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      <title>Improvement Feedback by Amellia</title>
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      <description>Emilie Ancillary and Trailer</description>
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      <pubDate>2017-03-09 11:05:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Maddy</title>
         <author>sindle9536</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/sindle9536/2saczir570kp/wish/158921784</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I think that the poster is very conventional and the improvements appeal to me largely. The magazine is also more conventional and engages the audiences. The trailer is also eye catching and slowly builds up the tension and the music is well put together.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-03-09 11:06:47 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Clarzih</title>
         <author>sindle9536</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/sindle9536/2saczir570kp/wish/158922112</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>The poster is very conventional and the edited of the fingers and the eye is well used and attracts the audience. The magazine is also really interesting and the cover lines appeal to me. The trailer is fast paced and full of intense scenes</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-03-09 11:08:33 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ella</title>
         <author>sindle9536</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/sindle9536/2saczir570kp/wish/158922275</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I believe the poster is very appealing especially with the colour scheme, this is also carried on onto the magazine. The magazine is conventionally laid out and grabs the audience. The trailer is also well established and intriguing.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-03-09 11:09:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jordan</title>
         <author>sindle9536</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/sindle9536/2saczir570kp/wish/158922461</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I really enjoy the poster and makes me want to see the movie due to the simplistic but engaging layout and colours. The monochrome image against the vibrant red really appeals to me. I also like the magazine due to the cover lines and the way in which the magazine presents itself. Lastly the trailer has lots of short snappy scenes which grabs my attention</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-03-09 11:10:35 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Improvements</title>
         <author>sindle9536</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/sindle9536/2saczir570kp/wish/158922704</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>What can I improve?</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-03-09 11:11:59 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>What do you like?</title>
         <author>sindle9536</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/sindle9536/2saczir570kp/wish/158922774</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Poster, Magazine and Trailer</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-03-09 11:12:13 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Poster</title>
         <author>sindle9536</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/sindle9536/2saczir570kp/wish/158922854</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>The poster could have more logos and a clearer billing block. The image is well shown however it could have a neater layout around the eye and seem more realistic. The date could also be more simple and less bold, although still bold enough to catch the eye just not overpowering.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-03-09 11:12:42 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Magazine</title>
         <author>sindle9536</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/sindle9536/2saczir570kp/wish/158923122</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>The magazine has very clear cover lines however these could be enlarged. The magazine could also look less cluttered and the slogan clearer. The puff could also be more eye ctaching.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-03-09 11:14:01 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Trailer</title>
         <author>sindle9536</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/sindle9536/2saczir570kp/wish/158923428</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>The title scenes should be more conventional and have less of them. The production logo and the cast scene also needs to be added. The sound could also have more effect and build up even more tension by rearranging it. Finally the trailer could also be more smother between transitions and build up enigma.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-03-09 11:15:19 UTC</pubDate>
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