https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos RELA en-us 2018-04-16 18:19:37 UTC 2025-11-10 21:06:03 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Growing.png https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252754834 Students were more engaged and were willing to write more in a short time period. Better text evidence to support claims.]]> 2018-04-17 19:39:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252754834 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252754948 some students want to do well
students became impassioned about an argumentative topic]]> 2018-04-17 19:39:47 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252754948 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252754997 Many fewer students are in the lowest tiers of writing -- students are at least showing some development during writing. ]]> 2018-04-17 19:39:55 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252754997 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755041 Students were able to write a claim, and identify evidence to support the claim. ]]> 2018-04-17 19:40:03 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755041 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755084 My lower students did attempt to write a well constructed topic sentence. I also noticed that my students are explaining their evidence.

]]> 2018-04-17 19:40:10 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755084 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755133 Students were more aware of providing evidence to support their claim. They, however need to work on explaining the evidence and how it supports their claim. ]]> 2018-04-17 19:40:17 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755133 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755155 Students still need to explain their evidence better. More elaboration. More insight and reasons "why" evidence supports their claim. 

]]> 2018-04-17 19:40:20 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755155 allison_clark1 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755193 Students improved on their abilities of choosing appropriate textual evidence.]]> 2018-04-17 19:40:27 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755193 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755268 Students were able to back up claim with evidence]]> 2018-04-17 19:40:39 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755268 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755312 2018-04-17 19:40:46 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755312 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755443 Students were able to compare texts and incorporate evidence. At the beginning of the year, most only summarized one text. Now they were able to compare and give specific quotes. ]]> 2018-04-17 19:41:05 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755443 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755523 writing COMPLETE sentence
making better use of transitions

]]> 2018-04-17 19:41:17 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755523 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755524 Students in general explain their ideas and evidence a bit, but need to elaborate further. Students also need to explicitly tie their explanations to their evidence. ]]> 2018-04-17 19:41:17 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755524 allison_clark1 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755525 Students still struggle with explaining what the evidence has to do with their answer.]]> 2018-04-17 19:41:17 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755525 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755574 2018-04-17 19:41:24 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755574 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755619 Identifying credible evidence and making valid arguments]]> 2018-04-17 19:41:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755619 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755621 Students struggled to categorize their evidence into reasons.]]> 2018-04-17 19:41:31 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755621 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755671 A big reason our numbers look so poor is because we have a great number of students we aren't allowed to "count" for our SLO. I have 26 top level students who would all be proficient on this task. Because Fischer and I split this class, their numbers do not appear anywhere in our data. ]]> 2018-04-17 19:41:40 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755671 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755874 Students are actually learning how to embed evidence. That makes me proud! ]]> 2018-04-17 19:42:17 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755874 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755986 My CC class struggles to make a full paragraph that includes a topic sentence, evidence and explanation of evidence. ]]> 2018-04-17 19:42:39 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252755986 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756019 Even though students are attempting to explain or elaborate their evidence, I am only getting a one sentence response. ]]> 2018-04-17 19:42:45 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756019 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756036 The students were able to compare the texts (in one text they talk about ... & in the other text they talk about....). They were able to use transitions really well. ]]> 2018-04-17 19:42:47 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756036 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756079 We still have a long way to go when it comes to their writing skills and abilities. They don't know the basics, and it affects how well they are writing. Many of them are too afraid to write for fear they will mess up. ]]> 2018-04-17 19:42:55 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756079 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756244 Students struggled with fully explaining the reasoning their use behind their textual evidence. Lower students also had trouble forming full paragraphs that fully connected to the prompt. ]]> 2018-04-17 19:43:20 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756244 sjones0788 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756309 Students used direct evidence from the texts in the Mid Year when they had not done that in the Baseline]]> 2018-04-17 19:43:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756309 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756333 Although the growth wasn't huge, it did show upward movement and improvement. ]]> 2018-04-17 19:43:34 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756333 sjones0788 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756597 Students did not answer all parts of the question--or seemed confused by the question]]> 2018-04-17 19:44:15 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756597 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756650 The students struggled with finding the evidence that supported their points/ choosing evidence that would help them with their writing. They don't elaborate. ]]> 2018-04-17 19:44:25 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756650 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756712 Evidence is more aligned with claim, and claims are more complex and thoughtful. More students have appropriate, if not on-target, responses.]]> 2018-04-17 19:44:34 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756712 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756728 Students can find evidence to support their very distinct opinions]]> 2018-04-17 19:44:36 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756728 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756925


]]> 2018-04-17 19:45:11 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252756925 allison_clark1 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252757163 I agree with Martin...not counting 100 students per grade level will skew our numbers.]]> 2018-04-17 19:45:48 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252757163 https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252757181 Idea development/explanation of evidence still lacking in most cases.]]> 2018-04-17 19:45:51 UTC https://padlet.com/sjones0788/2tp3qcjbbkos/wish/252757181