https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc en-us 2018-02-12 01:10:21 UTC 2025-10-04 20:55:25 UTC hello@padlet.com rkanani https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230443532 + You had a really interesting hook! It made me want to read your book!
- You can improve on speaking with a little more expression to make your presentation more interesting to the audience. ]]> 2018-02-12 01:13:28 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230443532 29jacbre https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852708
Something he did well was telling some interesting parts from the  book so people can be interested and want to read it.something he needs to improve on is  putting more feelings into his voice.   ]]> 2018-02-12 22:17:19 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852708 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852721 2018-02-12 22:17:22 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852721 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852733 +What he did well was that he said detail from what he said and he talked about what the book was about.
-Something that he could improve is to say an example from the book and could relate it to his life.]]> 2018-02-12 22:17:25 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852733 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852735 + Something he did well was in the introduction. 
Something that he needs to work on is speaking more clearly and have a hook ]]> 2018-02-12 22:17:26 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852735 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852739 +He gave  good,specific examples about what happened in the past and what is happening in the present.- He can improve on telling us how the kid looks like in the book

]]> 2018-02-12 22:17:27 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852739 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852740 Something he did well was that he gave  specific detalies]]> 2018-02-12 22:17:27 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852740 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852743 One think that he did well was telling all the characters names ]]> 2018-02-12 22:17:28 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852743 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852744 You had a good book that would make any kid want to read it but you should work on giving more details about the book but not spoil the whole book. 

]]> 2018-02-12 22:17:28 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852744 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852745 +He did good on the hook.- he can work on his expershion ]]> 2018-02-12 22:17:29 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852745 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852771 Something he  did good was that he was not looking somewhere els.Something that he did bad was he did not let us see the book that mouch . ]]> 2018-02-12 22:17:37 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852771 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852786 What he did well was that we understand all the things he was saying he can tell how the kid looks.

]]> 2018-02-12 22:17:40 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852786 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852797 Something he did well is that we could understand what he was saying. And something that he could improve on is to talk with more expression ]]> 2018-02-12 22:17:43 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852797 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852804 Something he did well was  speaking loud and clear.
Something he can improve on was expereshon.]]> 2018-02-12 22:17:45 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852804 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852824 + He did well on his summary,and his hook of the book.
- He needs to improve on sounding more clearly because i almost couldn't hear him]]> 2018-02-12 22:17:53 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852824 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852863 +Some he did well is that he speaked loud and he did it with out a paper
- Something he needs to improve on is expression ]]> 2018-02-12 22:18:06 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852863 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852878 Something he did well was he spoke loudly and clear als]]> 2018-02-12 22:18:11 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852878 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852951 + Something he did well was that he introduced us to the book he was going to be talking about.
- Something he needs to improve on is that he should have a hook

]]> 2018-02-12 22:18:32 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230852951 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230853005  ]]> 2018-02-12 22:18:51 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230853005 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230853015  +Something he did well was that he looked at us and he  speaked  loud and clear.
 - Something he needs to improve is to add more details.]]> 2018-02-12 22:18:53 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230853015 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230853070 +Something his did well with looking at the "Audience" when he gives details from the book!]]> 2018-02-12 22:19:07 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230853070 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230853252 + Something he needs to work so is to explain more.Something he did well was when he was he was looking at the camera. ]]> 2018-02-12 22:19:57 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230853252 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230853605 Something he did well was giving detail and and speaking clearly. Something he did bad was nothing ]]> 2018-02-12 22:21:41 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230853605 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230853635 2018-02-12 22:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230853635 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230853689 Something he did well is he said everything from the book and some thing he can inprove on is more lighting]]> 2018-02-12 22:22:12 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/230853689 https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/231279038 2018-02-13 20:25:21 UTC https://padlet.com/rkanani/2t11e88itcxc/wish/231279038