://padlet.com/carltonmbro2015/2xypes43hjms/wish/105260046 very good edit i really enjoyed it and i thought you did a very good job of it very well done!!]]> 2016-04-12 09:05:06 UTC https://padlet.com/carltonmbro2015/2xypes43hjms/wish/105260046 jordan_odgers2012 https://padlet.com/carltonmbro2015/2xypes43hjms/wish/105260347 At 55 sec and 1:14 you need to cut that bit out but you did a great job with the sound effects at the end you could add some music. ]]> 2016-04-12 09:07:05 UTC https://padlet.com/carltonmbro2015/2xypes43hjms/wish/105260347 james_armstrong https://padlet.com/carltonmbro2015/2xypes43hjms/wish/105261799 needed music with in the background to give the story help, possibly needed a bit more edited with in the video but not too bad. ]]> 2016-04-12 09:16:09 UTC https://padlet.com/carltonmbro2015/2xypes43hjms/wish/105261799 mattyratcliffe4 https://padlet.com/carltonmbro2015/2xypes43hjms/wish/105261900 Seems very quiet until the gun shots start, need background music but looks good bro, well done.]]> 2016-04-12 09:16:40 UTC https://padlet.com/carltonmbro2015/2xypes43hjms/wish/105261900 https://padlet.com/carltonmbro2015/2xypes43hjms/wish/105262094 nice work man]]> 2016-04-12 09:17:59 UTC https://padlet.com/carltonmbro2015/2xypes43hjms/wish/105262094 carltonmbro2015 https://padlet.com/carltonmbro2015/2xypes43hjms/wish/105262185 Thank you for all positive feedback and I will do my best to Improve my video ]]> 2016-04-12 09:18:38 UTC https://padlet.com/carltonmbro2015/2xypes43hjms/wish/105262185