(With respect to....../ When it comes to)... xu hướng giống nhau

Topic sentence: bao quát được cả hai chiều là tuổi và độ khó khăn --> (st decreases as st increases)

Câu tiếp theo: In details...... nói từng phần trăm cụ thể của các nhóm tuổi

Câu tiếp: Similarly..... nói về vấn đề accommodation

BODY 2: LEARNING THE LOCAL LANGUAGE

In contrast,......as people become older ..... they are more likely to......

Specifically.........

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• Nhóm tuổi --> Gộp theo xu hướng (già thì thích cgi hơn/ ít thích gì hơn)

• Một số cách miêu tả nhóm tuổi

  • Young people aged 18 to 34

  • those aged over 55

  • the 18 - 34 age group

  • those aged between 35 and 54

  • the youngest and the middle age group/ the oldest age group

  --> Avoid repetition

The bar chart illustrates the problems which people FROM DIFFERENT AGE GROUPS often deal with them WHEN THEY live IN A foreign countRY.

Overall, the problems FACED BY THESE AGE GROUPS VARY people deal with at variety of age groups. It CAN ALSO BE seen from the graph that people ageD over 55 FIND learning THE local language FAR MORE DIFFICULT THAN THE OTHERS.

TASK 2

People hold different views about whether people will continue buying newspapers or not because of (N phrs) the emergence of digital news or worried about online news.

In my view, people will prefer reading news online to purchasing traditional newspapers. /

However, it is my view that it depends on the personal preferences when it comes to the source of information.

On the one hand, there are several reasons why people still prefer print newspapers.

• online news source are not always available.

• Older generation ---> unable technology

on the other hand, there are a lot of reasons why people no longer need to buy newspapers

• real-time updates of what is going on across the globe instead of going directly to bookstores

• Suitable for various people (young people, people with busy schedule)

However, depends on personal preferences

• value reliability --> newspapers

• value accessibility and convenience --> online news