A Dummie s Guide feedback on scene 7, 8 and 9 by sébastien wierny https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi Fait avec panache en-us 2019-02-19 13:02:29 UTC 2025-11-16 15:17:52 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png All lines (there's not that much of them) that make fun of names should be deleted. Rene, Franklin, nor Bedievre are funny names and finding an adequately funny name that would fit into the script is almost impossible = the script is bad written when making fun of the names. https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561245 2019-02-21 10:39:53 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561245 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561254 Improve:
- attitude of certain people 
- voice projection 
- René' s name, final decision (no we can't just cut the lines or let people use vulgar Czech nemes) 
- level of dramatic involvement, overcoming feelings of awkwardness when performing (especially during the kiss scenes) 
- logistics 

]]> 2019-02-21 10:39:55 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561254 I think we should change Rene’s name https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561256 2019-02-21 10:39:55 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561256 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561260 Some people schould care more about the play]]> 2019-02-21 10:39:56 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561260 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561365 Renes name should be Sud Hoven]]> 2019-02-21 10:40:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561365 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561372 Suggestion for Rene’s name: Sudhoven]]> 2019-02-21 10:40:32 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561372 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561429 We should improve voice intonation to make it more realistic ]]> 2019-02-21 10:40:47 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561429 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561436 René’s name should be something funny, we should not cross out the lines]]> 2019-02-21 10:40:48 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561436 Improve krocan1918 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561442 Rendalek's name, for example Sudhoven, that's brilliant imo
Then also voice interaction and how and where are wr on stage, very nice]]> 2019-02-21 10:40:50 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561442 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561453 voice projection]]> 2019-02-21 10:40:53 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561453 What should we do in order to improve? https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561460 - we should focus more on positions of the characters on the stage so we will already get used to it
- we should begin performing without the script so we start working on gestures
- we should bear in mind that we have to act persuasively every single second we spend on stage not only when we are speaking (even reactions are very important)]]> 2019-02-21 10:40:55 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561460 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561488  we should work on the setting. Who stands where amd when. ]]> 2019-02-21 10:41:03 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561488 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561585 Rene Sudhoven]]> 2019-02-21 10:41:29 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561585 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561602 We shouldn’t delete the lines]]> 2019-02-21 10:41:32 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561602 Start to memorize lines for these scenes https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561696 memorize the whole play]]> 2019-02-21 10:41:51 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561696 Opinion https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561726 I think we should improve our voice projection and SOMEONE should change their attitude]]> 2019-02-21 10:41:58 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561726 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561734 Whe have to work on the props and the positions of the characters ]]> 2019-02-21 10:42:00 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561734 We should rename Rene to Sudhoven, Karl Gustav Sudhoven krocan1918 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561767 2019-02-21 10:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561767 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561772 We have to improve voice delivery of the text]]> 2019-02-21 10:42:07 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561772 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561882 We should make clear what the name of René would be]]> 2019-02-21 10:42:23 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561882 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561898 Agent 2 and Uncle Vladimir’s names should be different, Franklin and Emily is boring]]> 2019-02-21 10:42:26 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333561898 Let Renes name be still Rene https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333562002 2019-02-21 10:42:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333562002 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333562072 Some people should put more emotions into their acting]]> 2019-02-21 10:43:03 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333562072 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333562145 Rene’s name could be Prokop Dvere too

]]> 2019-02-21 10:43:18 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333562145 Lets get this 🅱️Read https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333562221 The fastest way to decide what to do about René’s name is to put TWO certain people for a  fair box match. This would be the quickest resolution]]> 2019-02-21 10:43:38 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333562221 Sudhoven - Rene's name https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333562343 2019-02-21 10:44:08 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333562343 Uncle Vlad’s real name should be something more russian https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333562537 2019-02-21 10:44:56 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333562537 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333562647 Rene’s name needs to be imrpoved]]> 2019-02-21 10:45:28 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333562647 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333563124 It does not have to be the name René that it's funny. The reference to real life (breaking the 3rd wall) is important and the humour can be found in the fact that René's notoriously famous even to the President of the United States. ]]> 2019-02-21 10:47:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333563124 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333569050 Let René's name be René.
Let's keep the real name of Uncle Vlad Franklin as well. Too complicated and unnecessary to change it]]> 2019-02-21 11:12:50 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/333569050 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/335272400 ☭]]> 2019-02-26 09:48:57 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/335272400 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/335273113 Rene's name should be Sudhoven]]> 2019-02-26 09:51:23 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/335273113 Okay let's go krocan1918 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/335273433 2019-02-26 09:52:34 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/335273433 卍 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/335273498 2019-02-26 09:52:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/335273498 krocan1918 https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/335586716 2019-02-26 19:12:11 UTC https://padlet.com/sebastien_wierny/2sxhmb6s96bi/wish/335586716