Personal Narratives by Elizabeth Blose https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn Takeaways en-us 2020-11-09 14:21:50 UTC 2020-11-09 14:36:28 UTC hello@padlet.com My partner has a lot of descriptive language. https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904305288 2020-11-09 14:28:04 UTC https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904305288 I really like how descriptive it is, and how they are really good at focusing on one moment. https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904308112 2020-11-09 14:28:38 UTC https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904308112 The First Time I Met My Dog https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904308194 Sawyer was good at expressing which dog was bitey and which one was gentle. I also liked that she included descritpive words. ]]> 2020-11-09 14:28:39 UTC https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904308194 My partner jumped from idea to idea instead of staying focused on the main topic. https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904308821 2020-11-09 14:28:46 UTC https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904308821 My partner ioannis did a great job on descriptive language and I got really interested in his story. https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904309155 His story was really interesting and I really like his story so good job ioannis!!]]> 2020-11-09 14:28:50 UTC https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904309155 owen https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904314196 my partner said adding dialogue was good ]]> 2020-11-09 14:29:46 UTC https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904314196 It should be longer and have a little more descriptive words. https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904314404 2020-11-09 14:29:48 UTC https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904314404 My partner had words that helped me visualize what each item looked like. https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904315767 2020-11-09 14:30:06 UTC https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904315767 I think my personal narrative could have used more descriptive language after looking at my partners work. https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904320316 2020-11-09 14:31:03 UTC https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904320316 My partner was very descriptive and I felt like I was in her story how she tells it. https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904320398 2020-11-09 14:31:04 UTC https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904320398 I think that he could have done just a little bit more descriptive language but maybe some more capitalization and there could have been more detail to his story and overall it was ok https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904325359 2020-11-09 14:32:06 UTC https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904325359 My personal narrative has a beginning, middle, and end (so did my partner. https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904326247 2020-11-09 14:32:17 UTC https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904326247 owen https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904328639 my partner needs to work on adding descriptive]]> 2020-11-09 14:32:46 UTC https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904328639 My Closing https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904331731 Sawyer helped me think of a closing.]]> 2020-11-09 14:33:25 UTC https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904331731 My partner had a lot things that were spelled wrong. https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904340742 2020-11-09 14:35:11 UTC https://padlet.com/blosee/2sg8kgno3fx74zyn/wish/904340742